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Space Creator

By zykroma

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CategoryRankScoreCount
Overall4903.4726
Fun7023.1226
Innovation5503.2125
Theme9533.0026
Graphics2463.9526
Audio2663.4526
Mood2403.5426

Comments

panda 2018-08-14 14:12

The music's very relaxing, and I loved the encouraging message when I lose! The graphics are amazing for a jam, though I'm not clear on why the astronaut needs to wear the helmet inside.

Farming in space is charming. If I could add something, I'd try to make the seeds more distinct, and more suggestive of what they'll end up as. Also, I died because I couldn't find the trash. Perhaps there is something you can do to make it more obvious what we can interact with? Another pitfall is that when I grabbed a seed from the first time, I didn't even realize I had! My character was in front of the dispenser so there was very little visible movement as the seed went up on my head.

Overall I like it, and this is one of the games I've seen with the most potential for growth!

kostbllb 2018-08-14 14:17

couldn't create anything in smelter and just died in the end :(

saering 2018-08-14 14:19

That's indeed a relaxing game, cute and funny to play! It took me some time to fully understand what was going on (I have to admit I didn't completely read the rules but I never do so since I expect games to be easy to take in hand) but that was not a big issue.

Well done!

inworks 2018-08-14 14:21

Nice game i tought it would be quit boring at first but adding extra rooms and adding the water mechanic kept me playing and the difficulty increased over time which i liked. Nice audio track it made the mood. Overall a good entry

blueblu 2018-08-14 14:31

A little confusing at first, once I realised the big yellow thing was a button, I also realised I had no space to win! Very challenging, but this was a very ambitious game!

phantom-dinosaur 2018-08-14 14:31

No idea how to play this game. Really needs a tutorial. While I can plan seeds and get energy, i don't know how I can get oxygen. Clicking on certain 'machines' does nothing. I always die because it says you ran out of oxygen.

corbak 2018-08-14 14:37

Really nice concept. There was still some little bug I guess where you couldn't remove some items from your head if you picked a wrong items. Made me restart the game.

Anyway its cute and nicely polished, well done :)

zykroma 2018-08-14 14:37

Thank you all for your comments ! I really appreciate ! Yeah indeed it lacks of information, it's quite hard to figure out at first what to do. I will try to make it easier

raogs 2018-08-14 14:47

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Looks and sounds great! Would like to see more :)

Encountered some minor bugs: - Seed model stuck above head, but could still pick up new ones - On the first new field the plants appear in space - On the second new field one of the fields wasnt clickable

Also nice cat :cat:

jackou 2018-08-14 14:58

This is an awesome entry! It got me right from the beginning. I love the style and the gameplay was surprisingly relaxing and fun! I discovered a little bug where I wondered why my plant got planted in space, which after the next upgrade became much more clear :D Some screenshots to clarify:

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after the upgrade it was clear where it got planted:

sc2.png

I loved it - could not stop playing :P! Really great work!

nikyaer 2018-08-14 15:04

The pathing gets caught on almost everything, especially around the garden and connector. Did you set the objects placed to be NavMesh obstacles? If you did, I think maybe making the level one block wider in each part would help. Like this:review_space_creator.png

Also being able to click on a machine once, have it bring you to it as well as use it, would be awesome a huge quality of life improvement. Otherwise awesome. Good job! :D

zykroma 2018-08-14 15:35

Hey! Thanks you all for the feedback I fixed the planting bug, made the path a little bit easier and you can now move if you click on a machine :D Upload is coming! (Since it's my first entry I don't know if it's fully legal to do that ?)

jackou 2018-08-14 16:17

@zykroma I think the ruling is, if it is a gamebreaking bug you are allowed to fix it, otherwise I'd say just leave it as is. You can still work on the project but since your version is actually perfectly playable I'd say work on it outside of this event. (This is my first Ludum Dare too, though, so maybe someone else knows the exact guideline. This is what I got from the [rules page](https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/rules).)

runner-alien 2018-08-14 17:27

Very very cool game, beautiful 3d work as well!

mobiusdisco 2018-08-14 18:36

There isn't a whole lot to say that others haven't already but you were right, pretty similar with different gameplay. good work guys! do you have twitters you post to?

colletto-gregory 2018-08-14 20:30

Hi Guys,

You made a very good and apreciable games. I took some pleasent moment to play it. The relaxing music and the fluidy of the character is awesome.

I think more feedback sound (I love this thing like you see in my games) is a plus for give life to a game :) And for the model stuck above the player's head, it's when a player take a seed and collec a plant before use the seed.

But I'm very impressed by your works GG

alc0l 2018-08-15 09:03

Great Game ! I had some bugs with text positions on fullscreen (I play on HTML5 version) and no tutorial wasn't available. I have just one advice, character move could be better with keyboards, but mouse work perfectly too !

You do a great game ! It's very impressive !

antoined73 2018-08-15 15:19

As @nikyaer, I think that clicking on a machine should move the player to it and use it at the same time :)

Cute little concept ! The music is a bit repetitive though and some sounds effects should make the game even more interesting

chocolat-endive 2018-08-15 15:24

That's a cool relaxing game! I had a little bug: one model was stuck over the head of the character. It was just a graphic bug, I was able to pick and grow new seeds. I think the first update of the ship is useless. I would have love if the game had different music, I find this one "too much repetitive". Overall it's a cool and polished game, good job!

zykroma 2018-08-15 15:47

@antoined73 @chocolat-endive I agree with you the music is too repetitive but it was the first one I ever made ^^ I downloaded bosca ceoil on Friday and then I tried to do a little something when taking a break from programming. I'll try to do better next time !

Thanks for the bug reports !

chocolat-endive 2018-08-15 15:58

That's REALLY great for the first music you ever made! Keep up with creating your musice for your games, it's cool!

zykroma 2018-08-15 17:44

@chocolat-endive Thanks mate I appreciate. This is the kind of comments that keep people working :D

koala-squad 2018-08-17 04:16

@zykroma We've finished Part 1 of our Play and Rate video for Ludum Dare 42, and we've added it per your response. Check it out! https://youtu.be/vuUp1EYEiuA (The video may be uploading for a little while. If so, check back after a day or so)

sobakaduka 2018-08-17 05:36

Loved it. Still i found that gameplay is not totally self explanatory, i've got to pause game to check how to play it, but at first it seemed that i'll be able to get it without manual. Ah, of course you can't do anything 100% perfect in 3 days, so good job!