nurabsal 2015-04-20 03:49
very pretty. language was changing randomly on me though
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD32 → Le Roman de Goupil
By ecololuc
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Graphics | 139 | 3.90 | ||
| Mood | 314 | 3.22 | ||
| Humor | 877 | 2.04 | ||
| Overall | 889 | 2.79 | ||
| Innovation | 931 | 2.50 | ||
| Fun | 973 | 2.43 | ||
| Theme | 1061 | 2.33 | ||
| Coolness | 1347 | 48 |
very pretty. language was changing randomly on me though
Interesting concept. Continue improving the story and it would be a great game to play.
Ambitious plan for LD :) nice foxes, great birds scene, all the best in finishing this :)
I like the scene, its a nice prototype for what it is!
I'd try this again when it is a little further along.
Very nice, would have loved to see more ! Also had a moment in the end with bot languages at the same time.
Loved the art. Once finished, I think it would be fun!
Unfortunate that you didn't have the time to finish this. I love the concept and the whimsical graphics, and the mechanics seem solid. I'll check back later to see if you have developed this further.
Love the art style! One issue I had was I was pressing right to advance the story, but pressed it again too quickly and accidentally chose a story option I didn't want. I think having a different control button to advance to the next scene would help.
I couldn't play it for the web version, I don't know how to "go next" after the first sentence. I tried to click, the space bar, enter key. I'm using Firefox.
The Windows version is missing the "Goupil_Data" folder. I'd really like to test this game to show it to my daughter, she was very interested on how to make a game when I was coding mine.
Thanks for the feedback everyone!
-I guess that the language bugs are, like they say, "not bugs, but features" =D
It's just that I didn't had time to make all the pictures, so I put in black pics with a sentence describing what should be here, both in french and english.
But if there is a language bug beside of this, please say it.
-Ranmara: Thanks for the advice!
-Mathieu: It was the arrow keys to advance in the game, sorry I not said it before ^^'
I also remade the Win/Mac/Linux versions, it should work now.
I love the art! I hope you continue to develop this, I want to know how the story unfolds!
Great art. Please work on the game, it would be really cool to have it finished.
Nice starting point, could be really cool with more time.
thoughts:
- aah! sudden sound effect!
- I really like the graphics, they give a sense of dynamism, despite being fixed
Storytelling games are quite ambitious for a game jam, but that's a nice try. It's not finished, but you laid out a nice beginning for the game. Graphics are nice and it feels like an old adventure game mixed with a children's storybook (which is really nice).
I set the volume a little bit high while playing so I really ended up jumping from my chair when I heard the shot. :P
P.s.: played the web version and the development console popped up in front of the game. :/
Good work, ambitous doing graphics for a 48h jam :) Remember reading standard children books to my kid brothers a few years ago, and I can see that stuff like this would be a good update (for tablets) .. so while reading you could ask the kid what they want to do and have a good little interactive story instead of just flipping pages.