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YearLDThemeGameDivisionRankOvFuInThGrAuHuMo
202353Delivery👥Delvery Servicejam11372.842.812.693.713.283.232.792.86

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Comments by natirlich

LD53 — Delivery

Don't get fired! by Zettelkasten 2023-05-05T10:49:44Z

I needed to restart approximately 6 times but finally it worked and I understood how to distract. You've managed to make the whole thin engageable, with a cute plot and fun gameplay. Only thing I noticed is, that the game does not work in fullview. Precisely: whenever someone is supposed to move anywhere the person is bugging throughout the map. After I noticed this does not happen in the small window I just kept that. But it made it hard to pass the doors in direction of the office, because some icons were shown over the door and I coudln't see were I was walking. All in all good job, this is a fun lil game! :3

Deliver Us Evil by k8n 2023-05-04T19:26:15Z

I really enjoyed the riddles, I came until lvl three, then I was a little bit confused. I understood at least an (I think) important part of the similarities but could not apply them as neccessary. After visualizing the translated numbers to myself the first riddle went pretty fast (but not at all too easy). Well done. All in all a cool little game with an interesting ambience but maybe a little hard to solve riddles.

Congrats for your entry :>

Deliver Us Evil by k8n 2023-05-05T13:11:52Z

Edit: I managed to play through and finished the third level, I've overseen an apostrophe and accidentally had a wrong chain once ^^' But I wanted to let you know I had fun and could make it in the end 😊

Comedian Keith by catbutt 2023-05-05T09:45:15Z

I really liked how you delivered the topic heh. Since I am addicted to puns I was very curious how you've implemented jokes in general. I liked the gameplay and It's more or less doable but it was very hard when the people throw more stuff (crazy, how they got mixers, washing mashines and tubes with them, they must be hulk ;D no critic though, I liked that somehow xD) and typing simultaniously. Reading the jokes as well was sometimes impossible for me. I'd suggest to make a voice over for the jokes if you ever work on this further. All in all it's a fun game with cool options and fitting graphic, it feels kinda finished (but as the people throw more, the chains of typing grow and one can't read the jokes anymore it feels a bit unbalanced). Good job there :3

eelBay by Peco 2023-05-04T21:07:43Z

It's such an appealing beautiful game! It works fine and makes fun to play. I really enjoyed the different designs for the fishes/eels. I couldn't say it otherwhise than: you've nailed it! :> I could imagine feedback for players would have been nice in the end, I think I saw the time shrinking evenly, a cool thing would be to get extra time whenever a ship has got its stock (reloaded). Therefore one could play to get a score and to challange oneself and there would be a reward: to play as long as one pleases (and is fast enough) unless time runs out ;D Also a "You got a score of [...], press r to restart" option would be nice I'm amaized by the management of the size of the game which is acutally small but comes with much input and replay-wishes. You've very well done :D

edit: oh god guys, I just got the pun, earlier I just thought the colors were google related or so... you are genius...

Delvery Service by Reispfannenfresser 2023-05-05T09:29:06Z

@pauldee427 Thank you for your constructive feedback, I did not try to cheese it myself, therefore this is a good advice! I'm happy to hear that you liked it as a base for a fun game :))

@phoenix-fireflower thank you for your feedback! :3 Unfortunately we hadn't enough time to implement the planned feedback for wins or looses in the end. But you are right, that would have been a good addition :>

@zettelkasten haha, that made me smile, thank you ;D I totally agree, he'd probably do that - at least I'd do that too (especially because of the avocado, it's surely hard to wash that out of the uniform).

@ironhandmd thank you for your kind and constructive feedback, I can relate to your suggestion, that's a good advice! :3

Delvery Service by Reispfannenfresser 2023-05-05T11:14:52Z

@stmatn Thank you very much :3 Relatable, that you were confused, here comes the explaination: as soon as you've delivered the package, you've won the game. Congratulations! unfortunately time ran out and we just implemented that last step where you deliver the package, but could not manage anymore to let the player know about the win... ^^'

Cooking is Relaxing by Lenan 2023-05-04T20:42:30Z

I appreciated the experience of this cozy but yet stressfull cooking game. At first I did not completly understand but afterwards I found out where you've explained the commands. Ist a very nice idea, with appealing and much input which is really hard in such a short time. I noticed that the screen gives back an error when one presses the big playbutton, but it works with the appearing smaller one. At the end of the day I was just thrown back into the menue, any short appreciation of what one achieved the day would have been nice but I totally get that that probably was a time issue (we had the same problem). Thanks for letting me testing, all in all I really like your game for the ambience and functionality (once one understand the gameplay - which happens fast enough, it's easy and fun to play)

Deliver letters... IN SPACE by Phoenix Fireflower 2023-05-05T10:26:01Z

It's a cool game, fun to play, a little bit stressfull but engaging. The game teached me how bad I am in coming up with words, but nevertheless, good job!

Yours always, Delittah by alyd asmar 2023-05-05T08:59:52Z

I am amaized by the details you managed to implement. The graphics and sound design were breath taking, especially the different treehouse-designs were beautiful. I could relate to the teacher who got overwhelmed by live now and then most. I could not figure out how the character-storys really went on, because I read each thoughts each day to choose who needs help most. Usual I decided for Kazzie, each once for the workerhollic and the teacher, but it felt like it all didn't help much. Last but not least it was an enjoyable experience. Just as others I did not fully understand what "I" was, but I liked the idea of putting special emotions into those letters... Also I like your running gag how the main character was developed xD

Not Fit For Human Consumption by ironhandMD 2023-05-05T11:04:37Z

I got an error on your page, someone mentioned it earlier as well. But nevertheless I could run the game :DD

I enjoyed the relaxed task to put the articles into packages, the first four levels I found the game a little bit slow (which was good in the first level, until it started I understood how it works. For the other levels I waited a bit long on when the next goods appear). When it finally gets faster (the longer you play), I feel more challenged which is welcome :3 I only noticed that sometimes the boxes can not be dragged and dropped, especially when it's getting faster. That brought down my motivation a bit. The Music fits well but is a little bit loud.

All in all I enjoyed playing and had fun, thank you and keep it going :>

A journey about... The Delivery by matid90 2023-05-05T10:13:28Z

I like your game loop, it's clear what to do and the boxes are a good idea to overcome the riddles. I have not managed to complete level three, because I was too annoyed by the rats. It would habe been nice if one could move the boxes also in lvl 3, but all in all your game is fun, well designed, suits the topic and has replay-capacity. Well done :3

Fruit Flinger by FruitFlinger 2023-05-04T17:49:27Z

I love your graphics and the amount of details. Furthermore your music was very pleasing and suits the game, the idea seems relaxing. Unfortunately it was kinda hard for me to aim right, I played approximately 10 minutes and had a score of 2,5 but maybe I'm just not good in estimating the angle. I also needed a few minutes to really understand how to load the sling shot, because I didn't notice I automatically carried the fruits. Afterwards it was still difficult. Nevertheless a cute game with beautiful graphics and one can see the love you've put into it!