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TLDR OTT - An Unconventional Weapon

By wooltech

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CategoryRankScoreCount
Coolness353
Mood2223.37
Humor2793.26
Theme4003.52
Innovation5283.14
Fun5803.00
Overall5833.14

Comments

paperblurt 2015-04-20 06:18

So I like the fact that I can both as intended, but also just dream something else. Nice touch.

hissssssssss 2015-04-21 07:56

I liked that this had a lot of different paths and endings, but I think the story lost a bit of coherence because of how many different settings and scenarios it tried to cover.
Also there's a bug on the page for putting on your suit: a set injured = True shows up as regular text.

kabutakogames 2015-04-21 11:52

Probably one of my favourite entries! I like how each thread had something happening - and I didn't feel like I was missing out by not taking one option or the other

dyfer 2015-04-21 17:33

Haha, a little bit frustrated by the visual part but story is interesting. I wish there is more game like this one in the submission list.

techblogogy 2015-04-22 19:36

I love text adventure game, this one has quite a lot of choices and outcomes. This was very fun, fantastic job!

dkoding 2015-04-22 19:38

I just started enjoying the story and it ended. It would be better with fewer longer stories I think. But still a good game. A little unsure about the theme match.

2r 2015-04-22 19:45

I like concept of this game.

kyyrma 2015-04-22 20:02

Lots of options, lots of small stories. I can appreciate pulling off that much written content in the time period you described. Nice work.

minibobbo 2015-04-23 01:29

I'll be back to try some of the other endings, but my cats rule the house also.

emmelineprufrock 2015-04-23 04:34

Lots of different paths and endings, which can be difficult with this amount of time. I really like your node map cover art too.

rialgar 2015-04-23 13:21

I found three or four basic storylines, and I think I got most of the endings. The super-villain one makes we want to play Overlord XD.

nomys_tempar 2015-04-23 15:04

Your game is very cool, I like all the paths and endings. It's quite challenging to wrote so much endings for me.
I wrote a textual adventure too and your cover art is better than mine ;)

xanjos 2015-04-23 17:21

Probably one of the best Twine games I've played so far. Every possible story path was absolutely interesting.

rjhelms 2015-04-23 20:48

Really impressive how much there is here. I like that the different stories all approach the theme differently.

landosystems 2015-04-24 00:32

Would love to see more of these. Great job.

mantlair 2015-05-01 14:48

It was fun pressing 4 over and over again B) Only found 4-5 endings but it was fun enough i will probably play it again.

chaoseed 2015-05-01 15:08

Oh damn, I got Cthulhu'd!

And then I was saved by my cuddly owners.

I guess to get the full effect I need to play through and get a whole bunch of endings. Still, though, I can tell there's some good work here. I like the mood and the bits of humor in the writing. :)

spin-down 2015-05-01 17:02

I liked this alot. It was nicely written and had some intresting choices that lead the story well.