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Monster Production

By belowzerogames

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CategoryRankScoreCount
Coolness359
Theme4183.59
Humor4492.93
Mood8292.70
Graphics8342.72
Fun8412.63
Innovation8592.55
Overall9072.75

Comments

jphelps 2015-08-26 03:04

solid game. walks really slow. would prob be better if you could walk faster down those long hallways. nice job though

marianomiii 2015-08-26 03:07

The monster animations and the human screams are pretty hilarious. It's a simple game but did make my laugh.

jawesome 2015-08-26 03:08

Very good graphics!

onlyslightly 2015-08-26 03:08

Super cute game! I loved that you 3d modeled some of the sprites. It got me nostalgic. Not a lot of games have that same aesthetic anymore.

justinooncx 2015-08-26 03:12

Interesting game, although I teleported back to the start for no reason at all a few times. Not sure what the scare button does, since the sleepers wake up when I go near them anyway. Even through walls.

belowzerogames 2015-08-26 03:13

Heh I have to agree that some of those hallways are pretty long , going to do a deluxe version yet have some ideas to add some more depth and I need more variety in the furniture :-)

belowzerogames 2015-08-26 03:14

Oh and for those folks asking about the teleporting , that's your coffee and lunch breaks every 2 hours :-)

steboots 2015-08-26 03:55

I'm standing on your head, are you scared yet? Haha, good concept, long hallways, controls were a little touchy at times, trying to walk through "tight" doorways got me stuck. Like the idea.

belowzerogames 2015-08-26 04:06

Has anyone played long enough (10 days) to collect your Monster pay cheque ? :-)

spotco 2015-08-26 04:08

The music was funny, felt like I was in Monster's Inc. I wish there was an indication for which kids I had already scared. Good concept but needs some more time to improve. Keep it up!

collaboration 2015-08-26 11:07

Cool entry, controls are not so comfortable as it should be, I guess, but overall - very cool game!

belowzerogames 2015-08-27 00:45

Ya I'm going to do an update and add WASD as that seems popular as well :-)

razoric 2015-08-27 03:47

Nice entry!

thomcc 2015-08-27 05:04

collision detection against the walls is rough (just from the feel it looks like you're bailing out of the movement loop when you hit a wall, but if you just stop for that axis it works better and lets you smoothly travel along walls)

i thought it was a nice take on the theme though and liked the art

paulopn 2015-08-27 05:06

Pretty fun game, it made me really excited to play it, but unfortunately I can't seem to scare people! Pressing space bar near them, only two reacted with a scream. Not sure if I'm doing something wrong. Anyways, graphics are super cute, the music is nice and I loved the monster!

belowzerogames 2015-08-27 11:54

Ya I think I need to tighten up the bounding box a bit on the collision detection. You can only scare the sleepers once per day so if a sleeper doesn't scream after a few tries he's likely a obj_deepsleeper ;)

belowzerogames 2015-08-28 05:18

Tonight I done a little update to the game the original version is still there but from the feedback I added version 1.0.0.1. Added WASD keys, smaller bounding box, speed power up :-)

xanjos 2015-08-28 14:05

Not sure if I needed to be within a certain distance to scare people since going too close doesn't work and I'm pretty sure I've run into a collision bug where I seem to be blocked by an invisible wall for a few seconds but I like the concept.

belowzerogames 2015-08-29 19:50

Ya I know there's some issues with some of the door objects mainly becuase my collision box was a too big. You do need to be a certain distance from the sleeper in order to scare them :-)

dickpoelen 2015-08-29 20:28

I like the gameplay concept, but could use a bit more feedback on what I'm doing exactly. Love the freaky monster by the way

belowzerogames 2015-08-30 16:34

Heh for those interested I post an updated html5 version here --> http://www.belowzerogames.ca/MonsterPro.html

roaringcatgames 2015-08-30 19:44

I like the concept, but I couldn't really tell if I was scaring anyone, or if the animation was bugged when I got too close. The animation for the monster is my favorite part of the game for sure.

brightstar 2015-09-04 08:30

It was difficult to figure out how to scare the people. Maybe if there were some kind of feedback on where to stand or when the best time to scare them would be. Neat game.

belowzerogames 2015-09-04 12:05

Well you just walk up to the bed and hit the spacebar a few times :) and the ones that wake up will get scared the others who are deep sleepers will just sleep away. So if someone doesn't wake up right away you better move to the next bed before you run out of time

wertle 2015-09-09 04:07

I think there's a super interesting premise here and there's a lot you can do to push the promise of the setup (scaring people being a blue-collar working job for a monster) in the actual game itself. For example, I got confused about the coffee breaks and didn't understand why I was getting reset. If you made it super clear that that's what was happening, it could be pretty funny because union-mandated coffee break is actually disrupting your progress. I had a hard time telling if I actually scared someone. Sometimes they would scream, sometimes they wouldn't, I think if your game is all about scaring people awake then that's an area where you could afford to spend lots of feedback and polish - basically prioritize the core interactions of your game to make them feel really good. Even though there were objects in all the rooms, it felt kind of abstract and maze-like. Since part of the charm of the premise is the monster being in a real human world, it would be worth it to try and find a way to make the level feel like a real space. Is it a hotel? Is it a boarding house? What are the functions of the rooms? It doesn't have to be hyper realistic, but just a little bit of logic can help you dress them appropriately and make it feel like a more coherent space (would help with navigation too, because I could be like "I've been in the kitchen already" and so on). The game was quite long and I didn't get much further into Day 2 so I don't know if anything different happens in later days. The base idea has promise to be really charming, just find ways to push it in the rest of the game. Nice work!

belowzerogames 2015-09-09 04:10

Heh thanks I watched the stream was really cool seeing one of my games streamed , first time ever :D

drzanuff 2015-09-10 00:04

very cool game, the art is not good, but i think the idea is nice. Keep it on!!

belowzerogames 2015-09-10 02:03

Well I built everything by myself so if the art isn't perfect oh well

belowzerogames 2015-09-13 17:11

I just posted version 1.0.0.3 on Itchio with some cool stuff thanks to suggestions on here :-)