squimmy 2026-04-21 02:54
I thought the art style was interesting but I feel like I didn't really "get" the story. (probably more of a "me" problem to be honest)
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD59 → Lasing & Aligns (Run in Browser)
By ufen and
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Overall | 219 | 3.85 | 30 | |
| Fun | 636 | 3.01 | 28 | |
| Innovation | 562 | 3.15 | 28 | |
| Theme | 282 | 3.98 | 30 | |
| Graphics | 13 | 4.71 | 32 | |
| Audio | 24 | 4.32 | 28 | |
| Humor | 3.04 | 14 | ||
| Mood | 17 | 4.51 | 30 |
I thought the art style was interesting but I feel like I didn't really "get" the story. (probably more of a "me" problem to be honest)
太喜欢这种风格了
好美好美好美🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰真的好喜欢这种意识流的风格 很虚无主义 爱爱爱❤️❤️❤️
美术真的太棒了，而且看到有中文版本真的很开心，每一页都如此的震撼我，我最喜欢“夜空中的色彩，远处的海平面”这句话后面的背景图。做的真的很棒，你的美术太赞了，我打满分
Such beautiful art！I like it！
真的好美。。。孤独深邃的感觉把握得特别好，，意识流的真的太喜欢了，，看的内心很平静。。
Loved the artwork in Lasing. Would love to see it go somewhere story-wise. Right now seems like it's mostly setup.
Align seems too unfinished to give any meaningful feedback.
Seems like you have a pretty decent foundation to build off of, best of luck going forward!
好喜欢这种意识流的风格和氛围！！！
AMAZING ART!!!
beautiful art style !
Amazing atmosphere in both the first and second game. The visuals, sound, and writing really set the mood. Thanks
Totally chill vibe and very poetic, the graphics and music were also amazing! Great work!
Looks so beautiful... Could you release a downloadable version?
It's beautiful. In the past I've wondered how I should handle approaching a game jam with two divergent ideas, or at least divergent aesthetics. I'd tried to mash them together in one game, and while there is something to a collage of different styles, making two thematically related seems to allow each to stand on its own. It's inspiring and I might do something similar in the future.
非常棒的艺术氛围，音乐和画面文字结合的很好，在短短的游戏流程里调动了我的情绪。希望未来可以看到更加完整的这类作品，非常的有感染力。The artistic atmosphere is fantastic. The music, visuals, and text blend together perfectly, really evoking my emotions in such a short playthrough. I hope to see a more complete work of this kind in the future—it's incredibly moving.
太吊了。。。。。
This game was gorgeous my god. Y'all are super talented. I'd be interested if you have an instagram or something where you post more because I'd love to see more from you!
Hope to see a finished version of Aligns some day, reminds me a lot of Firewatch.
The artwork is beautiful, and I really like the anime style. The story is quite interesting as well.
stunning art and a captivating story!!!
好意识流好惊艳的小品文字游戏，文案老师功底好强，读着特别有感觉。美术大大更是强得可怕，居然在这么短的流程里画了那么多图，并且都是在72小时内完成的。。。？！强强？！色调统一，色彩搭配也十分到位，调色与饱和度亮度让人看着很舒服，再配合上文案和背景音乐音效，简直是盛宴！可能稍微美中不足的是没有设置和返回退出的交互，而且想看分支需要重开一遍（但其实因为流程较短实际体验也还好）特别值得一试的作品！期待Aligns能完成！
Such an impressionistic and stunning short-form narrative game—the writing is incredibly strong, and it feels amazing to read. The art is honestly on another level; it’s kind of unbelievable that so many illustrations were created within such a short playtime, and all within just 72 hours… seriously impressive. The color palette is cohesive, with excellent color matching—the grading, saturation, and brightness all feel just right, making it very pleasing to look at. Combined with the writing and the background music and sound design, it really feels like a feast for the senses.
If there’s a small downside, it would be the lack of basic interactions like settings or an exit/return option, and the need to restart the game to explore different branches (though since the experience is relatively short, it’s not too much of an issue in practice). Overall, definitely a work worth trying out.
好棒的美术啊真的一下子就被吸引了。本来以为星球够美了结果一片高饱和树林给我美呆了。很不错的氛围感，文字功底一流。不过需要到itch挂梯子，有网页版或者源文件的话就好了。这不影响我给高分，太厉害了实在是
两款的视觉风格都很独特，2d视觉小说很贴心有双语设置，非常大的CG量几乎两三句就能换一个CG，画得非漂亮，用线很有特色，可能相比之下文本的内容量有点少，流程再长一点会更有沉浸感。喜欢3d这个蓝白配色，期待3d有更多内容！
Both visuals have unique styles. The 2D visual novel thoughtfully includes bilingual support, and features a vast amount of CG—almost a new CG every two or three sentences—all beautifully drawn with distinctive line work. However, the text content might be a bit limited in comparison; a longer playthrough would enhance the immersive experience. I love the blue and white color scheme of the 3D version and look forward to more content in it!
美术风格太酷了，超级漂亮的色彩和线条......太美丽了！音乐和音效的设计也很赞（女孩子独白的声音融入进音乐的效果真的很棒），简直是两件艺术品
我的老天这美术也太牛了吧，目前看到美术风格最牛的了The art is truly amazing.
好惊艳好美......
视觉小说的氛围把我震撼的说不出话来，我在看到那张仰望天空的插图的时候心跳都停了一拍。实在是太美了！！ 哇啊啊啊啊啊！！
That was... so beautiful and melancholic. I wonder if Aligns is **that one mission** from the first game, but I still haven't managed to open the door or somehow move forward :< **Really** loved the bgm!!!
!> I really like that the games' names are anagrams haha.