FoonLudum Dare ExplorerLD53 → Neon Delivery

Neon Delivery

By hugetube

View on ldjam.com

CategoryRankScoreCount
Overall1053.8124
Fun503.9724
Innovation2893.0624
Theme3722.8824
Graphics1883.6124
Audio2053.2321
Mood1213.5923

Comments

xdrngy 2023-04-30 21:39

Love me a good geometric neon aesthetic. I feel like I have already played many variations of this game. It's a good game though, I'm happy to play it again.

hiinds 2023-05-01 07:53

Very fun game that reminds me of many small games I played when I was young

minibetrayal 2023-05-01 07:59

I think the resolution may be bugged a bit on the embed? might just be me but the edges of the screen were cut off

Otherwise, good clean fun with a nice aesthetic.

kgurniak91 2023-05-01 09:23

The resolution is a bit off (cut off edges + scrollbars) but other than that a fun game. I think it broke on level with blue line? After touching the flag everything froze and I couldn't reset. Maybe it was the last level?

kaptajnen 2023-05-01 12:28

Quite a fun game, I really like the art style

evogengames 2023-05-01 13:29

Good difficulty curve and nice amount of levels.

Good job!

katya-pavlenko 2023-05-07 15:03

Hi! I really liked the game! Used to play something like this on my phone few years ago.

geckoo1337 2023-05-07 15:34

There is something wrong with the WebGL games hosted on the LD site. Can you post an Itch.io version too. 1.3Gb for the source code? I could download the code source in order to test your game, but 1.3Gb for a tiny game - I don't understand. Thank you ++

agameortwo 2023-05-07 15:44

Neat game! I played through the whole thing, I liked the silly scrolling level at the end.

hugetube 2023-05-07 15:47

@geckoo1337 Fixed! here's the link: https://huge-dev.itch.io/neon-delivery

mrtroy 2023-05-07 16:19

Screenshot from 2023-05-07 09-17-59.png Still no download. Make sure it's not saved as draft.

hugetube 2023-05-07 16:20

@mrtroy does it work now?

mrtroy 2023-05-07 16:24

@hugetube Yes it does.

geckoo1337 2023-05-07 16:27

@hugetube it works. Thank you ++

mrtroy 2023-05-07 16:36

This is quite the challenge. It requires a lot of thought if you're going to go for 3 stars on every level. I didn't think I would get through it at all. But when I got to the last level... :grin:

I think you need a few levels in the beginning that prepare the player better for the difficulty. It ramps up almost instantly and I found myself just completing the levels as opposed to wanted to get the 3 stars. This is quite a good concept, and if you're going to explore it more, you should put the number of stars you collected on the level select screen.

Good job.

kitira 2023-05-07 16:39

Nice game! I like the neon style.

praccen 2023-05-07 16:59

Cool! Looks nice, and I like the audio design and pause when drawing lines. Would have liked to be able to go back to a previous level and see a list of all levels. Good job!

hugetube 2023-05-07 17:01

@praccen you can trough the main menu!

praccen 2023-05-07 17:03

@hugetube Oh my, I'm stupid :laughing: Sorry

krzyhau 2023-05-07 17:31

Nice little puzzle game. However, I have some issues with it.

Occasionally, the ball would gain some unreasonable momentum while rolling up the slope, which I assume comes from the torque, but it's completely unclear since the graphical representation of the ball doesn't communicate its rotation. So you might wanna either change it (maybe a small notch in it or a cross? It's really up to you) or change the physics so the torque doesn't have so much impact on how the ball travels. Or maybe it's just my unreasonable need for precision... Either way, other than that and lacks in SFX (lack of time to properly prepare it I guess... which is expectable) a basic idea for a game well executed. The gameplay overall felt nice - I'm especially appreciating the slow down when you're drawing the lines. The last level also has an interesting twist to it and I wonder if you thought about taking it further - maybe you could make an infinite procedurally generated scroller out of it? Nice format for something like a mobile game.

Overall, good job on your submission!

hugetube 2023-05-07 17:50

@krzyhau Thanks for your feedback and suggestions, they'll be helpful when I develop this game more.

codexzier 2023-05-07 19:42

Simple, neon colors and small guesses I like. Well done :thumbsup:

zubspace 2023-05-07 19:46

Awesome little game! The concept is super nice and some levels really got me stumped. The puzzles are great and you introduced many cool mechanics step by step. Love the way the time slows down with the sound effects. The neon look really makes it shine. Huge thumbs up!

francis 2023-05-07 19:55

This was a really fun game!! Well done :) Was able to get 3* on every level except the first one with curved arrows, just couldn't figure it out and had to settle for 2*. Would be nice to be able to go back to it :p I thought at the end with the 200 Lines it was going to be like an 'endless' level, was that what you guys were going for?

I thought you did a great job with the level design in terms of having a simple, straightforward solution, then a more difficult one to get the optional stars.

yoddaa 2023-05-08 06:37

@hugetube very cool ball puzzle line game. good job.

brovovar 2023-05-12 22:05

Cool little game. Reminds me Crayon Physics Deluxe. I was able to beat 7 levels. The only thing which I found a bit annoying is a level design which sometimes made me draw lines with the exact angle to collect all start.

bluedandelion 2023-05-16 18:04

I need to inform you about this very weird bug (idk if someone already mentioned it) where for some reason after I draw a line it draws another one and stays in slow motion until I actually draw another line. Other than that this was a pretty good game I'd say.