zeena 2023-05-02 03:12
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Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD53 → Your Delivery is Here
By zeena, shigure0213, knx, heyihang, Ricketcarolyn, miao and ginluy
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Overall | 561 | 3.60 | 22 | |
| Fun | 1030 | 2.88 | 23 | |
| Innovation | 971 | 2.87 | 22 | |
| Theme | 933 | 3.47 | 23 | |
| Graphics | 121 | 4.42 | 23 | |
| Audio | 322 | 3.64 | 23 | |
| Humor | 901 | 2.53 | 18 | |
| Mood | 203 | 4.00 | 22 |
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An interesting and scary game, strongly immerses in the atmosphere!)
Amazing work, this game has a very high degree of completion, the art style is great, the game play and game theme is very consistent, so people have a sense of immersion
Great work, really enjoyed this one and love the art work :)
Amazing!!!!!!!
What an excellent art style!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great game!!love the art style, very impressive.
Awesome stuff, artstyle is amazing, can't stress how visually good it looks, aside from that, it's pretty much a bog standard platformer, nothing new or interesting. Atmosphere makes up for that though.
I like the art style!!!
Really enjoy this atmosphere.
The art style is very good! The Chinese-style horror style is so cool!
I really like the creativity of using the theme of express delivery in this game! ：）The fusion of sensory elements is particularly clever. The artistic style of the game is very attractive to me, and I look forward to this game being shortlisted and even having the possibility of being published! ( ^ω^ )
If this art was made by you, it's amazing. The movement is a little quick and janky but the platforming is decent. The audio is a little annoying and it doesn't really add to anything but the mood. Speaking of, the mood is really well done and genuinely disturbing. Honestly, my main criticism is the janky player movement. Otherwise, everything else is great.
This game is really scary and that's great! I'm happy that I finally see a heavy style game which has balls. I love it and I admire you
Amazing work! Really enjoy the artstyle!
interested in this art style and theme, can't wait to play
The game is really fun and the overall graphics are compelling and highly recommended
This game is remarkable! The game mechanics are well-balanced and challenging, keeping players engaged and motivated to continue playing.
This is a very fun game! I like it very much! The style and content are indestructible
and i wanna say I very like art style, and the story background is also very interesting. Look forward to more works in the future.
I must say that the team did the game planning as well as art style are very attentive (Chinese horror and atmosphere creation), you can see the production team in the creation of the trajectory of thinking and thinking about the depth. Although there are bugs when experiencing the game, given that it was a short production run, the finish is really high and I don't spare myself any praise, thank you for allowing me to experience such an immersive Chinese horror game, it's amazing! Excellent! I hope you guys can get out of the ring if there's hope, and of course, if further development can be uploaded to steam I'm sure more people will enjoy it! Looking forward to it! :-)
这款游戏真是太棒了！它的画面精美、音效逼真，玩起来非常有趣。游戏玩法独特，深受我喜爱。同时，游戏还提供了许多不同的关卡和挑战，让我一直保持着兴趣和动力。总之，这款游戏是我玩过的最好玩的游戏之一，我会向所有喜欢玩游戏的人强烈推荐它！
Wow very good artistic view. It's remind me things like Mandy movie for the athmoshpere.
I love the player character. My only regret is that there is no special mechanics in this platformer. Strong art :art:
It is hard to believe that this work was completed in such a short period of time. From the complete idea and art style, we can see the excellent art foundation of the producer. I am looking forward to the author's future works very much!
I like the atmosphere of the game, good job!
Maybe the controls could be a bit smoother, but it's fun
Amazing art style and atmosphere, but sometimes not smooth control. Good job!
Amazing art! Some of the visual effects were very disorienting and hid the art more than I liked. Good sound design as well. Pretty hard little platformer, especially the first time you encounter the jagged vertical shaft with moving platforms. The spikes on the walls had a slightly too large hitbox in my opinion.
This is a very cool game and very difficult, only the rotation effect interferes with the passage of the game and for some reason the model increases if I jump. You can also endlessly jump near the wall to get out of the map.
Awesome artistic direction! The sound was amazing too. The jump felt nice but everything else around the platforming could use some polish (smaller hitboxes, coyote jump, etc...)
The movement felt really good, which is so important for a platformer. The player speed was just right and made it nice to control. Unfortunately, as other people have mentioned, the visual effects were a bit overwhelming, especially with the rotational blur. I also had the model occasionally stretch horizontally, which sometimes clipped it into spikes. Overall a pretty fun experience, and I especially liked the art.
The atmosphere is so good, really creepy and scaring. I'm impressed by the amount of beautiful artworks u managed to create! Especially loved the last one in the intro, with the guy staring at you. The audio is also very well done, delivering (lol) the mood perfectly, I felt uncomfortable and unsettled (which is a good thing in this case). Not only the artwork and music, but the direction of the intro is very interesting, loved everything about it and that alone was an impressive work!
The gameplay though, I mean, I still like the atmosphere and the amount of visual stuff that it is in it, let's say, on a "sensory" level (visuals, sound, mood) it was well done, but the gameplay, not at all.
As first, the way u control the character is very very basic platform and was not good. There were some visual glitches, like the box stretching, I did not understand and were confusing.
The hitbox are too big and get hit too easily, it feels unfair because, to me, it felt like I was not even close to the object hitting me. U usually do the hitbox smaller than the visual, not bigger. Some jumps are too precise on a height level, and since the controls are so basic this sometimes required to press jump before moving, otherwise I would have not been able to do that 1 pixel more to go over the platform. It might feel like "u need to get better" but it just feels like I can't do what should be very simple and easy.
I also encountered some body parts, the leg, which I could not reach (guess it was impossible?) and the body at the end, but could not interact with them. Not sure if the game has an ending after the body bridge.
In general, the level design was artistically interesting, but not very interesting gameplay wise, maybe because it felt too generic. At some point, I got outside the level by walljumping, which was kind of fun lol
As others have pointed out, even though I liked being overwhelmed by sounds and visuals during the gameplay, it felt a bit too much always. With this I mean that there was no change of pace, it was just a lot for the whole duration, while it would have probably helped to have moments of relative calm to have a better pace and make the "a lot" moment stand out and also not get boring and annoying.
Minor things, the click here to close button could have just been a properly scaled X without any other text annoying the player while watching the beautiful intro! Second one, since UP is not used, u could have made up also jump together with space, so people can pick their preferred one. After a while I realized that the rocks were the checkpoints, maybe some visual thing happening when u touch one could make that more clear. Besides, u should opt out of the humor category for the jam, I mean it doesn't hurt but it will not have a huge rating in theory since there is no humor in your game.
These are all suggestions related to the gameplay, but I want to remark how I am impressed by the artistic work on this, amazing work!