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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | Jonathan Lorenz's comment | |
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| Oct 7 10:07:29 | Escape from Arachnea! | ♥ 0 | I hate those small green spiders! Nice little game. I like the fact that there are multiple weapons, it adds to the replay value! I would have liked to have a crosshair to make it clear where you aim. The music was cool too. The only criticism I have is the disparity of the graphisms between the pixel art of the spiders and the non pixel art of the background. Good work overall! | |
| Oct 10 16:45:07 | 78h 37m | Beelieve | ♥ 1 | I didn't really understood the logic of the game and why sometimes the spiders started chasing me and sometimes not but I managed to beat it by tries and errors. A tutorial screen explaining the AI of the spiders would be a plus imho. Good work overall! |
| Oct 10 16:59:30 | 14m 23s | Psychopath Basement | ♥ 1 | Very interesting idea! Could be expanded to a more completed experience. Could be improved by having the possibility to advance to a certain moment of the timeline. Having to wait for the other members to do their stuffs before doing yours isn't really fun. Good work overall! |
| Oct 10 17:11:29 | 11m 59s | Get the Pizza! 🍕 | ♥ 1 | If it's a game about pizza, I immediatly want to play it! Simple but efficient game. It was a bit headscratching but not too much. I also liked the fact that it wasn't too long. Only thing I didn't liked is the fact that you need to be pixel perfctly aligned with pathes to use them or you get stuck on the wall. Other than that, good work! |
| Oct 10 17:16:48 | 5m 19s | StarHamster 64 | ♥ 2 | Cool game! It was a bit difficult to be precise. I would have liked the soft zone of the camera to be thiner and the cursor to be locked in the windows. 5 Stars for humour! I love how you integrated the tutorial via hamsters conversations. Good work! |
| Oct 10 17:34:56 | 18m 08s | One Slicing Minute | ♥ 1 | Simple but cool game. Was a bit laggy for my shitty computer. I liked the "upgrade and try again" mechanic. Thank you for including azerty controls! Good work overall! |
| Oct 10 17:41:37 | 6m 41s | Memoirs | ♥ 0 | Narrative games aren't really my thing but I really lvoed the graphics and the mood they brought to the game. I haven't much to say about the game but congratulations for the awesome graphics! |
| Oct 22 15:08:42 | 285h 27m | The Closed Gate | ♥ 0 | This is a very clever game! I never figured out how to push the button on level 9. I loved how you made the most out of a few mechanics. Minimalist but definitively well done! Good job! |
| Oct 22 15:18:49 | 10m 07s | waveloop | ♥ 1 | I don't really know if it is a game, but I definitively had fun. I would have loved to have a way to go back to previously completed "rounds", so the player could make his "mix" of the music. Good job! |
| Oct 22 15:24:03 | 5m 14s | SPACE ORBIT | ♥ 2 | It's a pretty hard game, but I loved the mood of it! A little note about the html version on itch : I would suggest you increase the viewport height of about 20 px and uncheck the "fullscreen" button of itch. Good job! |
| Oct 22 15:29:13 | 5m 10s | This Will Be My Cycle | ♥ 0 | Man those flies are evil! This is a really great implementation of the theme! Would be cool to have more room-related mechanics between levels, like change a room, randomize all rooms, invert rooms position ... Good job! |
| Oct 22 15:37:52 | 8m 39s | Lonely Blob | ♥ 1 | Clever level design. I liked how you are encouraged to explore the world with the litlle secrets here and there. Lacks sfxs to improve the mood. Good work overall! |
| Oct 23 13:02:29 | 21h 24m | Stuck on Mars | ♥ 1 | Hi! You should remove the "index.html" from the webgl link. Right now it is unclickable. I liked the mood of the game but having to break to wait for the sun is a bit against what I think a car game should be about : going fast. Other than that, good work! |
| Oct 23 13:10:24 | 7m 55s | The Loop | ♥ 1 | Short but efficient game! I had fun, it didn't waste my time, and since it was a samll game, each aspect of it were well polished! I would hope more dev (including me) take example of this scope! Good work! |
| Oct 24 12:12:27 | 23h 02m | The infinity - Pool bar | ♥ 1 | Usually not a big fan of narative games but this one got me hooked and I didn't regret giving it a try! I liked the minimalist graphics and the mood of the game. Also liked the plot twist! I got stuck after going back to my appartement but I enjoyed the experience. Congratulation, great work! |
| Oct 25 09:48:05 | 21h 35m | Shape Escape - A minimalist strategy game | ♥ 0 | At first it seems like a relaxing game, but when you play it, you quickly meet stressfull situations. Nice little game! I know that if you loose all your shapes you loose the game, but how can you win it? Is there an end? |
| Oct 25 10:18:45 | 30m 40s | Sad Knight | ♥ 1 | Very good graphics! Too bad there were no sfxs, it would enhance the mood greatly! Good thing you added the objectives list. Unfortunately there were some thing I never manage to do, like burning the doll. Good work overall! |
| Oct 25 10:25:45 | 7m 00s | DISTORT | ♥ 1 | Man that was hard! Especially when the lasers arrived. I liked the game boy mood of the game, the fxs and sfxs really added to the mood. Very good work! |
| Oct 25 10:35:34 | 9m 49s | DJ LoopMan | ♥ 0 | The idea is good but I felt that there were some issues with the rythm. Sometimes I felt like I was in rythm, but the recording part didn't work, other times I felt I was completely off but the recording part worked. Also for the second track, the melody wasn't in rythm with the beat. Don't know if it is a lag issue or something else. Good idea anyway! |
| Oct 26 08:09:49 | 21h 34m | Concentric | ♥ 1 | A simple game, relaxing and nice. I was hoping for more choices, right now you just match shapes and colors. The game could use some more mechanics. Like having certain shapes that count for more points but you have a certain amount of time before they disapear. Also, there was a resolution problem, I couldn't see the entire circle. Good work overall! |
| Oct 26 08:14:42 | 4m 53s | Evolooption | ♥ 0 | Cool little game. The voices were funny. At that speed I didn't had enough time to see if the pickups were good or bad. Don't know it it was intentional. If not, the object could use like an aura or something (red for bad, green for good). Good work! |
| Oct 26 08:21:48 | 7m 06s | In a Globe of Death | ♥ 0 | Pretty simple game. I supposed this is your first game jam. Good job for submitting! For your next jam I would suggest to investigate on things like music, start screen, background, juice... For now the game is a bit "nude". Good work anyway! |