maxamaden 2016-12-13 18:46
Nice game! The spooky atmosphere definitely comes across strongly, it had me on edge the whole time. There are a few typos but other than that it's really, really good, keep up the good work!
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD37 → Keyhole
By gord10
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Coolness | 3 | 55 | ||
| Mood | 68 | 4.04 | ||
| Audio | 224 | 3.50 | ||
| Innovation | 527 | 2.96 | ||
| Theme | 531 | 3.42 | ||
| Overall | 532 | 3.21 | ||
| Fun | 686 | 2.75 |
Nice game! The spooky atmosphere definitely comes across strongly, it had me on edge the whole time. There are a few typos but other than that it's really, really good, keep up the good work!
It was nice, just enough spookyness thanks to the sound and the limiting vision of the keyhole. The gameplay was pretty simple and there was only really the option of experience the story or don't. I enjoyed it though.
Thank you!
Yes, I get that bad English critique about my stories. English is not my primary language, I usually get proofreading help. But this time I could hardly finish the text at the deadline and hadn't a chance to get help. I'm going to update the game when my friend is not busy to help me.
It was an interesting story with a creepy atmosphere. I enjoyed playing trough it.
Nice job!
Really good atmosphere and I think you managed to deliver the horror/uneasiness feelings through the players.
Atmosphere was great excellent. The introduction was a good length, these kind of stories can drag on sometimes, but I felt the pacing was perfect here.
It would have been nice to see more dialogue tree branching and depth, but there was enough content to play through twice.
Really spooky. Congrats on achieving such mood with so little tech.
Nice mood, Im sad that the story didn't last much more. Great job :)
Nice game with cool creepy atmosphere. I was sad I knew the story so I knew the twist. :)
so I was staring at her eye? .___.
crap
I like this, it's a little short... feel like it could use more of a build up (though i don't know the original story). you could also do even more with sfx and audio/music to really build up the atmosphere.
Coooooool. I really liked it. I am not a fan of anything text based but the bit of gameplay and the way the story came together was awesome. I appreciate this! Good job!
"I personally want you to feel bad" hee
Good adaptation of story, great atmosphere. Everything makes sense in the end! And no cliche jumpscare of her killing you in the end, huzzah!
Such a good idea ! good game dude
Very unique game :) A cool approach to a paragraph game!
Great atmosphere and aesthetic. Nice mood and well suited audio.
I'm too scared to play this game, I know the story though, and I will try to play this as I feel it would work really great.