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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | Axelle Desquilbet's comment | |
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| May 1 13:41:59 | Trains and Factories | ♥ 2 | Conveyor belt games are one of my favourite type of games, I can spend hours on them without noticing. However, what keeps me from doing so with your game is the sound design, I find the voices quite annoying, and the fact that it is almost the only sound in the game is too bad. I had a hard time figuring out how to play, and what were the cities (at first I thought it was where you could put your factories). When I undertood all of this, I had fun at first, but the voices were too loud and annoying, I wish I could disable them. You put prices in the upgrades and cities, which is nice, but it's too bad you didn't do the same for the extracting factories and assembling factories. I didn't know what the warehouse were for at first, and I spend quite a lot of money before noticing it was only for your own properties, not somewhere you could put all the thing you extrated to send them later. Also, your resources were difficulte to tell appart, especialy between iron and coal, be careful about that and use different shapes as much as possible to help people (espacially color blind people) to recognise resources. At first I was frustrated that assemblies had on way out that couldn't be moved, but later I thought it was actually an interting challenging feature. However, I may be a little harsh in my feedbacks, but I think you did quite a good job for 48h by your own, and with a few updates I may play your game a little longer ! | |
| May 1 14:01:19 | 19m 20s | Mt. Deliverest | ♥ 8 | Really fun to play, however it demands too much skills for me, I'm stuck right before the end because of the timer. Your music loop has a "click" in the menu, it's the only thing that really bothers me. You did a great job overall ! |
| May 1 14:35:01 | 33m 42s | Tiny Tube Stories | ♥ 1 | Really sweet ! I found that the blocked pipe was a little difficulte to undertand, there should be some hints that only the grandma can deliver to this person (I'm not giving a name to avoid spoiler). With more juice, maybe little scenes with the characters in the building, and more missions, it would be a really fun game that I would buy ! Nice concept, good job ! |
| May 1 14:51:12 | 16m 11s | dEVILery | ♥ 0 | The sound design really made me laugh "wiiiii" XD It's really short, but it's not too bad, it really reminds me of DS's mario 64 bob-bombe mini game ! Is there a victory screen ? I didn't manage to have one |
| May 1 14:56:57 | 5m 45s | AWOOoooo! Delivering your soul to the forest... .. . . . . Or Not.!? | ♥ 2 | Really love the sound design and the little advertisment at the end, it reminds me of the choice film in stanley parable ! |
| May 1 15:08:31 | 11m 34s | Drop It | ♥ 1 | I really had a hard time with the sound of the plane, I felt like someone was mowing the grass next to my desk. However, I replayed several times to make a better score I think the game needs some balance, but it's a quick game that's fun to play. |
| May 1 15:34:09 | 25m 38s | deLIVERY | ♥ 2 | When I click on the link I have a white page Capture d’écran 2023-05-01 173335.jpg |
| May 1 15:37:06 | 2m 57s | NINJA DELIVERY | ♥ 0 | Can't acces the page either |
| May 1 15:41:28 | 4m 22s | House on Time | ♥ 2 | I love the art, it's really funny ! I can't get hit by cars, they just push me off screen, and I didn't know the controls to deliver the package at the end (I figured out by click random keys, but I can't remember which one it was), it would be nice to at least wrote the keys on this page ! |
| May 1 15:54:09 | 12m 41s | Livraisons | ♥ 0 | I think the cart is a little slow, it felt like I was pushing something really heavy It was too bad I couldn't pick up the little cube once they fell, however it's a nice little mecanism made in 48 hours ! |
| May 1 16:00:09 | 6m 00s | Fast Parcel Service | ♥ 1 | Nice game, it's really cool you embeded it on your itch page ! Even if you do the same thing over and over, you're not bored because the truck configuration changes, nice work ! |
| May 1 16:07:27 | 7m 18s | Stand and Deliver | ♥ 2 | I understood it was a turn per turn fight but I didn't know if my actions were doing something or not, I tried a little more but it didn't seem to have an end |
| May 1 16:13:12 | 5m 45s | Hat Game | ♥ 0 | I can't test this right now, so I'm leaving a comment to be sure to note you once I could print and test your game ! |
| May 1 16:16:33 | 3m 21s | Yours always, Delittah | ♥ 1 | The link doesn't work for me neither |
| May 1 16:26:07 | 9m 34s | Wonky Bots | ♥ 1 | I won :) Capture d’écran 2023-05-01 182252.jpg The robots are cute and it was fun to play, I really wish it was longer ! (thanks for the zqsd and an actual escape button !) |
| May 1 17:19:46 | 53m 39s | Fresh'n Hot | ♥ 1 | Your embeded link does not work Capture d’écran 2023-05-01 191928.jpg (and it seems like itch.io can't show the embeded game too) |
| May 1 17:46:38 | 26m 52s | Please Mr. Postman | ♥ 1 | It's really nice and could really fit on mobile device ! However I had a hard time figuring out where the target was and my own angle and strength Good job anyway ! |
| May 1 18:02:53 | 16m 15s | Deliver Him to Derek | ♥ 2 | I had a hard time trying to move, I think for this kind of gameplay a mouse button with highlited tiles works better It looks like you had a fun time thinking about the bacstory and your chara design, it's pretty cool ! |
| May 1 18:47:42 | 44m 49s | Witch Night Delivery Service | ♥ 1 | Wow ! It's really complete with a lot of features and intresting mecanism, great job ! |
| May 1 19:21:16 | 33m 34s | Dungeon Delivery | ♥ 1 | I couldn't manage to deliver a thing because the jump was really low, however it looks nice and the graphics are pretty cool ! |
| May 1 19:33:12 | 11m 56s | Forklift-em-up | ♥ 3 | Really juicy and fun ! I find it a little hard, I think it would be better with more possibilities to move. However, you did a great job ! |
| May 2 12:03:22 | 16h 30m | The Infernal Trail | ♥ 2 | I had a hard time when the ennemies started to spawn : it's difficult to think of a direction and avoid ennemies at the same time. It's like trying to solve a puzzle while people keep comming and try to punch you and the puzzle box. Also, the road placement had some bugs, sometimes I spammed the space bar, but it did nothing. The fact that control where the wagon will go when they are several path is quite frustrating too. For now it's too hard for me, and I'm not sure if I saw all the features. it's too bad because I think the idea is intresting. |
| May 2 19:01:47 | 6h 58m | Drony Delivery | ♥ 2 | The art is cute and the concept is nice ! However I found some bugs, sometimes the grid don't fall, and the grass at the bottom right hides the command. It's already really nice, but it would be great with those bugs fixed ! |
| May 2 19:42:24 | 40m 37s | Superfetch Dog | ♥ 4 | At first I was like "Oh that's a cute little game !", and then you rip my heart out... Please do it again |
| May 2 20:03:13 | 20m 49s | Dear friend | ♥ 2 | Beautiful art and audio ! I think the tweeting sound was a little too present and repetitive, and the game is very challenging, however you learn fast what to do and I had a lot of fun, even if I wasn't able to finish it (yet). Good job ! |
| May 2 20:15:17 | 12m 04s | Gecko's Deliverance | ♥ 4 | This reminds me of some missions in AOE, it's really cool you did this much in such a short time ! The menu could be a little more polished, and the game could be balanced a little more, however I thought it was really nice ! |
