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Dec 5 03:24:40 Tiny Guardian ♥ 0 Just played your game! Really like the art style, but I'm awful at these kind of games haha. Definitely fits the theme, as I got about 2 minutes in and most of the screen was fireballs!
Dec 5 03:31:07 6m 27s Shear Panic ♥ 1 Silly little sheep! I couldn't figure out what the dragon did, but I think the objects you pick up might be a bit too close together.
Dec 5 03:42:18 11m 11s ALPACA AIR ATTACK!!! ♥ 2 Really well done flight controls. Was a bit jarring at the start though because I didn't know which plane was mine!
Dec 5 03:53:13 10m 55s Doughnut Drop ♥ 0 Woo more donuts! I think you need to zip your build folder though, can't play with just the .exe
Dec 5 04:03:59 10m 46s Last Train to Bismuth ♥ 0 Well done team! Really like the art. I have to ask though, what are the coins, bismuth, and scrap for?
Dec 5 04:36:03 32m 04s Sally's Dark Adventure ♥ 1 Love the characters! From the menu and intro I was expecting a very dark and gloomy game and then suddenly blue skies and cookies! Pros: Boss fight! Cons: Awkward camera angle and environment was less detailed than characters (but understandable).
Dec 5 05:12:00 35m 57s Heart Of Stone ♥ 0 Got totally swamped on round 9! Fun though! I just wish I was able to send out more units, never got close to placing a 100-cost unit :P
Dec 5 05:21:47 9m 47s Shoot off their lumps ♥ 0 Fantastic art design! The game itself is pretty hard though, at least for me XD. I could see this turning into a full fledged game though. Not too sure about the theme relation but still some great work!
Dec 5 05:26:05 4m 18s Block Pilot ♥ 0 Exe not working, I think it's missing the dll. Try a reupload :)
Dec 5 05:39:30 13m 25s The Lost City of Bhalrim ♥ 3 One of the better games I've played so far. Great mood and style. I played around with it for a while. Really like the little treasure mini game.
Dec 5 06:01:54 22m 24s Drift Punk ♥ 3 Really well polished, great art style too. I replayed it more than a couple times. Might have been fun to have a few bigger open areas so not every corner pin turn.
Dec 5 06:18:05 16m 11s Snowballing Out of Control! ♥ 1 This little game is deceptively fun (and tricky!). At first I thought I was supposed to gather snow to build a massive snowball, and then I saw the error in my ways. Took me a couple tries to get to the finish. Now you just need to add a wintery jingle.
Dec 5 23:39:52 17h 21m Lights, Camera, Action! ♥ 1 Hey James, really got a kick out of your take on classic one-liners. I don't know what kind of ratings board allows people to be repeatedly stabbed and maintain a G rating, but count me in! Kind of wish the combat was a bit more engaging but its more than enough considering the time to make it.
Dec 5 23:48:32 8m 40s Waltz ♥ 1 I really like the idea of matching up the musicians, I just wish there was more variety to the instruments. Also, I'm not sure if the ones I matched up were correct or not, so perhaps having some confirmation would help.
Dec 5 23:52:37 4m 05s The Legend of the Bikini Armor ♥ 1 The illustrations were nice and polished, and the intro part played out well (although I found it to be a bit too much reading!). Unfortunately I got stuck and couldn't move past the first dungeon. Amusing concept though!
Dec 6 00:05:58 13m 21s Ignite ♥ 3 I thought this game was really well polished and it seems like your team managed to finished what you set out to do, so +1 for that! Really like the artwork too. I just wish I was better at the puzzles because I had to give up on the (seemingly) last one.
Dec 6 00:10:11 4m 13s A Hero's Burden ♥ 1 I thoroughly enjoyed this one. Great atmosphere and I liked the focus on the narrative and choices. The gameplay itself could use work but I don't think it was the main focus in this case anyway. Also, my name is Jordan so I was naturally biased to let the children die and save myself 😆 My only criticisms (which are very minor) are that the narration feels a little bit slow, and the outdoor environments seem just a touch too dark (which could be a gamma/monitor issue).
Dec 6 00:13:34 3m 23s Mortal Komba ♥ 1 Really well done and nicely polished. I only wish it was a bit easier at the start because I'm terrible at timing it right even with one person on screen!
Dec 6 00:20:28 6m 54s Voxel Mob Arena ♥ 1 Fun little game you have here. It was frustrating at times but I kept replaying it. The only criticisms I have are that the crosshair doesn't always line up with the bullets (I think because the projectile is offset from the player) and also the shotgun seems underpowered. Fun game though nonetheless!
Dec 6 16:27:37 16h 07m Kim's Party ♥ 2 Wow this is top notch across the board. Looks, sounds, and controls excellently.
Dec 6 16:31:46 4m 09s Doubloon Lagoon! ♥ 1 I both love and hate how fast this little sailboat goes without many coins to weigh it down! Haha, but seriously this was a silly and entertaining little game. Unfortunately I wasn't skilled enough to get more than 20% of the coins. I like the voice lines though :) If I had one critique it would be that I wish you started out a little slower and the coins affected your speed slightly less - then it would be more about avoiding the little islands. Also, maybe if the camera were attached to the boat from behind it might be easier to see whats in front of you.
Dec 6 16:33:57 2m 11s Cup-O-Matic ♥ 1 Looks like we had some similar theme ideas! 😆 I really liked it though. Its simple but fun, nice cute artwork, fun little cutesy soundtrack, it has it all. I think the only thing missing is an explanation for the multi-number cupcakes. I thought you had to press all the keys at the same time but then realized I just had to hit them in order.
Dec 6 16:41:36 7m 39s Larry Kroft and the Temple of Booze ♥ 1 Oh Larry, living in your sisters shadow for all these years. Well you definitely get points for humor! Oddly enough I think the menu section was really well polished compared to the gameplay itself. It became frustrating trying to drop items on the button pads and have them stay. I think simply making them not slide across the floor or adding another button to just 'drop' an item would have made huge improvements. Still enjoyed playing it though. Well done, team!
Dec 6 16:44:56 3m 20s Super Pinball Maker ♥ 2 Wow, this was a really ambitious project for a game jam, and you guys pulled it off well! There's really not much to say other than well done. If I had a single request though it would be to have an option to 'paint' bumpers and paddles instead of having to drag them over one at a time. I wanted to make a wall of bumpers and it was really time consuming compared to how nice and easy it was to paint blocks. Definitely keep working on this though, I'd love to see it on Steam or GOG some day.
Dec 6 16:47:43 2m 47s Slightly annoying traffic ♥ 1 I like that you took time to make it so the stop ability didn't last forever, because people like me would try to stop every car :D
Dec 6 16:50:17 2m 34s Wasted Space ♥ 0 I like the concept and execution, but I wish the difficulty would ramp up a bit more slowly. Things get out of control a little too fast for my tastes and I'd really like to be able to dodge debris and aim for rings for more than a few seconds before the entire screen is filled with debris! Even still, well done! :)