move127 2015-04-20 02:33
Would have been a lot more interesting if there had been some animation, or at least more pictures, to go along with the text.
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD32 → How to Train Your Human
By sally_anne
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Coolness | 2 | 75 | ||
| Humor | 248 | 3.32 | ||
| Mood | 286 | 3.26 | ||
| Overall | 548 | 3.18 | ||
| Fun | 800 | 2.77 | ||
| Theme | 830 | 2.97 | ||
| Innovation | 830 | 2.69 | ||
| Graphics | 844 | 2.55 |
Would have been a lot more interesting if there had been some animation, or at least more pictures, to go along with the text.
This was very charming! I enjoyed the writing and the choices I was offered. Good job!
Cute and charming, however I'm having trouble getting the feel of 'An Unconventional Weapon'. I can kinda see it in how you 'control' the human, but it feels weak.
Also, there's not any good way to get a feel for how you're doing.
Your ate well over the weekend. Nice.
I'm not sure how this aligns with the theme, but I liked it.
Interesting take on the theme. It was nice to see that each of the paths was meaningful. Can't say I was able to beat it though. Regardless, well done.
Very complete story, but some more picture would be nice.
Nice!
I was thinking about a twine game too. Was nice to see someone how made it. It's a pretty nice idea!
Great idea, but would be a little better with animations and such.
I didn't really get how this one related to the theme. It would have been nice to have some artwork for some of the story stages too.
Had some funny bits in your writing though.
Haha, haven't seen a game like this in a while. Fun jokes, and good style. Not really my type of "game" per say, but I think you did a good job.
A choose your path adventure with social engineering as your weapon? This was a funny read, good job :D
Very cute. Nicely written and put together. great example of a Jam Game.
Good graphics.
Maybe a bit slow sometimes, but the premise is nice...
Always great when people design their twines.
The human's love for you: 125 / 115
It was charming and fun, but the website was a little hard to navigate and work around... which I don't really think should happen in an interactive fiction. I am a fan of the IF genre, and overall, this does not disappoint. Well done.
Cats are so sweet)
I have made all the images smaller so that it fits better in the screen, @ironleonem.
@rg_rem I am super impressed with 125 love! Have updated the stats page, I was too burned out to actually count up the value last night.
Ha- this is super cute. I like the trade-off amongst the stats, giving you more than one objective for playing the game. :3
I loved how many paths there were to take, and the drawings were cute. Overall good game.
Couldn't give 5 stars for graphics because it doesn't contain a terrible cat drawing.
Very cute. Love the art.