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The Last Packet of Pumpkin Seeds

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CategoryRankScoreCount
Humor2073.10
Mood4463.12
Theme6593.15
Overall7982.93
Fun8732.65
Innovation8992.60
Coolness140947

Comments

lazyparia 2014-04-30 19:00

Loved it ! Damn chasm ...

snild 2014-05-01 16:38

Too... much... text... I just skimmed most of it, and didn't get more than a few screens in.

I guess text adventures just aren't for me. :)

paperblurt 2014-05-03 09:25

A bit short maybe.
But I too do short games.
The mood was very good...

donovanwu 2014-05-07 00:28

I like the feature of clicking the options instead of typing like an old-school text adventure.

frogcheese 2014-05-10 18:43

A bit on the short side, but well-written. Would've liked to see another character or two in there, or perhaps getting to see more signs and get more history of the main character and the people beneath the surface.

moosefly 2014-05-10 18:57

Too bad there was no wind outside, I bet it would've felt good on my face. Didn't grow up with text adventures, but this was an enjoyable experience nonetheless! Really moody, but I would've also liked some human interaction.

Anssi@MooseflyGames

pedrosanta 2014-05-10 19:14

Nice adventure, nice tribute. :) Pumpkins!

elstevo 2014-05-10 20:03

Good storytelling. Experience feels pretty smooth.

hybridmind 2014-05-10 21:11

Played three times before I escaped. Good times.

mark-goetz 2014-05-10 21:29

Very nice little adventure! I did like the touches of humor, and I enjoyed it despite its short length. A bit more exploration and possibilities for failure would've improved it (although I'm glad there are no unwinnable states!), but overall great job!

elefantopia 2014-05-11 03:17

Wow, really compelling writing. I restarted a few times to check out the other choices in the story. Great job.

crowbeak 2014-05-11 10:16

I felt like a lot of the links led to passages whose contents didn't logically follow -- I go up an elevator and then it tells me I'm coming up the last few steps? >_>

pichifino 2014-05-11 15:25

Great job

607 2014-05-11 15:41

Was fun :) I think I've done just about everything possible, maybe I missed a few secret things. Well-written :)

loxo 2014-05-12 14:30

Great atmosphere and nice story, I would like to read more.

withoutpillow 2014-05-12 20:03

nicely written story. simple but effective. good job.