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Apr 24 20:46:08 Basketball Wars ♥ 1 Solid first game! I didn't think the graphics were bad at all, especially for a short weekend game jam.
Apr 24 21:01:11 15m 03s Trophy Defense ♥ 1 Fun arcadey challenge! I like the concept and pacing. Biggest criticism is that it's difficult to see where the turret is currently pointed. I think the walls might be better with a collision than a respawn at the start line, but I suspect that was chosen for ease of implementation so I won't nitpick further. Keep working and building your skills, and you'll be making great stuff in no time.
Apr 24 21:10:08 8m 57s Project T.A.R.D.I.S. ♥ 1 Love it! I also had the bug @incobalt mentioned, but other than that I really enjoyed it. Very creative. Only design criticism is that the font is a bit difficult to read.
Apr 24 21:20:26 10m 18s Hats on Clouds ♥ 2 Very impressive! I definitely like the racing/tower-building concept, and the graphics were impressive for a weekend jam game. The controls were a bit wonky and there wasn't much explanation for them, but that's forgivable for a jam.
Apr 26 00:10:16 26h 49m Survival Racing - LD41 ♥ 0 I like the idea of survival + racing, but to be honest I'm not really sure were the racing comes into play here besides the starting line and timer. Also, I echo @TheMonsterFromTheDeep 's notes on pretty much all accounts.
Apr 26 00:14:38 4m 22s Don't Shoot (Visual Novel / Tac Shooter ♥ 0 Interesting idea, but there's not much of a game there at the moment to rate. Only real complaint I had besides lack of content was that sometimes it seemed like the game would choose an option for me instantaneously when I was trying to choose the other one? Also, the main menu music didn't seem to fit the content.
Apr 26 00:34:12 19m 34s Crops in Space ♥ 1 Great VN! Very innovative to use actual game/management mechanics in the VN format. Amazing art, and great music. I actually played all the way until the end. One thing that I think might be a bug, though: when I chose not to land on a planet at all, it just kept counting negative distance once I was past it and never disappeared, even when it was over -100 LY away.
Apr 26 01:25:49 51m 37s Harvest Rune ♥ 1 Love it! Amazing for a 72-hour jam game. Cute graphics, fun gameplay, and most importantly, a very innovative idea.
May 2 21:42:32 164h 16m Desert Drifter ♥ 0 Wow, this was amazing for an LD game! I agree with most of the other comments; especially love the graphics and atmosphere. One addition that would have been nice would have been some sort of exit/quit button or control somewhere. If it was there, I never did find it. And... obligatory "here's my game, plz rate": https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/41/the-mad-kings-tournament
May 3 17:47:00 20h 04m Hit 'em harder ♥ 1 Decent idea, and I actually find the graphics kind of charming. But even with your explanation, I still couldn't really get the commands to work very well. I also think there was a bug with the "values" thing? I played the rape whistle card, and the only thing that changed was a "." next to my "0" instead of changing it to a 1, which I think was supposed to happen? Also, I found the "rape wistle" and NORM" cards to be a bit classless. Don't poke fun at things like rape or call things "retarded", even in jest. Lastly, I don't usually point out typos in things like LD games because we're all rushed and make stupid mistakes, but the English in the game's text was consistently bad enough that it was distracting.
May 6 14:56:51 69h 09m Piece of Paradise ♥ 0 Fun little survival game for a weekend project. Although I couldn't quite figure out how the game actually works; some more detailed instructions would be nice. Couldn't cut down trees, and wasn't quite sure what was going on with the plants aside from "press space and sometimes something will happen". But very impressive!
May 6 19:03:33 4h 06m ASM Hell ♥ 1 Wow, loved it! Although I encountered a bit of a near-gamebreaking bug. After using the "are you stuck or want to learn more" link once, every single time I hit enter it would open up a new tab to the webpage.
May 6 19:15:25 11m 52s Extreme Tower Fishing 2018 ♥ 1 I really like it! Graphics were great, fishing was fun, and the background music was good. Biggest suggestion I might make would be to add some sort of indicator to know what's going on with the towers while you're fishing (like a minimap or something). But what you have is amazing for a weekend project!
May 10 19:10:07 95h 54m Text Royale: The Ultimate Type or Death Fight ♥ 1 Wow, really well done! The polish level is off the charts for a weekend LD game. I like the combination of text-based and battle royale, but I also had pretty much the same idea so I'm a bit biased, haha. Only complaint is that I think it moves a bit too fast. I had trouble even reading what was going on before suffering death or something, much less actually reacting. Also, I don't know if this is intentional, but I tried to use a knife that I think I didn't actually have equipped (which is obviously my mistake, but a very easy one to make), and it said I committed seppuku and killed me?
May 10 19:49:15 39m 08s Story Collabs ♥ 1 I like it! Are there multiple stories going on at once, or does every single person see the same one?