It has everything! That sense of discovery and revelation when you first see the []SPOILER FORWARD[]
[]SPOILER ALERT[]----side drawers(Imho you could've hidden them more and played around the concept of seemingly simple box with secrets opening etc.)was just breathtaking; That sense of completion once you see that you can take a hang of *your* life and things get to work so well!.
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I also would've used the desk as a placement tool for easter eggs and funny things, e.g. every time you start a new profession a collectable related to that job appears on the desk.
Another suggestion would be use a randomly generated name system and appearance system just to make it a little more "personal" and then create a genealogic tree to see how you escalated in professions and possessions trough time!
There are a couple of bugs here and there (e.g. if you put hearts on the job drawer and then decide to change job all your tokens are gone forever), and the graphics don't feel polished enough (maybe a better shader? A more realistic and defined enviroment with light sources? Who knows!
In conclusion, I see lots of talent and expandability in this project and I'm looking forward to further development!
Very good art and nice concept with a clever "map", took a while to understand what I was doing.
In my opinion, though, the reflections are excessively aggressive and text is not very readable, waves are too sparse and too fast... definitely this game is not suitable for epilectic people (I also got a little bit of motion sickness by playing this lol)!
I hope that my feedback will prove useful, good luck!
P.S. let me know If you're ever going to share the source code 'cause it would be interesting to see some tricks ;)
LD44 — Your life is currency (4)
Jamsterdam by fonserbc 2019-05-04T11:46:23Z ♥ 2
Funny gameplay! Great graphics and great concept! This deserves a good rank, and a big thumbs up!
Token Life by PixelMeal 2019-04-28T21:19:08Z ♥ 1
Hooo-Ly
This game is fabulous.
Entertained me from the beginning to the end!
It has everything! That sense of discovery and revelation when you first see the []SPOILER FORWARD[]
[]SPOILER ALERT[]----side drawers(Imho you could've hidden them more and played around the concept of seemingly simple box with secrets opening etc.)was just breathtaking; That sense of completion once you see that you can take a hang of *your* life and things get to work so well!.
[]END OF SPOILER
I also would've used the desk as a placement tool for easter eggs and funny things, e.g. every time you start a new profession a collectable related to that job appears on the desk.
Another suggestion would be use a randomly generated name system and appearance system just to make it a little more "personal" and then create a genealogic tree to see how you escalated in professions and possessions trough time!
There are a couple of bugs here and there (e.g. if you put hearts on the job drawer and then decide to change job all your tokens are gone forever), and the graphics don't feel polished enough (maybe a better shader? A more realistic and defined enviroment with light sources? Who knows!
In conclusion, I see lots of talent and expandability in this project and I'm looking forward to further development!
Good Job!
Polar Delivery by onnofal 2019-04-28T20:42:30Z ♥ 0
Placeholder comment! Lemme know when Windows build is ready|
DISREGARD LIFE, ACQUIRE CURRENCY by notb 2019-04-28T17:25:36Z ♥ 4
Definitely my favourite for now.
Very good art and nice concept with a clever "map", took a while to understand what I was doing.
In my opinion, though, the reflections are excessively aggressive and text is not very readable, waves are too sparse and too fast... definitely this game is not suitable for epilectic people (I also got a little bit of motion sickness by playing this lol)!
I hope that my feedback will prove useful, good luck!
P.S. let me know If you're ever going to share the source code 'cause it would be interesting to see some tricks ;)