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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | offwhitefox's comment |
|---|---|---|---|
| Aug 22 12:54:00 | The Labyrinth | Please put the game.exe file in the archive so that those of us without the engine can play :) | |
| Aug 22 22:33:00 | 9h 39m | Captive | Nice job :) It's a little difficult to predict how rocks are going to fall when you move and that can end up causing some silly mistakes that just end up getting frustrating though :/ |
| Aug 22 22:36:00 | 3m 00s | Defenses | Welcome to Ludum Dare ^^ I like it, though I'd prefer a little more challenge. Grats on your first game though :D |
| Aug 22 22:47:00 | 11m 00s | Escaparazzi | I love the way you've approached the snake game with this. Makes it much more challenging than the original :). Good job |
| Aug 22 22:49:00 | 2m 00s | Escape Adventure | Awesome :) Just awesome! I love one-button games, and this Escape take on it works really well :D |
| Aug 22 22:54:00 | 5m 00s | Escape from the Labyrinth | Would work much much better with some sound and a better sense of space. As it was, I felt like I was lost the entire time, which meant I wasn't really engaged in the game. Better luck next time :) |
| Aug 22 22:58:00 | 4m 00s | Escape in 60 seconds | Not bad, though the level design seems haphazard and random, and the AI is completely unpredictable. Cool mix of dungeon-crawler and frantic-race though |
| Aug 22 23:15:00 | 17m 00s | Heartbreaker! | Cool idea! The ice queen is way too powerful though, it seems like your balance is way off for 1v1. Especially being able to drop monsters right on top of people and then reactivate the ones they just killed...Otherwise it makes a neat sort of mazing game :) |
| Aug 22 23:24:00 | 9m 00s | I'm Being Eaten By A Spider Queen (And I Don't Like It One Bit!) | Great! Just Great! I love Lesbian Spider Queens of Mars so this is a great and interesting spin-off puzzle game |
| Aug 23 01:23:00 | 1h 59m | Escape the Zombie Horde | Cool, though I think I've seen a similar flash game out there before. Nice work for 48 hours. |
| Aug 23 01:29:00 | 6m 00s | Escape Puzzle | Nice work :). I've always liked these sorts of spacial reasoning puzzles, and I think you did a good job of puzzling here. The game crashed for me after the big level though, so sad :/ |
| Aug 23 01:32:00 | 3m 00s | Escape! | Neat idea, but I think you could have stretched a little further. It's Memory, with all the inherent benefits and flaws as such -- the challenge mechanic really isn't there. Next time I hope you can dive a little deeper :) |
| Aug 23 01:33:00 | 1m 00s | Escape! | As expected :) |
| Aug 23 01:35:00 | 2m 00s | Infection Run | Tis a pity that you couldn't see it through. I hope what you learned from it is applicable to your next #LD48 game :) |
| Aug 23 01:40:00 | 5m 00s | Land of Colors | Cool idea! I like the tandem keyboard gameplay, though it's really tough to play alone. Also, please cut the coughing out of your music next time ;) |
| Aug 23 01:47:00 | 7m 00s | Maze Escape | Nicely done. Well executed idea with a solid mechanic. I have to echo the complaints about the corners, though I did find it easier once I started holding down the keys of whatever direction I was going to move in next. Well done :) |
| Aug 23 01:54:00 | 7m 00s | Quean Bee | Cool idea, though it's not particularly intuitive. It also kind of turns into a who-can-mash-the-keys-faster game after a while, since defending makes it a zero-sum game. Would be nice if you got a bonus for shooting down an enemy bee somehow... |
| Aug 23 02:00:00 | 6m 00s | Rescape | It's a good start :). I've tried XNA in a game jam before and I know that it's a bold choice in engine. This game could really use some sound as well as a little more polish (like the main character still being around in the end screen :/) |
| Aug 23 02:04:00 | 4m 00s | Robot Tunnel | Neat! It could really use some sound, and visual distinction as well. It's really really hard to see most of the bullets, which is bad in a bullet hell like this one. |
| Aug 23 02:09:00 | 5m 00s | Run Escape | Awesome idea, making those escaped characters escape ;). If I modify the source code files do the levels change? Could make for some really cool modding :P |
| Aug 23 02:13:00 | 4m 00s | Runner! .. and his problems.. 1.1 | Great job :) You did a neat trick by having the danger come from the smaller side of the screen, makes you feel very anxious because more danger could come at any moment. Also great graphics, but the resolution is very tiny on my screen :( |
| Aug 23 02:17:00 | 4m 00s | Stupid Escape game | Neat game :) |
| Aug 23 02:22:00 | 5m 00s | Tetts escape! | Reminds me of the 8-bit days of my childhood :). With a little more work it could be a really cool retro throwback game ^^ |
| Aug 23 02:27:00 | 5m 00s | Your Pals Have Escaped! | Very challenging indeed! Audio would be nice. Could use some further balancing in terms of the way the difficulty ramps up over the level. Otherwise, it's a pretty good showing :) |
| Aug 23 02:31:00 | 4m 00s | ...andTaxes | "Death always goes after your love first" my kind of morbid :). Could really use some audio though. Otherwise, good job ^^ |
| Aug 23 02:40:00 | 9m 00s | BATHOS | Fantastic! Can I vote for you for president? |
| Aug 23 02:42:00 | 2m 00s | Beam Runner | Cool game, though it's pretty conventional. Also, pretty tiny :( |
| Aug 23 02:44:00 | 2m 00s | Cave Escape! | The random level generation is your biggest downfall. Probably would have been better to build a lot of different levels and select each at random so that they're all at least beatable. Otherwise, it's a good start and I hope to see your next #LD48 game :) |
| Aug 23 02:47:00 | 3m 00s | City Runner | Neat idea, though it really isn't as much fun as it could be. Also needs some audio. The levels seem really imbalanced, as the ones I got seemed to have most of the enemies on one side of the map, and next to none on the rest. After some more work, it could be really cool :) |
| Aug 23 02:51:00 | 4m 00s | Crime Zone | Very interesting game :). It feels like a visual novel though I'm not sure taking any other paths would explain anything (not that I'd want to understand). Could use some sound though! |
| Aug 23 02:55:00 | 4m 00s | Dragon's Bloodmoney | I love to see LOVE2D getting some exposure, it's where I learned lua ^^. This feels sort of unfinished to me though, like there were supposed to be enemies or some element of challenge that didn't make it through. Maybe next time :) |
| Aug 23 02:57:00 | 2m 00s | Escape Run | Welcome to Ludum Dare ^^. This is a good start, but it needs balancing and some more depth. A circle shooting other circles isn't particularly interesting. Audio would help as well. Just things to keep in mind for your next #LD48 :) |
| Aug 23 03:03:00 | 6m 00s | I am Ourobouros | Neat game, though it could use some sound. I'm not really sure what you're trying to say with it...it feels a little like "Every Day the Same Dream" mixed with cynicism about gamedev...Keep working on it and make it even better :) |
| Aug 23 03:06:00 | 3m 00s | NO ONE CAN STOP THE HARDWARE HERO | Cool! Though as the comments above me echo, it's not particularly innovative. The cyan are also a little hard to see against the white background. Wouldn't mind some better art too ;) |
| Aug 27 02:37:00 | 95h 31m | (For Android) GetThatFellowOut | I couldn't get this to install on my EVO4G. I dropped it onto my SD card and tried to run it with EasyInstall like I usually do but it wasn't recognized. So sad :( |
| Aug 27 02:45:00 | 8m 00s | Mate Escape (LD) | Not bad, though toward the end it was too fast to react to birds coming, or to get fruits and whatnot, so the balance was really off. |