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Convicted

By riverc4 and notakira

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CategoryRankScoreCount
Overall11373.5317
Fun6083.6317
Innovation13363.2317
Theme2.6716
Graphics19612.9617
Audio15452.2917
Humor4.3216
Mood9473.5318

Comments

isayneigh 2020-04-23 23:00

Ha this was a good one. I enjoyed the simple pixel art style. The audio was juuuuust enough to create an atmosphere. And the humor was great too! Pretty good for a first game.

the most constructive feedback I could suggest is improving the GUI. It's understandable why it's barebones given it was a jam, it was just something I noticed. Otherwise good job.

creamybacon2 2020-04-23 23:15

That was a lot of fun! That was so far the funniest game I have played. I tell you what I played through it several times so I could see the different outcomes and it was hilarious! If it had a bit more polish and a few more options and animations I would but that game. Good stuff. ldjampic6.png

fpgames 2020-04-23 23:45

This game was just AMAZING!!!.. I had a blast playing this..The dialogues are so funny..Good job guys!

cheesepencil 2020-05-05 00:56

Haha these characters are great. The dialogue is pretty good too. Well done! If I had to criticize I would say that using right click for text advancement is a peculiar choice for a vnovel. I enjoyed it.

mark-keeble 2020-05-05 04:00

Really fun submission! I loved the dialogue. It was all really funny and enjoyable! I will say it took me like 2 minutes to figure out I had to right-click to advance the dialogue in the beginning. After I found out though, it definetely felt better than had it been on like spacebar or something. Maybe next time just sneak in some dialogue that tells the player to right-click.

Regardless I had fun, good luck!

ryan123rudder 2020-05-05 07:56

Super funny! Keep working with it and you'll have such a cool game!

ryjcio 2020-05-05 08:50

Lol I thought I lost all of the days, but in the end, the guy thanked me for an amazing job. The hell? Still very fun game, I loved the 'vacuole' bar and the whole atmosphere from the plant world. Nice one!

abdurrahman-khallouf 2020-05-05 12:44

well this deserves a high rating!

it was hilarious, I hate this font as well as pixel fonts. but this one was actually funny it kept me reading.

great job. I didn't let the criminal explain his motives. because f him.

I really enjoyed this one.

also I don't know if you know this. but you have to give feedback to get Karma and your game will be prioritized. I am only saying this because in your stream you said you wanted more feedback.

igor-kingamer 2020-05-06 00:29

What... was that XD

Looks like your choices don't change the outcomes. Anyway, that was funny and enjoyable :D Good job!

kubs 2020-05-06 11:40

Very nice entry, the story and humour were really good.

riverc4 2020-05-10 01:46

@ryjcio Ha! One of the bugs we had was not being able to give the proper ending at the end, so currently everyone always gets the best ending by default lol. We'll definitely do a better job at squashing bugs for the next Jam... Thanks for playing!

riverc4 2020-05-10 01:50

@igor-kingamer Haha, one of the bugs we encountered was with the news. We tried to make it so that if you chose the correct case, the news the next day will actually be positive instead of negative. We'll for sure be better about that during the next Jam. Thanks for playing!

riverc4 2020-05-10 01:51

@isayneigh Thanks a lot for the feedback! Rest assured during the next Jam we'll have more experience and (hopefully) a better outcome in terms of GUI.

riverc4 2020-05-10 01:52

@creamybacon2 Hey, thanks! I appreciate you playing through to see all the dialogue. Thank you for playing!