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Sonnet 49

By 65c816

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CategoryRankScoreCount
Innovation5213.00
Graphics5562.88
Mood6022.67
Overall10572.44
Theme10642.43
Fun11721.73
Coolness140440

Comments

devwil 2013-08-26 03:54

Inspired by Jason Rohrer's Passage? :)

This is interesting!

tainted_code 2013-08-28 21:54

Ooh, that was pretty interesting.

nicealexanderas 2013-08-28 21:57

I don't know if is a problem with my browser but when i die i need to wait a lot time to show a message D: .... but anyways good job :D i like the concept of the game! looks interesting.

larb 2013-08-28 21:57

The death screen takes a really long time to display. Not sure what I'm doing.

zlowrance 2013-08-28 21:58

Really like the visuals and the passages were cool but they took an excruciatingly long time to fade in! Other than that though I liked it

angrygeometry 2013-08-28 22:01

i had slow text too, but the game itself was interesting enough.

pinktreeleaf 2013-08-28 22:03

throw up a link to the finish version when your done :D

udo 2013-08-28 22:05

Holy pixels, batman! That was interesting. However, I couldn't quite figure out what I'm supposed to do there. I'd say it's worth expanding this into a full game.

the-jack 2013-08-28 22:13

I love the aesthetic, reminds me a bit of Rohrer's "Passage".
Would definitely benefit from some player introduction to controls & the death timeout is far too slow for my liking.

65c816 2013-08-30 15:35

Sorry, I currently have many problems, I'll make a free bug version as soon as possible. But thank you very much for your encouragements.

blay09 2013-08-31 12:33

The graphic effects were nice and I liked the gameover screen apart from the extremely long fade-in. However, I had no idea what I was supposed to do. I just kept dieing when walking around.

withoutpillow 2013-08-31 12:41

definitely remind me of rohrer's passage. it's a very interesting game, but i would like to be able to read trough the text two times before it dissolves (which is a fantastic thing for it to do actually; when time go by the world some into existence but then then disappear again, with the flow of time).

good use of the poem, but as i said, i would like to read it through and at least get a glimpse of what it's about, so i can contemplate on this when i play the next segment.

andresh 2013-09-15 02:04

Didn't quite understood what I was supposed to do, liked the art style.