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Noah's Apartment

By gastricsparrow

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CategoryRankScoreCount
Overall4723.5427
Fun4723.4227
Innovation2943.5027
Theme4913.5227
Graphics6663.3427
Audio5213.0026
Humor3743.3225
Mood7163.1026

Comments

jiri-hysek 2017-12-04 09:50

Nice puzzle game! It's simple, easy to understand and still challenging. It could also work well as a mobile game.

fiakaiera 2017-12-04 10:23

**You made me think.** Good game. I can't really say much on your submission but I do want to point out a few things. * Detection for the combination of animals should be better. One of the stages got me waiting for at least 20 seconds before proceeding. I am guessing you're waiting for all of their move_speed to 0? I suggest using a stack array would be better and matching it on an array you set for the level. * Also the repeated end screen, you can just add a condition if more than one is missing then don't restart the Failed animation. * The music is good. It allows me to think at least but it could be better if you went without a main line that stands out too much.

Other than that, this would be solid past time puzzle mobile games. If done right. Good job!

randomphantom 2017-12-04 11:00

Reminds me of tsumtsum. Pretty simple puzzle game but I like the polish - cute graphics, music and sound effects.

gastricsparrow 2017-12-04 12:38

Thanks to all the nice comments guys! Jiri, very happy to get high praise from you.

@fiakaiera - Wow, thank you so much for the super helpful feedback. I realised I still had time, so I tweaked the collision and win condition a bit, it should work better now ^^ Not good enough at music to attempt to change that now though, haha.

@randomphantom - Thanks! My hours hunching over polishing cute animals was not wasted ^^

fiakaiera 2017-12-04 13:25

@gastricsparrow: Great! Thanks for taking in my feedback. Now surely the others would have a better time!

kezhaar 2017-12-04 14:45

A simple concept that is working good, well done.

badly-drawn-rod 2017-12-04 14:46

What kind of battery cage living apartment does poor Noah live in? I really liked the graphics. A cute puzzler that teaches children about the food chain.

niborious 2017-12-04 22:07

Nice game! I liked the puzzles, and it was fun to complete. I thought that filling up the animals to reach a certain line seemed a little out of place. It would have been fine to just have to use all of them without any getting eaten. I love the title. Its a funny concept

jeromwaarom 2017-12-04 22:44

A simple, yet quite fun concept that suits the theme quite well. I really like the riddle type puzzle game. Some improvements can be made with the variety of challenges or just the variety clues even, to make it a little more engaging in the long run. I also noticed that sometimes it took a long time before my succes was detected, you might want to look into that. All in all, well done!

benburgh 2017-12-04 23:24

Really cool idea, I love puzzles! It seems like the actual physics determine the outcome, though, which is a bit weird.

koemeterion 2017-12-05 10:08

Well done. Simple and easy to understand. Nice sounds and music too. Great job.

nivbeth 2017-12-05 13:54

Neat game :) The gameplay is really nice and love the art as well! Found a bug in the 4th level: my snake (which was on the 4th place) was so long, that I didn't have to add mouse and parrot o.O Great job :)

gastricsparrow 2017-12-06 07:38

Thanks to all your nice comments! @nivbeth I actually intended the level to not need all of the animals, so ppl can have different solutions. May have done it differently now but it is how it is!

solsforest 2017-12-06 10:38

This is a really neat puzzle game! The music and art are very cute. Well done!

phyrsos 2017-12-06 10:45

Overall great work dude, doing all this game alone is actually insane for a first ludum, keep going ! Come and try our little game aswell https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/40/lamattractive <3

2017-12-06 11:26

This was simple yet fun. A good effort!

megalink 2017-12-07 02:36

Very innovative and fun concept! The art was also fantastic. Great work!

hippunk 2017-12-07 18:20

Loved playing your game :). Great idea !

jegus9 2017-12-08 15:27

Everything in the game is so damn cute. That was pretty fun. I wish I could remember which one eats which in the randomized level, but I don't really mind. Good job.