l 2013-08-26 04:06
Kind of short, even for a puzzle-based Twine. Still, nice to see you giving it a shot!
Also keen to see the other options of that timer script get some use.
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD27 → Dance Instructor
By st33d
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Innovation | 257 | 3.40 | ||
| Theme | 281 | 3.46 | ||
| Mood | 298 | 3.08 | ||
| Humor | 525 | 2.27 | ||
| Overall | 714 | 2.92 | ||
| Fun | 815 | 2.62 | ||
| Coolness | 1422 | 39 |
Kind of short, even for a puzzle-based Twine. Still, nice to see you giving it a shot!
Also keen to see the other options of that timer script get some use.
Really great idea + implementation, would love to see it expanded on
Short and to the point.
Rather short, and I found it difficult to read whilst the timer was going down. But, the writing was well done. Also, a little short
I agree a bit short, but it ties to the theme very well..
Short and to the point (as the other commentors have noted.) Something to be said for minimalism.
a little short but nice game, like the idea awesome good work
Wow, very alternative, but really breath-taking, actually! For a text-based game, it was quite fun to play.
Interesting start... would like to see it expanded.
Using a timer in a text game, that's something, very nice way to pratice my dynamic reading xD
Still don't know If I managed to beat it, there's no more options and the rewind doesn't work, so I think maybe this is it.
Also, creative title.
Very nice use of a timer on a text-based game! It was very thrilling and well-written. Would love to see an extended version of this! Great job! :D
Great use of the theme for a twine game. It doesn't need to be any longer, but I think it could be. Perhaps a sequel? :P
A bit short but I liked it!
Never thought i would like a text game this much,
Want more of it ;)
Fantastic idea, one of the few gamelike twines I've ever seen. It could have been longer (mayybe not because of the timer), but I enjoyed what there was of it.
Very interesting...It'd be nice to see it be a bit longer, but it's a very cool idea.
I expected a music to fit with the name ... But it's a nice work :)
Of all the bomb defusing games I've played in this LD, this is one of the better. I like the bells and whistles you've added to the usual Twine set-up, and the timer is great. Nice work on puzzles, too.
Typo: "goto" should be two words.
SPOILER
The ending felt a bit abrupt, but it still works.