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Immortals (and Mr Pickles)

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Percentile
CategoryRankScoreCountLD42Ever
Overall3.256
Fun3.256
Innovation2.636
Theme4.386
Humor4.256
Mood3.886

Comments

garygreen 2018-08-14 17:15 ♥ 0

I loved the humour in this fun piece of interactive fiction. Made me laugh out loud on the train. Nice work. :)

knarf 2018-08-15 10:25 ♥ 1

Awesome to see you deploy your writting abilities and humor in a text game :) It's really nicely written, fun, like what I think of a good short novel. I didn't explore all the possilities in narration yet but I'll sure come back to it later. At begining I almost felt sad for the dog thinking it might really be your dog. That's a very good use of the theme and has an original content (as usual). Also GG for the reference to the only and only one good "metal" cartoon. GOOD BOY. Great ! Hope you're doing fine, Cheers!

g12345 2018-08-17 14:16 ♥ 0

That was a pretty funny story, and you've managed to help me solving a messy puzzle from another game. Yes, nice text game with some bonus points. ^_^

commanderstitch 2018-08-20 02:56 ♥ 0

wow. Super moody, and the best thing of all that i was wondering the entire time was: the money. It magically adjusted itself depending on which path you took. HA! nice! and then the nice twist at the end. Who'd have saw it coming?

aurel300 2018-08-21 12:52 ♥ 0

> wait a year

I found it interesting how the feeling of a dystopia could be felt from the very first lines, even before the catastrophe happened. What a sad, sad little world.

laaph 2020-05-01 14:12 ♥ 0

I came here to rate a game, and after I played, I find it was made for LD42, not LD46. Ah well. :)

This game was... depressing, I would say.