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YearLDThemeGameDivisionRankOvFuInThGrAuHuMoCo
201429Beneath the SurfaceIndigestioncompo4593.273.483.173.572.781.943.863.0640

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Comments by Artless

LD29 — Beneath the Surface

Wormhunter by Thorig 2014-05-02T18:11:00

This game is perfect! I don't know how you could expand it upon what it is. I feel like I could only like it less if it were longer.

Fullmoon by kogyblack 2014-04-30T05:17:00

Your audio and graphics are great. I actually don't think you are that far off of the theme by using a werewolf.

Beneath the surface is a human!

P.F.G - Portable Forcepoint Generator by gabbsson 2014-05-02T17:35:00

Your second level may be your most difficult. I would move it to the end of the game at this point.

Operation Blind October by Jyrkface 2014-05-07T05:10:00

It is a constant battle against momentum and gravity that makes it hard to control your character from crashing into objects. Layer on top of that the face that you cannot always see where you are and you are in for a quick death.

Audio matches perfectly and graphics look good when I can see them.

Ant Simulator 2014 by eteeski 2014-05-02T17:12:00

Very atmospheric. This type of game would be great if you were just doing mundane ant things.

SHOT H2O by hugamer 2014-04-30T03:37:00

This idea has a lot of promise! With different enemy types and a little knowledge of where the genre has already been (see Osmos) you could make something great out of this idea!

Bitmite Blitz by Coin Flip Games 2014-04-30T04:52:00

Your tutorial is amazing and well thought out! I really appreciate you taking the time to teach the player about all of your mechanics and making it clear what things do.

Graphics are fun and detailed. I hate bugs though!

Duelo by javierecf 2014-04-30T03:26:00

A lot of great puzzles in here. I would recommend finding a way to better visually indicate what state you are currently in.

Folicular Rustling by 4sap 2014-04-30T05:32:00

Slightly disturbed, slightly hilarious and completely on theme!

The Puddle by lonewookie 2014-04-30T03:04:00

I loved the interesting control scheme and like the way you designed the enemy to be simple and when compounded together they make a more complex challenge.

I couldn't figure out how to get the last key. The brilliant moment is falling into the last puddle. Could it be interesting to have it be tempting and intriguing to make splashing in the preliminary puddles fun and then shock the player for jumping in the last puddle.

Indigestion by Artless 2014-04-30T04:44:00

The worms can be tricky! The require precise timing in order for you to earn that sweet victory screen. ;)

Invasion from Below by StencylTuo 2014-04-30T04:14:00

I think you need to put in a final wave of some sort. To test the players defense grid after they are feeling comfortable. I played this for a solid 20 minutes!

Surface Layered Balls by leddkire 2014-05-02T17:42:00

Solid mechanics and interesting puzzles. There is a great base here.

Masks by lioninthetrees 2014-04-30T04:40:00

How can I not help such cute animals!!!

Geology Rocks by theengineers 2014-05-02T17:53:00

Their has to be a way to make the game fun and challenging while keeping levitation in there! Make it a feature.

Run, Run, Robot by kirbytails7 2014-04-30T05:23:00

This game definitely has some hot guitar lixx in it. Your foray into the endless runner genre is promising.