kristinamay 2020-04-21 03:52
LOL I love this. Wonderful writing. Love that you renamed your game a "slide deck." Truly appreciate the creativity.
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD46 → FabrikatrCorp
By beard-or-die
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Overall | 2412 | 2.75 | 22 | |
| Fun | 2468 | 2.35 | 22 | |
| Innovation | 2335 | 2.54 | 22 | |
| Theme | 2543 | 1.77 | 22 | |
| Graphics | 2209 | 2.55 | 21 | |
| Humor | 184 | 3.92 | 21 | |
| Mood | 2043 | 2.85 | 22 |
LOL I love this. Wonderful writing. Love that you renamed your game a "slide deck." Truly appreciate the creativity.
I think I won
Nice story.
We're sure glad you're on the team! I was amused when I saw "Run slide deck" instead of "Play game"; I was also amazed at how accurate the sanity meter was when I don't even have a sanity meter installed.
Don't see the connection between the theme, but it is an interesting story.
Oh that was hilarious. Short story with drama. Nice.
Amazing Game!
Very well written! I included it in my Ludum Dare 46 compilation video series, if you want to take a look. :) https://youtu.be/dDzogWGpxXA
I approve this :) I did actually burst in laughter in the ending. Definitely needs some business funk!
Well, it really is not a game, but the writing was fun :)
@a1gemmel You did win! You're a real winner!
@kristinamay And I appreciate you!
@b-golda Why thank you my good person. Stay golda'n.
@euix On the subject of sanity, did you see today's discloure from the Department of Defense? Truly insane. But real.
@supergamersgames Great insight! Indeed, there is no connection to the theme present whatsoever! A theme connection was pondered, but never realized.
@pilgrim1987 I clapter at your laughter. Keep on your sacred journey.
@simply I am astounded by the abject simplicity of both your avatar and your username and your comment on my game jam slide deck! You're a credit to the online race!
@jupiter-hadley I've included you in my hero compilation, yet with the complication that I've had no such conception, and I mean that with no condescension. Don't bother with deconstruction, it's merely nonsensification!
@rojola And I approve of you! Thankfully I have not burst in any manner, although I have not yet reached my ending.
@aurel300 You speak the true true, inasmuch as this jam entry is defined as a slide deck. And yet such an experience, guided by a user-initiated click, and the result of which is potentially entertainment, it can therefore be argued that the qualifications are met for a loose definition of a game.
A fun story game. And quite dramatic too! :D
I love this! So simple, but so funny at the same time. Good job!
Really enjoyed the writing! Might not be a game but I think it's great for under eight hours of work. :smiley:
One of the best games I've played. It seems that your story driven approach is more memorable than like 95% of the games I've played.