mrsamafu 2022-10-04 00:55
Nice game, I love the design :D
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD51 → Alice In Ten Seconds
By golin, Raven_Zombie and bone17
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Overall | 438 | 3.65 | 32 | |
| Fun | 551 | 3.41 | 32 | |
| Innovation | 418 | 3.51 | 31 | |
| Theme | 1065 | 2.98 | 31 | |
| Graphics | 174 | 4.22 | 33 | |
| Humor | 237 | 3.53 | 32 | |
| Mood | 141 | 4.00 | 33 |
Nice game, I love the design :D
Cute graphics and nice BGM, it was interesting playing as Alice in a different art style. Good job!
I loved your game, especially the graphics ! The art and the colors were astonishing, contgratulations on this beautiful game !
While I loved the cut scene usage, the first three were so similar they made me think I reset the level each time. Oh and let me guess... the door opened after the first time I signed the green paper right? ':D Great concept.
This game is certainly an experience.
Not sure if getting stuck in a "loop" on the last level was intended or not, but either way the game does give you enough of a clue as to how to actually progress, so if it is meant to be a bit confusing but not too much then you hit the mark. (If it's just a bug then, well, happy accident I guess?)
@aquanim Thanks for playing! But I can ensure you that it is not a bug. It is intentional. And if you want to escape, I suggest you to look closer and find the exit ;)
I did find the exit on my own in the end. Good to know that bit is intentional :)
Nice kind game, with good graphics) The game broke my keyboard and made me wake up)
Nice art-style, especially in 3d levels. I would quote @aquanim and say "This game is certainly an experience", can't say anything besides that
Adorable characters and a nice surprise with the sudden genre switch
The pixel art is incredibly good, I love the pallet you used, it definitely fit the feel of the game. The platforming was difficult especially that damn wall next to the rabbit lol but I feel like that is what you were trying to go for. The narrative was solid, transitioning from the imaginary world to the corporate world was a really cool idea. The way the more repetitive the tasks became as the game continued and the less empathetic the characters became toward the player reinforced this narrative nicely. The only gripes I have about this game would be the camera controls in the 3D part are a little wonky, my camera would jerk randomly when passing a doorway sometimes, and the animations of the player running don't sync very well with how fast she's moving. Other than that it was a traffic game and a very cool concept.
Overall: Loved the concept. Enjoyed the progression from one level to the next. Very unexpected!
Fun: Very fun to play through. The first play through is the best as its the first time you experience the game change after each level.
Innovation: Many games in one. Very fun.
Theme: I didn't get the theme tie in at first. It became clear after a few levels.
Graphics: Loved'em both 2 and 3 D
Audio: Good!
Humor: Quite! Enjoyed see the mind of someone going closer to reality with each snooze of the alarm. Very relatable as I have a zillion alarms every morning haha.
Mood: Cute, fun, light hearted, thoughtful. Good vibes!
i have to say it is very creative to change the art style as you wake up, the art is incredibly good, i love it. i guess i'm not so into the 3D first person style (it makes me dizzy) but the arts are still very good.
the second part of the game is a little bit boring in the end(just for me.) maybe add more stuff to get closer to the topic of every ten second? for example an angry boss chasing behind you while you are trying to find ways to run away from the boss and achieve whatever goal you are supposed to. or maybe choose to add a time limit to achieve goals? (just some personal thoughts no offense.)
really nice game and would be very happy to see it expand more.
Love the creativity here. The theme change from platformer to first person is great, and made even more hilarious when you suddenly are given a weapon. Great subversion of expectations. I also appreciated the generous checkpoint system during the platforming section. My only wish would be for the theme to be more relevant to the gameplay vs. just the story, but it's certainly a fun take on it. Nice work!
Super cute art style, I absolutely love the graphics <3
The art is fantastic. I was shocked when the game went from 2d to 3d. It was obvious that you had done a lot of work on this game.
(I got stuck on the door in the fox room that I had to start over)
Really enjoyed the concept! The art is great and the progression from cute pixelart fantasy world to gritty office space was very funny! Great job!
@thyoi Thanks for reporting the bug. I'll look into it.
LOL，太棒了，我逐渐理解一切，像极了比赛睡不醒的我233333，不过我还以为有什么隐藏结局，结果最后没发现
2d 转 3d闹铃的部分很赞，有被吓到，如果能延续做3d部分的话应该会更加有趣
史丹利的寓言估计没少玩（
2d部分相机跟随可以更优化一些，以及跳跃可以好好打磨一下，现在总觉得用着手感有点怪
总体是有趣的
Wow, I just finished this game! Really innovative and unexpected idea. The 2d artworks are beautiful, while the 3d environment is quite good too! Keep up the great work!
Very fun and Looney tunes sega vibe! Exelent art! Good job!
DUDE, THIS IS BRUTAL! WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOU! :laughing:
No really, at first I was like: "awwww, so cute and lovely!" but THEN! I will give it all fives. This is super good!
Wow, that was unexpected. Creative, but that second level was harsh. Also I did somehow fall through the gaps in tiles and had to start over several times.
The graphics of the 2D levels are really beautiful, I really like the idea of changing the gameplay in the 2nd half and it's very funny. Really nice work!
Nice job!
I liked the progression of the game, the interpretation of the theme, and the visuals in both parts of the game!
Controls in the platformer section were kind of problematic, with the second jump feeling like it gave force and not speed, or not having coyote jump (or a very small one ?) or other 2D platformers tricks we are now used to. I know making a platformer feel good is extremely hard, so that's quite normal for a game jam, but then if the level design is difficult, like in the second 2D phase here, I feel like it can get frustrating really fast when controls are not tight.
Great job anyway, that's a very good game with a lot of content that you did here in only 3 days! It's impressive ✨
Simply Amazing! In my first run through, I noticed the great level design-- the game really does guide you through itself in a way that feels very natural. I want to show it to my friend because of the cute animations in the first half, and the story is a creative and funny take on this theme. I had to use headphones to more easily locate all the clocks in 3rd part. Best game I have played out of this jam so far. Replaying it to try and find the exit after reading these comments, and I also love how optimized the game feels for speedruns!
好强啊！这个美术和创意真的好强！（求互投）
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This game is sooooooo coooooool! Big love to the art design and the switch between 2D and 3D. Although the play time is only a few minutes, it can still impress me by its art design and story!
The graphic is great. But I feel like the platforming control needs some improvement tho. Sometimes it's really hard to double jump and get on the upper platform, seems like if you press left/right arrow slightly after you press space, you lose the jump force and instead you jump move horizontally in the air. There's also a issue with tilemap that it shows a tiny gaps in between. Camera movement is a little bit hard for me to get use to. I encountered a bug where I just fell through the ground on the second level. Beside all the problem I mentioned above. The game itself is pretty solid. I love that there's different level design between levels even the map is almost identical. The 2d/3d design is really creative! Overall a really insteresting game!
我的发 大老爷们变成了美少女，怎么会做这样的梦（乡秀树脸）。 美术碉堡了大佬，还有闹钟真会藏啊w 但是十秒主题嘞ww
Great artwork!
The artwork is beautiful and I really liked the 2D>3D change in the middle. The platforming in the first half wasn't the best though, especially because of the double jump, which worked for only half of the time (and in the other half on played the jumping sound without actually having me ascend). Still, very nice entry!
@bun)Thank you for your affirmation of art! This is my first try! I have gained a lot and got your love!
@nicekotThank you for your affirmation and love of art! 030