gevernus 2026-10-19 12:55 ♥ 3
a cleaning robot waking up in the library of a vanished civilization, "Remove dust. Sort waste." quiet and moody. the UI feels polished. only saw the first chapter so cant judge the puzzles yet
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD60 → Real Intelligence
By akylai, erzhan, ker0o141, wake442sur and rustyashburn
🤖 AI-Assisted
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|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | LD60 | Ever | |
| Overall | 37 | |||||
| Fun | 36 | |||||
| Innovation | 36 | |||||
| Theme | 36 | |||||
| Graphics | 1 | |||||
| Humor | 33 | |||||
| Mood | 37 | |||||
a cleaning robot waking up in the library of a vanished civilization, "Remove dust. Sort waste." quiet and moody. the UI feels polished. only saw the first chapter so cant judge the puzzles yet
Sorry to bother you! I recommend keeping the web page window at a proper zoom level, as you currently can't click the "Continue" option when playing directly.
Cool game love the story
Nice work! Really fun core loop and a great take on the theme. Had a good time playing it! Left full ratings. Cheers from the Meow Bomb team, feel free to drop by our page if you're looking for more games to rate!
@yibirabbit007 fixed
@nursultan Great 👍
An interesting story
Interesting idea, but i have really bad with optimization. But i think the problem is in my pc
Cool game! Always fun to see Twine submissions. The art was fun. I _think_ I found all the endings, but I might have missed a branch or two.
It's a good story! The art is really beautiful.
Cool, got several different endings, possibly even all of them. I think it was four different "real" ones not counting the early exits and other similar ones that felt like failures.
The story of the world seems cool but the pacing of telling the story feel a bit rushed. I mean you don't really get enough to fully immerse yourself in the world. Would probably need a bit more "fluff" filler stuff to build up the ambiance instead of basically every message box delivering the next important twist. Obviously that would make replaying different endings a bit more tedious but would make the first ones feel more alive.
The art was great to look at and the music nice and soothing. Cool little variations on the playback speed to liven up some situations. Dunno if it's just the engine you were using thing or what but the playback speed on settings didn't work (or couldn't be changed). I'd always prefer some slowly appearing text making it feel a bit more like you're hearing the text. Sometimes you can kinda spoil what's coming with a glance at the wrong spot.
Another thing that's probably just the engine thing but it was kinda annoying to have to sometimes scroll when not playing full screen. Would probably happen with less wide aspect ratio screen too. Increasing the embed area size to accustom the lengthier text could be an easy fix (and something you could still do behind the scenes without breaking the rules as it's not changing the game itself).
On my first run through I did the side with bots & return to future ending which was a bit linear. Nice to see that the other (longer) endings had a bit more interactivity in the form of minor puzzles. More of such things would have been cool, a bit more gamey instead of just "pick the obvious right answer that will not immediately give you a bad ending".
Anyways, good job! 👍
@antti-haavikko Thanks for your feedback! We'd love to improve our game, but it's our first real project.
https://ldjam.com/users/antti-haavikko,Hello! Thank you for this feedback, we really appreciate it. Regarding the screen, we messed up a bit. We wanted to do something even more immersive than this story, but we ran out of time, so this is our 'final' version. Also, in our first version, there was an effect with our text, but bugs spoiled it, so we decided to stay with static text. Thank you so much! It will help us in the future. We're going to subscribe to your YouTube channel.
https://ldjam.com/users/nursultan,we tried your game and its banger! nice job guys and thank you for this comment!
Cool!
I liked this graphics, nice work!
cool design
Cool little visual novel, reminds me of Choice of Life! Lovely art, fast-paced storytelling that never drags, and relaxing ambient sound. Great job!
An unusual story of an ordinary robot. Great work.
I really like the idea and the game’s interface, but it feels like there’s even some AI influence in the art. But it’s still awesome!
Wow, great job! I loved how the choices shape the story, from the time travel twist to deciding whether to merge with the Archivist or cut its commands. The robot refusing its first order really worked. Congrats!
The game is short, but i liked the theme and concept. Made in Twine i see, realy good job. No bugs faced. Great story progression. Loved it
Nice game overall!
I think it would have been good if you clearly declared what part of the project you realized with AI and which one you handled out youself. It feel like the interface and the art are AI generated, so I was wondering if you wrote the story fully by youself as well.
I really love the art style of the game! It would be nice to have a longer story, but overall, I really like the fact that there are multiple endings. Great job!
A cleaning robot waking up alone in the library of a vanished civilization is a lovely setup, and the quiet, moody tone fits the old tech theme well. The character art and the UI look polished. The story pulled me in more than the puzzles did, but I liked where it was heading. Nice work.
Good game!