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Games

YearLDThemeGameDivisionRankOvFuInThGrAuHuMo
201841Combine 2 Incompatible Genres👥Solo defense!jam
201738A Small WorldYOSILand (Your Small Inner Land)jam6812.762.292.772.742.772.752.523.04

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Comments by tn7111

LD38 — A Small World

Saviour by ALeal_Dev 2017-04-29T14:26:10Z

A nice game actually. Though there could be more reason in all of it. I'd give more reasons to scroll, especially down. Now there's nothing for you at the bottom. Trees, for example, could spawn at different points and you could collect smth from them. Would give much more dynamics to the game. Anyways, good luck and thx for a nice game and webgl version.

Our little island by tinyworlds 2017-04-30T10:12:29Z

A cute game, matey! It's a pity, very short and Safari did not play sounds for me in html5 version((( Liked the art style very much! Take a look at mine, matey! We are on the same page! :)

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------>[YoSILand](https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/38/your-small-world-2)<-------

S P A C E C H U N K by nonameghost 2017-05-01T07:00:37Z

Overall

A nice idea overall, especially for such a short period of time, though I really do not get operating everything via the command line, except there's a good reason for that. What I'd advise is to control the bots via some sort of a dialogue, create some type of smart AI. "Work, work" "Be happy to" etc. Yeah, I know it's time-consuming. Just for the future development of this particular game. Smth like "/go harvest" and the bot knows where to go without any additional clicking. You do not really need that extra-click. Let it be smarter :)

Some sort of a dialogue could occur: you: "go build" bot: "no mun - no fun!"

Et cetera.

Gameplay

I really lack a nice little goal here. A goal is a game. For now its a toy and an idea. Give me a reason to operate.

###Art and Music. Totally awesome. Go on with that.

Sum up.

Please go on with that. The game deserves its development. Your strong side is art. Let it blossom. And add some humor and purpose. That will build you the 1st prototype worth pitching to a publisher or kickstarter. GO ON!

Colonized Panda by Pashok 2017-04-29T11:49:13Z

Love the idea (made a similar game BTW), but yeah, the waiting and the subtleness of the consequences did not let me reach the end. The clearer short-term goals and the overall goal of the game together with the understandable progress indicator would let this blossom!

YOSILand (Your Small Inner Land) by tn7111 2017-05-02T13:10:01Z

Hi everybody! Thank you very much for the comments! @lars-dk, yeah, the grammar is terrible. As you may guess, all was added in the latest moment and needs fixes - smth I'm going to focus on. And yeah, obviously pixelated font and all the text issues I shoud've addressed in a text-based game. @timtipgames, so you guys think there should be more interactions with THE GUYS. Like you are more supposed to interact with them then just answering questions? I like it! I guess this is smth I gonna focus on! Thanks to your comments I feel like the game is actually something worth developing further. So I guess I'll go on with this))) I'm really excited on how well-built this jam is. It actually by its nature pushes a nice feel of community inside here where everyone gives support instead of pure and cheat-prone competition.

Finitely Big by gemcc 2017-04-29T15:05:38Z

Never managed to launch the web player on my mac

Quantum Catburetor by jushiip 2017-05-01T06:24:34Z

Sorry if my comment duplicates someone: too long to read everything up here.

Juice and feel.

A great game overall. It has that juice and feel everyone is talking about. And it's most important. You, guys, really know what to do.

Music and Art

I like the music and the art style. All these wiggles and shrinkes and colors are great.

Humor

...Though I loathe the cat topic pushed all over the internet. :(

Tiny little humble piece of advice.

About shrinking. Just limit it at some point. It will still be hard to play, but at least you'll be able can. And after that one hit causes death. That's all. And the game will be great.

Sum Up.

I really wish you continue this after the jam up to the Steam. This game worth it. Just get rid of that cat! :)))

Daily Routine: the smallest worlds are the ones we get stuck in by Samurai Spark 2017-04-29T14:41:44Z

Not really got it from the 1st time! Nice game, nice twist to the topic.