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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | Mantlair's comment |
|---|---|---|---|
| Aug 22 13:53:00 | pyinpyang | A good simple idea. Loved it. I wish i had something like this in my mind. Anyways, cool game! | |
| Aug 23 18:52:00 | 28h 59m | Flappy Monster | Lol. Really you made me laugh! |
| Aug 24 06:24:00 | 11h 32m | Monster Jumper | gfF is where I gave up. That Down/Enter/Ctrl+V/Enter combo! A good simple game for your first compo keep it up on the upcoming ones! Here are some things you can improve in this game: <br/> <br/>-Dont make people do that combo B). A level can load itself when you die i think. <br/>-i think you can fix the problem about teleporting player when its flipping. You are using character sprite orgined from sides probably so when you flip it character moves 1 units. When its turning you just hange its position 1 units to other direction. <br/> <br/>I hope it helps! |
| Aug 24 06:39:00 | 15m 00s | Starlight | Idea is cool but i only saw one creature. And that one was like "Oh, sounds. What is this sound? *gets hit* WHOA!". I don't know maybe raise number of enemies or add a popup if thete is one on the range. Beside that cool game with completaley playeble 3D ship controls! |
| Aug 24 06:58:00 | 19m 00s | The Truth | Veeery good! The ending was unexpected. But I really felt bad at that plot twist. Which is probably the main idea of half of the games. Great bg music. If I wanna complain about something it is camera movement. But yeah i dont wanna. Great game! |
| Aug 24 09:14:00 | 2h 16m | Misunderstood | Idea is cool. I love to see people don't make games on pure brutality like me because of the theme B). Story was sad though B/. anyways keep up good work! |
| Aug 24 09:47:00 | 33m 00s | Host | Very solid puzzle idea. Last level took sime time for me. I really loved the mechanic! At irst i thought locking rooms are kinda OP. But at late levels i saw that was needed. Anyways keep up good work! |
| Aug 24 09:59:00 | 12m 00s | Mike, the sad monster | Got 5 points I believe there is a cool ending but gotta play other peoples games! A classic flixel game. Have nothing more to say. Keep up good work! |
| Aug 24 10:06:00 | 7m 00s | Amnesia | Cool game with a simple story. I smiled a bit when his chest get bloody instead of head B). And cops killing each other was also funny lol. Anyways a good and kinda complete game for a first ld. Keep up good work! |
| Aug 24 10:09:00 | 3m 00s | Monere (unfinished) | It crashes at start B/. I can send the error msg if you want. |
| Aug 24 10:26:00 | 17m 00s | Utterly not | Man am i doing it wrong? That horizontally moving rectangles were impossible for me. And i actually unlocked The Guy in Super Meat Boy. If you know what it is you will know what kind of a person am i. Are we supposed do go elsewhere befoe going there? I only have the double jump so far. I will rate the game after learning this i wanna see the rest. But music is awesome! |
| Aug 24 10:47:00 | 21m 00s | The Much Loved Monster | Well yeah writings were very very dark. Some of these games are about bad people in charge. Who voted for this theme B/. The game is good anyway. I would like read more of it actually. Keep up good work! |
| Aug 24 11:02:00 | 15m 00s | Is That Me? | A simple endless slider game. I think there was a old school game something like this. Anyways good job. Also good music! |
| Aug 24 11:30:00 | 28m 00s | Cant i just stretch my neck peacefully ? | Maaaan. It doesnt work on windows 32 bit. I wanna play it though can you make it work somehow. Web build is throwing exception too B/. |
| Aug 24 13:37:00 | 2h 07m | Alien Rush | Invasion succeeded! Nice game. I loved the idea of they are backdooring your base while you destroy theirs. But i think that Infestor should not block your troops. Besides that game is totally good! |
| Aug 24 14:13:00 | 36m 00s | Ghost Academy | Well. Minigames are cool but times were too long. I gave up on last. But plz accept me to academy. I need to play others games too. |
| Aug 24 19:21:00 | 5h 08m | KITTEN KILLER! | Simple brutal idea. I am a cat person actually B). |
| Aug 24 19:26:00 | 5m 00s | Dream | Cool story. I didn't found the other ending though. I may if i try harder but i should play more games. |
| Aug 24 19:28:00 | 2m 00s | With $1000 I could probably conquere the world. | Yeah as other stated. Good one with clicker type games. But i wish we could somehow fix that button at start. |
| Aug 24 20:12:00 | 44m 00s | Dragon Quest | Simple short platformer! Good work! |
| Aug 24 20:19:00 | 7m 00s | Moon werewolf | Cool. Very nice ambient! |
| Aug 24 21:08:00 | 49m 00s | Klonos | Coulnt finish the final fight but yeah was almost there. Neat game. Also i loved sitting texts. |
| Aug 25 14:09:00 | 17h 01m | Breakfast Cooking Simulator 2015 | Veeery good. I got the hint when game bashed my head back to the kitchen table. Very good take on theme. Is there a deeper story behind this stuff? |
| Aug 25 14:33:00 | 24m 00s | A World in Venom | Cool. Walking speed was kinda boring but procedural generation stuff are really neat. Good job! |
| Aug 25 14:41:00 | 8m 00s | Sea Monster | Yea as mantis said you can just camp under island. But yeah a simple neat defending game. Well done!. |
| Aug 25 15:08:00 | 27m 00s | Sweet Mom | This game is awesome. I loved how they were using slangs like lol like they were doing something good. Also nice ending talk. At first i did give that butterfly to the monster in cavae though. So i left there with only childs and no way to win the game B/. Anyways good one. (Music was also too sweet childs dude. This jam made everbody release their dark humour lol) |
| Aug 25 15:16:00 | 8m 00s | B(L)OB | Music fits well. I love to see how people used this theme to unleash their inner anger into pixel art creatures lel. (Just kiddin we are all peaceful game devs right? Right ...). Good one! |
| Aug 25 15:20:00 | 4m 00s | Whoops was that alive? | Good take on theme! |
| Aug 25 19:05:00 | 3h 45m | HUTAP - HUman TArget Practice | Cool and brutal. Nice blood FX compared to mines B). |
| Aug 25 20:51:00 | 1h 46m | Employee of the Month: A Binary Story | Wow, really its a cool coincidence that i read orwells 1984 today. I loved the story and i guess i havent seen everything. And drawings are really neat. I mean thay too simple but helps to story hugely. Its like Andrew Hussie style. (http://www.mspaintadventures.com/ Homestuck is the best thing ever B)). Also i think you guys coded the entire thing. I thought u used a text based game engine. Anyway i will check out the source. Good work. Keep it up! (Also i wanna make a text adventure next time. Maybe for next mini LD but i am not a native. Well its too early but if anyone wants to team up with me for a text adventure for next mini LD just dm @mantlair at twitter. I can do drawings.) |
| Aug 25 22:52:00 | 2h 01m | Oranges In Love With My Fly | Mood is really good. Piano sounds b/w and stuff. Gameplay was ok. I just wish thing were a bit faster. Ganerally i rushed levels on one lane but even though it was fairly balnced for a 48 hour game. Well done! (Also i didnt get story very well. But from your comment i get a little bit of idea yeah. I will have thoughts like this from now on. My wallet is trying to kill kinda stuff B)) |
| Aug 25 23:02:00 | 10m 00s | Llama Attack | Kinda commenting because it would be weird if i didnt. Cool idea! Probably because of time but you should add something like a range limit for mobs. I kinda moonwalked until i touch humans and sp-hit(HA HA puns) them. Anyways well done! <br/>"Jams are a very good motivative way to make a game." Also learning engines and such lol. |
| Aug 26 13:09:00 | 14h 07m | Law of Nature | Nice. I really enjoyed graphics. At the start our pokemon(lol) were rolling. Sooo Cuutee! Good job! |
| Aug 26 16:44:00 | 3h 35m | CuteAlienSlaughter | Procedural generation! Everywhere. Someone throw some procedural generator to me plz. Anyway cool graphic effects. Plants shaking! Good job! |
| Aug 26 16:52:00 | 8m 00s | Scare the Looters | Very Very good. But I didnt get how actives work properly. Thats my problem though. Good work all of you guys! |
| Aug 26 17:01:00 | 9m 00s | Motherflipin' T-Rex! | Gr8! I started enjoying destroying stuff. Thanks to this theme! |
| Aug 26 17:17:00 | 16m 00s | Glauron | Very neat. Just too complete for a compo entry. Well done! |
| Aug 26 20:08:00 | 2h 51m | Kibjow | Cool mechanics. I wish there was more stuff for playing. |
| Aug 26 20:21:00 | 13m 00s | MonsterMystery | Awesome. I wished chief made you eat something from ground. So hotdog thing would be a foreshadowing. Add this please if you happen to make another endings. Good job on doing a LA Noire prototype in 26 hours! |
| Aug 28 19:58:00 | 47h 37m | From SLIME to KING | Very goood! Just too complete! |
| Aug 28 22:49:00 | 2h 51m | Dominion | Very neat idea. I wish jumps were better. Good job! |
| Aug 28 22:52:00 | 3m 00s | I AM THE MONSTER | Lel. Good job! |
| Aug 30 13:34:00 | 38h 42m | Hope | Very good walking system for a LD game. Character is also animated. I guess you spent too much in posihing that stuff. Anyways, good job! I would like to see the full game! |
| Aug 30 14:14:00 | 40m 00s | Oko Furia | Very good. It just cathces the theme. I will probably play this some more time. To relax myself! Please make a mobile version! |
| Sep 7 08:05:00 | 185h 51m | Tenebrous Expanse | Cant open the zip file on linux for some reason. I'll try on windows in some time i hope. |
| Sep 11 19:38:00 | 107h 33m | Goomba Simulator 2015 | Well done! Just great! |
| Sep 13 11:01:00 | 39h 23m | Fired | Very good mechanics. Bullet control was neat, it wasnt even clost to being buggy. |