jcwelgemoed 2015-12-14 08:54
Needs a bit more work. Good effort though. Controls perhaps need to be bit smoother.
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD34 → Girl Story
By manimal
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Humor | 476 | 2.37 | ||
| Audio | 611 | 2.27 | ||
| Mood | 773 | 2.45 | ||
| Graphics | 876 | 2.04 | ||
| Fun | 894 | 2.35 | ||
| Innovation | 926 | 1.96 | ||
| Theme | 928 | 2.52 | ||
| Overall | 961 | 2.17 | ||
| Coolness | 1507 | 46 |
Needs a bit more work. Good effort though. Controls perhaps need to be bit smoother.
Kinda harsh going to the first level.
But is a nice concept! Sure they say that in Czech Republic all people are artists!
Quite fun, but needs some more work! Nice game tho
Had to mash the spacebar at the start to get through the intro. Platforming has something, but like others have said needs a bit of work on the controls.
The jump from the moving platform to the little platform with the monster was hard. But I liked the mood and music.
Nice little game, although the control feel a little floaty or unresponsive. Music was nice :)
Took a couple minutes to get through the intro, it seemed pressing space didn't do anything, or only sometimes worked, until about half way through, then suddenly it worked. Controls not too bad, definitely difficult.
Fun game - I like the music and sounds a lot :)
I like the style and the mood, maybe the controls needs more work, but nice try!
Well played with the story (although at first it seemed only to amuse us)
I wonder who the villain was?
nice effort - the platforms were a little too tiny, and that first level had a steep learning curve - some of text was hard to read because of color combinations
Couldn't beat level 3
The physics is kinda wrong I think. I mean, you can do whatever you want, but typically you don't start falling much faster when you let go of the jump button, but instead of keep the same speed. Do some searching on how to do game physics properly, it'd help a bit.
For both the bee and the other thing the graphics were too small or the hitbox was too big. So I would often die without it looking like I touched the bee at all. You should make the hitboxes smaller, they should actually be a little smaller than the graphics to be a little more lenient.
Good start though. Good luck for next Ludum Dare!
Funny game. Controls were a bit hard to get into.
A very neat idea, the music was very soothing :D