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Apr 20 10:07:02 Flower Defense ♥ 1 Hey man! So I think you created really **fun** game, I enjoyed messing with it. Here are my notes on things that I liked / disliked **Good stuff** - good implementation of Ludum Dare **Theme** - beautiful pixel-art - very cool looking animations (especially grass and water) - interesting mechanic with two types of enemies, - different types of snails, adds variations to game difficulty **Things that could be improved** - user experience -> the biggest grip for me with the game was that I wasn't sure if goblins did any harm. It felt like I could just ignore it and nothing would happen. I really missed Health Bar for player, but it looked like player couldn't be killed. - I also would like it better if Flower would have some health bar/durability so game won't end the second first snail touches it. - I was missing some sort of _ closure _ to the game, when Snail hit flower than game was over. There could be added UI for score that shows how good player did, how long he managed to Keep Plant Alive and so on - game would feel more natural if there was some background music Overall I think you did amazing job for such a short time.
Apr 20 10:31:11 24m 09s Corona Grocery Run ♥ 2 Oh boy! This one was super cool and clever. I enjoyed messing with it, here are few notes: **Things I liked** - cool idea, fitting the theme and also situation in the world - great execution, especially In The News part gave a game nice flavor and made me laugh - easy to understand, simplicity in positive way **Thing I would improve** - music -> biggest grip that I had with the game was lack of any sound, some background music would add better atmosphere to the game and some sound effect would improve user experience - options felt repetitive after a while, bigger variety would made it more engaging - I felt that In The News was mainly there to add flavor to the game, but it had bigger potential to affect your daily decisions making Overall I feel this game was very nicely executed, especially in such short time
Apr 20 10:48:55 17m 44s Fire Saver ♥ 1 Wow! This game is very well executed, I messed around with it and here are my notes: **What I liked** - brilliant idea, engaging and also fits the Ludum Dare theme - entertaining mechanics, not too complex and keeping the player focused - chill loop music adding the right atmosphere, nice touch with sound effects **What could be improved** - sometimes interacting with objects were difficult, especially on screen edges - when fire was low it was too dark, this is more of preference but it felt really snow bally. When fire got to certain stage it was difficult to get back because of the dark Overall this was really well-made game in such a short time. Nice work!
Apr 20 11:08:55 20m 00s Chains ♥ 3 Haha! This game had a lot of content for being developed in such a short time. Here are my notes: **Things I Liked** - interesting idea, I felt like playing Pokemon - gorgeous pixel-art for all the Sprites - scratches the itch for those who like more grindy games (like myself) **Things that could be improved** - game would have much better atmosphere with some background music and combat sound effects - I felt that you were in time pressure and couldn't make nice combat UI - more interactions during combat, maybe more abilites Overall interesting game! 😄
Apr 20 11:19:14 10m 19s Little Sunshine ♥ 1 Awesome! This game felt really comfy, here are my notes: **Things I liked** - very beautiful art - interesting touch with spinning environment - cool idea, fitting the LD theme **Things that could be improved** - some nice sunshiny background music would improve atmosphere of the game - At times I wasn't really sure if raining/sun had any effect on the flower and her needs very changing unexpectedly Overall I enjoyed it, you did great job in such short amount of time
Apr 20 11:42:18 23m 04s Sacred Gardener ♥ 2 Nice chill experience! I messed around with the game and here are few of my notes: **Things that I liked** - music and sound effects really made the game, it added the right atmosphere (I would honestly play background music by default, without the need of turning it on by pressing M) - simple but nice looking art - comfy, idea fitted to Ludum Dare theme **Things that could be improved** - I didn't 100% get it what exactly are plants trying to tell me, if I should water constantly or wait for some condition or how to get to the next stage and win the game - walking animation was smooth and pretty but I felt that bucket wasn't animated with it properly, it made animation look worse than it should Overall very nice work in 48 hours 😄
Apr 20 12:00:27 18m 09s Robot Tale ♥ 1 This looks very professional. Man let me tell you I played this game for a while as it's very well made, here are my notes: **Things that I like** - very good execution, from into to the end it felt that someone experienced worked on it - fit to Ludum Dare theme - perfect background music and sound effects - gorgeous art **Things that could be improved** - As I was moving right game was occasionally stuttering, I feel like it may have something to do with generation of objects? - after a while I figured out that I can just run trough enemies and just pick up med-kits, that made them non-interactive and little bit empty. Maybe add feature that they would drop some loot on kill? Overall this was one of the better games that I decided to review and I am glad to do it 😄
Apr 20 12:16:05 15m 38s Protect the Walnut! ♥ 1 I messed around with your game, here are my notes: **Things I liked** - enjoyable platformer, cool mechanics with Wallnut - challenging controls, added a layer of complexity to the game, made it more interesting - level design **Things that could be improved** - difficulty ramped up too quickly, don't get me wrong I enjoy challenging games but I felt it get too hard too quickly, I was stuck for a while at first red button and had to learn control mechanics - some background music could improve overall atmosphere of the game Overall very nice work in such a short time 😄
Apr 20 12:29:53 13m 48s The joys of parenthood ♥ 4 Hehe really interesting! I managed to finish the game, here are some of my notes: **Things I liked** - overall execution and style - different minigames, kept the game interesting and engaging - nice touch with different language translations **Things that could be improved** - music and sound effect missing, it would add another layer of atmosphere to the game, especially if you choose Singer career path - sometimes it was confusing what's going on on the screen, I think because font was hard to read at times Overall I feel I did an amazing job in such short while
Apr 20 12:53:53 24m 00s Pug Panic ♥ 2 Wow this game feels so professional. You did amazing job on it here are my notes: **Things I liked** - art is very beautiful - I love the whole idea about the game, implementation of these windows are very cool - various mechanics are simple enough, but adding them together keeps game challenging and engaging - background music and sound effect add another layer to the atmosphere of the game **Things that could be improved** - Difficulty of the game could be ramp up after a while, don't get me wrong I like challenging games but maybe keep first 30 seconds more chill until player get used to all mechanics - actually this game doesn't need that much to be released on mobile, just to polish it more, maybe add more mechanics and difficulty levels Amazing job in such short time! 😄
Apr 20 13:57:11 1h 03m Keep it Alive, Keep them Alive ♥ 1 Wow this is amazing! Dude I finished you game and I see so much potential for it, I hope you gonna continue working on it. Here are my notes: **Thing I like** - overall concept and idea is amazing - music adds up atmosphere to the game - mechanics and level design **Things that could be improved** - Consider option that you can first lay out your movemnt objects and then start the level, it opens up to create beautiful levels and removes click intensive/stressful replacing of tiles - better animation for jumping (maybe instead of jumping some "bridge" will be created Overall amazing work in 48 hours
Apr 20 14:06:50 9m 39s Block Maze ♥ 0 I finished your game and enjoyed getting back under the bed 😄 Here are few of my notes: **Things I liked** - maze design - interesting mechanics combining solving maze and keeping car moving by collecting gas - art for blocks **Things that could be improved** - consider adding background music to add atmosphere to the game - add more mechanics and levels Very nice work in 48 hours. 😄
Apr 20 14:27:54 21m 04s Look After Larry ♥ 2 Nice game, I had fun messing with, it may have potential if you gonna continue working on it, here are some of my notes: **What I liked** - very cool mechanics and overall idea for the game - in spirit of Ludum Dare theme - nice design of levels **What could be improved** - physics behave funny sometimes, there are few cases where it can be improved - more levels and new mechanics Overall very nice for 48 hours of work! 😄
Apr 20 14:35:03 7m 09s AliveBirds ♥ 2 Hehe fun little game I managed to complete it, here are few of my notes: **What I liked** - excellent art style and overall feel of the game, it looks like you exactly know how much work you can put into 48 hour period - sound effects - idea works really well with Ludum Dare theme **What could be improved** - background music on the loop for better game atmosphere - when you are away from birdies notification always shows middle bird even that others are hungry, change pop-up based on which bird is hungry Good job! 😄
Apr 20 15:29:38 54m 35s Colony ♥ 1 Fun game, here are few of my notes: **Things I liked** - interesting idea and mechanics - decision making when deciding which type of ant to spawn - pixel-art **Things that could be improved** - add music and sound effect to lighten up atmosphere - new ant types and a buildings - upgrading ants by eating foraged food Nice work done in 48 hours! 😄
Apr 20 15:38:04 8m 26s Protect The Artifact ♥ 1 Fun little game I messed around with it and here are my notes: **Things I like** - interesting mechanic changing life for boost - cool art and sound effects - implementation of some sort of achievement system **Things that could be better** - increasing difficulty, currently it's not that hard to play for a very long time, get's repetitive after a while - more achievements - add some background music to improve overall atmosphere Overall nice game for 48 hour period
Apr 20 15:47:36 9m 32s Lively Spirit ♥ 1 Haha funny game, few of my notes: **Things I liked** - nice concept and mechanics - funky art - design on levels **Things that could be improved** - some background music for better atmosphere - there is some strange behavior/bug where your human starts stuttering super hard, it happened in level 3, maybe this can be fixed - improve main menu Nice work in 48 hour time! 😃
Apr 20 15:58:10 10m 34s Metahealer ♥ 1 Wow man this is amazing, I really enjoyed this game, it was done really professionally: **Things I liked** - concept, idea and execution were on point - art was amazing - music and sound effect were very cool addition to overall better atmosphere **Things that could be improved** - sometimes it felt that there is no counter play for destroying keys and eventually you would lose game just because you can't get to heal buttons, maybe add another item that can fix keys - dps and tank level 😄 Very nice project just in 48 hours!
Apr 20 16:11:01 12m 51s Memes Never Die ♥ 1 Such a goofy game, messed around with it, here are few of my notes: **Things I like** - option to create your own meme at beginning - fits the LD Theme - nice art and sound effects **Things that could be improved** - multiple streets as "levels" - achievement for finding all citizens, using all poster spots Nice work in 48 hour period 😄
Apr 20 16:22:32 11m 31s Late Medieval Network Engineer ♥ 2 Wow this one is a gem! Really liked the game, managed to beat it here are some of my notes: **Things I liked** - great concept and execution - interesting mechanic and brain teasing **Things that could be improved** - music and sound effects are really missing in the game so it would add another layer to atmosphere of the game - more "levels" - more types of cards and mechanics with them Great work, it reminds me EVE Online Exploration data sites 😄
Apr 20 16:37:16 14m 44s The Pacifist ♥ 1 Super interesting game, one of the better ones that took LD theme for a spin. My notes: **Things I liked** - art style - concept and it's execution - difficulty **Things that could be improved** - I know you said you didn't have time to add music but that would helped it so much with overall better atmosphere for a game - more enemies with different mechanics Overall great work in such a short time 😄
Apr 20 18:27:34 1h 50m KIA ♥ 1 Wow really beautiful background music, it kinda made me little sad as I knew I had to heal the queen and wasn't able to. Also interesting take on graphics, little change from usual pixel-art entries. Nice work in 48 hour period
Apr 20 18:35:26 7m 52s Dungeon Feeds ♥ 2 Wow really nice polished game, here are few notes after messing with it: **Thins I like** - good game play, interesting mechanics, professional look - fantastic art style - nice sound effects and background loop music **Things that could be improved** - slow down the spawning of enemies, especially at start before player gets the hang of it - cut tutorial text to smaller pieces and pause gameplay so it is not explained all at once but while you are interacting with different mechanics Very nick work in such short time 😄
Apr 20 18:41:28 6m 02s Eternal Flame ♥ 1 Haha what a nice looking platformer, I played around with it here are some of my notes: **Things I liked** - art style is epic - level design is very well made with increasing difficulty - very fittting with the theme of LD **Things that could be improved** - controls felt little bit clunky at times - add more mechanics - polish some SFX Very nice work in 48 hour period. 😄
Apr 20 18:48:24 6m 56s Rent, Please! ♥ 2 I played with it for a while and here are my notes: **Things I liked** - fits to LD theme - nice and chill sound effects and background music - art style looks nice **Things that could be improved** - add more types of plants - increase difficulty with new mechanics - add watering, maybe harevesting to some box and than it can be sold Nice job in such short time 😄