Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD53 → Feedback comment stats → Steve Sparkes
Feedback comments for LD53
Steve Sparkes's games and stats for all events →
| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | Steve Sparkes's comment | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| May 17 19:45:38 | Bianco e Nero | ♥ 1 | I got to admit I didn't quite understand what was going on, but I enjoyed getting my mouse slapped around by the cool enemy attacks! Great job! | |
| May 17 19:51:04 | 5m 26s | Skate or Die | ♥ 3 | The camera movements were very flashy! The first level where the camera pans back to the "secret mechanic" is very very cool. I found it a bit difficult to keep ahead of the "secret mechanic", but had fun retrying levels and spamming that W key haha. Great job! |
| May 17 19:56:43 | 5m 39s | Buccaneer-mail-co | ♥ 0 | Some very nice animations, very impressive! I really wanted to throw the bombs from the birds at the air balloons, maybe that could be a stretch goal for the game? ;) A really nice looking entry, great job! |
| May 17 20:01:51 | 5m 08s | Mead War Valhalla | ♥ 1 | A very cool concept with some nice flare! Visually it's a very nice game. I struggled with actually hitting the targets, but I've never been that good in aiming in games anyway. ;) Great job, keep making games! |
| May 17 20:07:00 | 5m 09s | Pier Boat Delivery | ♥ 2 | A nice and cohesive idea for only 3 days! I appreciated the attention to visuals and sound, it was a nice experience. I ended up losing lives by back tracking to islands I had just fallen off, but that's more me being dumb haha. A really nice concept with the timer for the platforming sections being driven by the boat moving along. A cool game, great job! |
| May 17 20:21:16 | 14m 16s | A Very Important Message | ♥ 1 | This was an incredible entry and I really loved it! Amazing start and end to the game with the scroll and voice acting. It was a simple concept which made it so fun to jump into another shot of the ballista, I just wish the game had been longer! I immediately sank all the money I had into the multiplier bonus and ended up blasting through the game by day 10. A really nice concept that could genuinely be developed into a longer-term project. Great work team! |
| May 17 20:42:49 | 21m 33s | Grocery Fulfillment Center | ♥ 1 | Just like in real life, the managers only get in the way... A cool entry! I especially liked the funky music. Great job! |
| May 17 20:55:57 | 13m 08s | DE/LIVER | ♥ 1 | My goodness this was visceral. A really nice package from start to finish, and it's cool to have seen multiple takes on the theme! The "Delivery" section was hard to beat without a lot of trial-and-error, which killed the pacing a little bit for me. But it still added to the whole vibe of the game, which was frankly horrific. A really artful and boundary-pushing jam entry. Amazing work; please keep making games! |
| May 17 21:01:55 | 5m 58s | Dynamic Drug Delivery | ♥ 1 | A really nice little entry. The art really lent itself to the vibe of travelling through someone's organs, which is a kinda gross sentence to type out haha. It was quick to jump into and start blasting stuff. Great job! |
| May 17 21:08:52 | 6m 57s | FAT BOBS PIZZA DELIVERY! | ♥ 1 | A solid entry! It was great fun tearing through town. I got a little too carried away and slammed into Bob's house at mach 10 when I only had 2 seconds left to deliver my pizzas though... Great work; keep making games! |
| May 17 21:18:10 | 9m 18s | To Infinibee And Beyond! | ♥ 2 | A really cute game! The music, sfx and especially the pollen covered bumblefluff made it a joy to play the game. It would be great to see a harder game mode added that has the bee drop significantly faster, so it becomes almost a game of jumping between flower trampolines! A really nice entry, well done and keep making games! |
| May 17 21:27:14 | 9m 04s | Loading Zone | ♥ 1 | I didn't get as high a score as others, but with 162 I'm still pretty chuffed! I'd love to see this game expanded on with a mechanic to call specific colours of trucks. With a significant cooldown it could be a good risk/reward mechanic where I decide if I want to clear out all my white boxes even though I can see a line of greens coming up on the conveyor... A solid entry, great job! |
| May 18 15:40:39 | 18h 13m | 《Deliver Rush》 | ♥ 0 | There's some cool art in here for sure! The character design is fun and the world was bright. I struggled to figure out how to deliver the packages, but honestly just had fun flinging the car off the pavement at max speed haha. |
| May 18 21:26:32 | 5h 45m | Tiny dropshipping | ♥ 2 | Very nice work on this! It's a great game to vibe to. I'm impressed with the pathfinding approach to planning the routes, though that didn't mean I was any better at organising my deliveries. ;) The aesthetic of the game was sleek, cohesive and probably my favourite part of it. Great work team! |
| May 18 21:38:50 | 12m 18s | Morse Messanger | ♥ 0 | A really cool concept! I've wanted to learn morse code for a while, so it was cool to jump in and start trying it out so quickly! As some others have said, messing up the last letter of a word because of the timings not being exact got a little frustrating. I kept ending up with "passwort", "passworwe" and such, where I just really, really wanted to be able to delete the last letter inputted... I appreciate you going for the realism approach, so maybe for the sequel you give the morse coder time travel powers for lore purposes. ;) |
| May 18 21:45:58 | 7m 08s | Pizza Come: Deliverance | ♥ 2 | I loved the pizza switching mechanic in combination with the pizza "recall" mechanic! A really cool concept. Having the character movement be a little slower when travelling through the air could allow for some real nail-biting mid-air platforming. A really solid foundation with some lovely visual flair. Great job! |
| May 18 21:54:54 | 8m 56s | Package Chaos | ♥ 1 | A cool concept! It would be cool to see this game remade as something a little bit more turn-based (or dare I say card-based!) as I was clicking those upgrade buttons as fast as I could by the end. ;) A really nice idea with the automation of your units, it was fun to watch the chaos unfold by the end of each day. Great job and keep making games! |
| May 18 22:08:55 | 14m 01s | Delivery Of Death | ♥ 0 | Great job on the entry! I would love to see the game expanded even further so we get to play the part after we get the 10 apples! Good work and keep making games! |
| May 18 22:11:38 | 2m 43s | Electrodrome Delivery | ♥ 1 | Gosh, I would absolutely love to play this game but I think I'm going to need to watch a friend play it haha! My tolerance for horror is super low and this game would likely kill me... Great job with the trailer in spooking me out ;) |
| May 18 22:15:32 | 3m 54s | Cargo Chaos | ♥ 1 | A pretty intense simple little game! I played the Ludum Dare version where traffic cones were prone to spawning right in front of you, so I was always on my toes. ;) Great job and keep making games! |
| May 18 22:41:49 | 26m 17s | Magical Domain | ♥ 1 | A really awesome entry! This was the strongest "mood" game I've played this entire Ludum Dare. The story was really strong in this game; it's rare to see a game jam game tackle human issues such as "coping mechanisms", and I really appreciated how much that made this game stand out. A great job with the artwork and character building. Amazing work, please keep making games! |
| May 18 22:50:18 | 8m 29s | Office Rush | ♥ 1 | A really solid entry! I loved the animations and art style, it was incredibly cohesive. The gameplay was simple and led to that "just one more run" feeling. I found the distance between the employees needing packages got a little too extreme the further in you got, but that added to the challenge! This reminded me a lot of the google chrome "no connection" dino game in how addictive the game was, so a really great job well done on this. Keep making games! |
| May 18 22:59:16 | 8m 58s | An Ocean Planet | ♥ 1 | A really strong game aesthetically. The mood set by the game was incredible, with the music, visuals and satisfying "floaty" controls lending to the forlorn feeling of travelling across and alien planet just to deliver some mail. The text was well written, and the green gates were a nice addition to keep me on track whilst still leaving me the room to break off the set path. This could be expanded into a full release, which I mean with high compliments! Great work, and please keep making games! |
| May 18 23:14:20 | 15m 04s | Bloodrush -DELUXE- | ♥ 1 | There's an insane level of polish going on with this game! I really loved the tire marks and the top-down/first person combo of gameplay and UI. I'm honestly so impressed that I've only got really nitpicky things to comment, such as the roads feeling ever so slightly too tight and I would love for my first right click to start charging a package rather than just enter me into delivery mode... but as I said these are tiny problems in the face of what an awesome entry this is. Amazing work and I hope to see more Ludum Dare games from you in the future! |