zappi 2013-08-26 19:07
Very nice atmosphere, thank you!
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD27 → Slices of Life
By epiplon
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Coolness | 3 | 61 | ||
| Mood | 54 | 3.69 | ||
| Theme | 113 | 3.49 | ||
| Audio | 179 | 3.18 | ||
| Innovation | 219 | 3.14 | ||
| Overall | 256 | 3.19 | ||
| Humor | 371 | 2.11 | ||
| Graphics | 400 | 2.86 | ||
| Fun | 440 | 2.54 |
Very nice atmosphere, thank you!
love how it gets really stressful over time, 'you are not your job'
Nice and moody, but the difficulty is probably too high for most people. I got stuck on "That's natural. It's nature doing her job. You have the only option to accept fate." and there's no way I could type even more than that in 10 seconds :)
I've helped on the development on this game and i'm very happy with the feedback about the difficulty and the mood of the game.
I would like to hear from you guys about the sentences in english, cause it's not my native language, so.
I know we got some other things to fix but i'm very happy with our result.
Thanks Ludum Dare! =)
Great game, loved the mood and the music. The artwork really adds to the "atmosphere", as Alex said. I agree that's really hard, just couldn't get through the 4th message...maybe you could add/shuffle some easier messages in future versions, so that'd be less frustrating for the starters (myself included =]) Nice job \o/
Atmosphere is great. Sentences, you wrote "a opportunity" instead of "an opportunity" at one point, but that's all right. It's legible. :)
Philosophy! I like philosophy. Nice graphics and text, and having to type what i read (and on a timer) really makes me pay attention to the words.
@pg The only thing I noticed grammatically is that I kept stumbling trying to type "an opportunity" instead of "a opportunity" in english we use an if the next word begins with a vowel. a banana, an apple.
I like the gameplay and the concept. the scenes were really cool too!
whoo.. gets tough! and i thought i was okay typist.. enjoyed it.. even if it was depressing haha good job .. never thought i could enjoy a typing type game..
Are we allowed to fix the language mistakes for the Jam? Because I think it falls on the typo category.
Feels a little morbid, but still made me think. Not bad.
This game just has something that Typing of the Dead just cannot give me.
Its really hard for who is not a native writer of english :D but awesome atmosphere.
This is a wonderful entry! There are grammatical errors here and there, and the "philosophy" seemed kinda shallow, but I digged the idea behind the game. Awesome work!
it was a hard game that lead me into remember my every day depression...AWESOME. Incredible mood, and because life is passing by, and we are dying every second, i want to make more games :D !
Good work! The mood is excellent (we should always keep present that "You are not your job"), and the difficulty becomes a challenge (but not something impossible) soon enough, which is a plus for me.
I can type at a reasonable speed, even though I'm not a native English speaker. Still, I struggled through the last levels to complete them (which I did...yay!). I found it interesting how I had to "unlearn" typing punctuation marks to separate words to save on unnecessary key strokes.
Congratulations! :D
Beautiful game! Very moody and a great experience. I just love the unsettling feeling it causes on the player... and the fact that its not just another thing you load, play and in the next 3 minutes you don`t remember it anymore. I`m sure this game will last long in my memory as something truly unique! Great work guys and thanks for the game!
A few nitpicky grammar things like "You born" should instead be "You are born"
It definitely achieved the mood it was going for, even if that mood was a saddening, "Life is pointless" kind of message. I'm glad I can type fast, but the line with the numbers in it threw me off!
I was enjoying it til the opportunity screen came up. A little too hard for me and I'm a pretty fast typist. An interesting idea for a game.
I can't touch type, so when passing the stages I ended up missing a lot of the animations. It's a cute idea though, saying nothing of the philosophy.
Nice enough, but I can't type fast to save my live...Isn't this a bit difficult?!?
I can't get past "from 10 to 10 (...)" It's too hard but despite I never got to the end I get the message perfectly, very intresting game with a strong atmosphere.
Very philosophical.
Very contemplative mood. The graphics and gameplay make you think about the messages and your existence. It was challenging not to type punctuation because it's second nature.
Very unique concept! Fit the theme well and the game is thoughtfully done, nice work :)
maybethsisjustabadtriporanopportyunijtynto maybthisijustabadtriporanopportunityjtomejf
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Awesome game though!!
This is a very nice production.
Very hard too! I got stuck in "Life's passing and you're not doing anything useful". I'm not a very fast typer :(
I like the moody feel. Nice job!
Great! a typeracer with some storyline!
Great job! :D
Was pretty easy, but difficulty was just right. I could see this with a more fleshed out story and better graphics. :) would be cool to add those spaces and commas too.