chipcaramel 2014-04-29 11:39
Congrats on completing your first LD Jam! For the most part this is a good start. I find myself kind of wanting more story text, curious where this game is going.
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD29 → Deeper
By shasharala
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Coolness | 3 | 51 | ||
| Mood | 435 | 2.96 | ||
| Theme | 517 | 2.85 | ||
| Innovation | 585 | 2.56 | ||
| Fun | 713 | 2.12 | ||
| Overall | 739 | 2.24 | ||
| Graphics | 760 | 1.75 |
Congrats on completing your first LD Jam! For the most part this is a good start. I find myself kind of wanting more story text, curious where this game is going.
Interesting game, it's nice to have a story to go with the game. Nice attempt at your first LD jam!
Congrats at your first LD! It seemed to go nowhere after I clicked "continue forward". Shame!
Was written well!
So excited to get this done :) Let us know when you get to finish it. Nice try!
Nice job with the in text links, got stuck looking into the darkness though :)
Thank you. All of you. There is a lot more work to do on the game, especially since some routes lead to a dead-end currently and it is obviously not finished, but the warmth in your responses is very appreciated.
This could be a really good game if you finish it! I know I want more! :)
Hah, that simple idea of clicking on parts of the text is good, and your initial intentions/concept is interesting. Hope you'll go further with this!
Nice first try!
Keep going on this. I don't want to be stuck peering into the darkness for all eternity.
Have to agree with everyone else here, was left wanting more.