hermanlejter 2023-05-01 18:34
Artwork was cute, game concept was cute, too! Wish the moment-to-moment was a little more interactive though.
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD53 → Stork inc.
By ntimi, lespaul59 and Hendrik Schnütgen
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Overall | 503 | 3.65 | 25 | |
| Fun | 573 | 3.45 | 25 | |
| Innovation | 729 | 3.17 | 25 | |
| Theme | 412 | 4.08 | 25 | |
| Graphics | 489 | 3.84 | 25 | |
| Audio | 468 | 3.39 | 25 | |
| Humor | 490 | 3.26 | 23 | |
| Mood | 931 | 3.11 | 24 |
Artwork was cute, game concept was cute, too! Wish the moment-to-moment was a little more interactive though.
What you've made was made well. I would give the ability to show all of the dialog so we can read it faster if we want without having to skip the intro. The gameplay itself was a little too simple for me, but I'm sure it has it's audience. Cheers!
Hi! I had fun, the gameplay loop is simple but effective and the intro was charming, beautiful and generaly super well made! (I also smiled at the fact that both our game include a grandparent letting us in charge of the delivery office) On a technical note, I found myself trying to select my birds right as they delivered the babies and had to wait until they were not under the "parent" sprite anymore, although it might be by design? Nice work overall!
Love the story art, great style. Gameplay was fun too. I found myself getting lost in what storks were in flight, especially near the end when I was managing 6-7. Learning curve is perfect though, day 1 I was like oh I get this. Day 2 buy more birds, ohh okay, Day 3-7 I was a delivery machine.
Great job.
Overall I really liked the game, however sometimes it just stopped working for me. I couldn't interact with anything and had to restart. Other than that, it was pretty fun!
Thank you for the comments and feedback, you all! :)
@tom-oak Oh, you're right, storks go under the markers! That seems like a bug I should fix. Thanks for the notice.
Love the graphics, subtitles could go one by one, so I can click to see the next. The gameplay is simple and the fun starts at couple employees :-)
A very fun game when you can buy all the birds at once after the first day, and not understand what is happening at all. I loved it. And yes, it's possible that the problem is that the score can go into a minus score. Overall very cool and great design!
The logo of this game is really impressive, with a very professional design that looks like it could be a big company's logo! The characters and scene designs, drawn with pencil and colored in, are very cute. It's a great game!
I liked it! The main idea, art, and gameplay loop is basic but that doesn't mean it was bad. If this were to be expended a bit more I could see myself playing more!
Nice game idea! I like that with each day more animals appear. Also the dimming at the end of the day is nicely done.
Great game! It did get a bit repetitive, maybe add more strategy by giving each employee stats, such as speed
Really nice entry.
Some slick touches in this one. The fading out of the day, the nicely done difficulty curve, the (IMO) really lovely background art.
A really solid foundation to which you could add more clicker mechanics, like upgrades, automatic play unlocks etc.
Was a fun game, I messed up my elbow earlier in the day so a spam clicker was a challenge but pushed through the pain. Feels like the start of an idle game almost, kept expecting to see some sort of manager or auto routing purchase available :P
Nice game! I haven't really been able to manage more than two or three birds at a time, especially while trying to assign tasks in a more or less coherent way based on the distance between the bird, the baby and the adult waiting for the delivery, but it gets somehow easier game after game. Love the concept!
The art and background music is really nice. It's a great entry!
This was really well-executed, and I would totally buy this on the app store for those times where I have five minutes waiting in the doctor's office. Loved the sound and music choices; great job!
I'm glad to be able to play your game. The art style of the game is very cute, and I really like it