chicomcastro 2019-05-01 03:32
Love these poetic dialogues and the music is simply awesome!
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD44 → AVida
By ghust1995, ai-lin, AtillaGallio and rkoshino
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Overall | 162 | 3.84 | 27 | |
| Fun | 836 | 2.95 | 26 | |
| Innovation | 322 | 3.38 | 27 | |
| Theme | 296 | 3.68 | 27 | |
| Graphics | 113 | 4.28 | 27 | |
| Audio | 17 | 4.29 | 26 | |
| Mood | 30 | 4.30 | 27 |
Love these poetic dialogues and the music is simply awesome!
i love it :heart:
Amazing visual presentation. My only problem is that just the dialogue seems to fail to deliver the emotional impact required. Maybe a couple of simple images to depict the MC's current life state would make the dialogue more impactful?
Lovely work. Excellent job on the graphics and animation. Interesting concept for the game, too. :)
A boring game with ugly models. It's just a story of a girl going to a wishing well, nothing interesting here.
Love the background art and music! The game has a really great atmosphere, nice work.
Thanks for the feedback guys!
@zanagi We were planning on doing some animations during the scenes, but unfortunately time was not enough.
Great job making this. Looks great and the music is nice too. If you have time and would like check out my game too :v:
Tugged at my heartstrings. Simple but effective.
Liked it quite a lot! A very well done experience. (felt a LIIIITTLE short, but amazing overall)
A lovely story~I like it. Great graphics and music.Nice game!
Definitely more of an interactive story rather than a game. I kinda felt like the story was lacking and found myself furiously clicking to pace through it faster. My only critic on the art is about the 3D models, the 2D designs were whimsical and soft, and the models didn't fit the overall graphic direction. Other than that, the art and the music were beautiful. You should be proud of this!!
No words to describe how much this is good, would love to play a longer version.
Old simpson sara :D nice job :D :v:
Very touching game that's more of an essay. I'd love to play a longer version of this with a bit more mechanics to the interaction with the well, maybe a choice between several wishes or you have limited coins, etc. The game has got a lot of potential overall!
Wow, that background with those different atmospheres looks soooooo awesome!!! Loved the poems too!
This game is amazing. The story is extremely poetic and the combination of the music and visuals made the atmosphere very immersive. And I love the art style! The handpainted aesthetic fits the game so well. Great work! :)
Thank you for submitting your game to be played on my stream!
Once the stream is finished you can find the video here: https://www.twitch.tv/ursagames/videos If you want to know when it was played you can find your game in the queue here: https://tinyurl.com/y5rdokvp
A nice little moment to reflect. I thought it was well thought out and gentle. Nice work.
Parabéns, pessoal. Por completar a jam e mais ainda por sair da caixa! Fico feliz de ver galera de Brasília fazendo esse tipo de jogo. Era muito mais simples fazer algo mais arcade, especialmente por conta do tema, mas vocês fizeram uma parada focada na experiência e levando o meio pra uma outra direção. Parabéns! Algumas coisas técnicas podem ser melhoradas, mas jam é isso aí. Vou listar porque acho que é legal ter feedback construtivo, então aqui vão os nitpickings técnicos: - Transição entre as fases podia ser mais suave, fazendo uma interpolação dos efeitos gráficos - A animação do movimento da personagem não parece combinar tão bem com a atmosfera proposta - A fonte utilizada nos diálogos está com baixa resolução, atrapalha a leitura
No mais, é isso, parabéns mais uma vez, abraços.
Very interesting. I would probably also put this in the Visual Novel category as well, since it's pretty much only story heh.
The poem was lovely, however, I felt that it could have had a stronger impact if there was a bit more for the character to do, than just talk to the well. There was talk of a coin, so maybe the player could have tossed in the coins themselves.
Thanks for submitting your game, as well. Here’s the [link to the stream](https://www.twitch.tv/videos/427854891?t=26m). Your game should start around [26:00].