awalone 2026-04-21 21:43
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Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD59 → White Static
By lianaavk, keksik, , iramuslova, , , and
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Overall | 815 | 2.66 | 20 | |
| Fun | 843 | 2.02 | 20 | |
| Innovation | 840 | 2.11 | 20 | |
| Theme | 719 | 2.94 | 20 | |
| Graphics | 530 | 3.52 | 22 | |
| Humor | 590 | 2.26 | 19 | |
| Mood | 760 | 2.87 | 22 |
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Мне хана...
The game has an interesting graphic style, but it would be more convenient if the default language was English: after all, almost the entire platform is in English.
It takes a long time to read until the first selection options appear :) And it's missing different sounds for different events, as is usually the case in novels. But otherwise, you've done a great job, well done!
really love the vibes and art style but i get this error every time new text loadsScreenshot 2026-04-21 at 5.55.50 PM.png
Really love the art :)
@justking144 Thanks for the feedback, try to play on itch. There is no such error notification.
@awalone Thanks for the feedback, try to play on itch. There is no such error notification.
Du saaaaaaallllee je me suis enjaillé grave le feu +1000 Aura j'ai pas raison la team ?
кайф новелла ряльно имбулечка жаль что читать много надо а так пойдет
Чем кончится-то? Как-то неожиданно оборвалось повествование, хех :smirk:
монстрик миленький
Didn't get too far into the story but I really liked the art and music! :smile:
Not sure what the issue is, but I couldn’t get the game to run :( It just doesn’t load—both on Ludum Dare and on itch.io. After loading, it’s just a black screen and that’s it :(
Overall, the game is good, the story is interesting. But you can see that the graphics of the characters and the background differ greatly — it doesn't look cohesive. It would be better if everything were drawn in the same style.
good art, sorry for the visual novel. Good game
@markwer sorry
Looks great, didn't understand the game though, just seems to be a lot of text to click through.
Really cool graphics, loved the art style and I could really see that becoming something. The overall mood was decent, I can tell there was a lot put into the story. I didn't really see any other game mechanics, so it's more of a visual novel, which is perfectly fine, and probably great for some.
The dialogue stopped being English again once the prologue finished, but the main character had a nice design!
Nice art and good story.