diwo 2018-08-12 08:13
Hyped by your game !
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD42 → Mystical Intrusion
By yojammerjammer and Auwren
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Overall | 586 | 3.39 | 30 | |
| Fun | 472 | 3.34 | 28 | |
| Innovation | 648 | 3.11 | 28 | |
| Theme | 394 | 3.73 | 28 | |
| Graphics | 262 | 3.94 | 29 | |
| Humor | 106 | 3.71 | 28 | |
| Mood | 184 | 3.65 | 28 |
Hyped by your game !
'Protagonistville'-- that's a really awesome name for a town.. haha! :)
SORRY EVERYONE FOR THE LATE UPLOAD. THERE IS STILL A MAJOR BUG THAT ISN'T FIXED.
Really enjoyed playing your game. Made me laugh a lot!
Really impressed with the amount of dialog written for a ludum dare game. The story was adorable and I enjoyed the art style all around. I am not a huge fan of interactive novels, but this was fun and short enough for me to stick with to completion. It seems there were multiple endings, too, which is neat.
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I got this error message. I really liked the idea and it was refreshing to see a Renpy game here. I'll wait for the post-jam version!
awesome :).. the bugs were no game stopper for me. all what is bothering me, is that i drove this poor goblin away :[ .. is there an ending with him around? if one day you make this game any longer, add some action parts like in undertale or pony island, and viola masterpiece.
I checked out your game as I had said I would....... and it was AMAZING!! I wasn't able to finish it, though. I had to run out all the three times I played :laughing:. Also, the humour was nice. Overall, great job!
P.S- I did not seem to get any bugs (in the Android version).
I love the illustrations.
Great game! Very cool and interesting! :D
Love the scenario. Plus the execution is super cute and not overworked at all. Loved meeting all the new little friends in my home. I like that you allowed the player to create a playful mood out of the whole thing instead of what I would've assumed to be a harsh/negative one.
Nice art style :) I really like what you did here !!
This was a really lovely game ! I really felt moved by some of the themes you discussed in the game, and I feel this is a very intimate and good take on the theme !
The whole story is pretty great. I finished the game with 50 stress ! I really sympathized with all the creatures living in the house (especially fairies :D ), and the super cute design was pretty good!
Only complains would be that the sound can get a bit too much repetitive. It fits your story but gets a bit redundant after some playthrough !
Also I feel like the game took an easy turn in the narrative : being nice and comprehensive makes you win, the opposite make you lose since it raises stress level. I didn't try to make a playthrough and raise stress level, but I feel like this is the "bad ending", I'm maybe wrong so please point this me out if ever :D !
Anyway, I felt like this "easy turn" might be a cheap solution to writing, and I would have liked a bit more choices and more hesitation about creatures. Pretty sure you ran out of time but this would have been great !
This was a really lovely game, thanks you for sharing this <3 !
The story is so cute! This visual novel is really well thought out and written. The length of the story is really impressive for a LD entry. In the beginning there was something off with the dialogue. Where it implied I had already met other mystical creatures when I came across my first. Otherwise, everything went smoothly in the story.
The visuals are really lovely too. Only thing that irks me is that the stress bar looks so out of place. Maybe if it was the same style as the rest, but filled in with color? The audio is very suitable, but a little repetitive.
Overall one of my favorite entries this LD. I wish I'd see more visual novels on here.
Was really interesting story but not much connection to theme. liked the music and graphics. sometimes the text doesn't align well with the decisions I made before I talk to a person, but overall good game.
Artist for the game here! Thanks for all of the support and feedback, this was my first game jam :)
i really loved the artist *___* good job (y)
I wish I could hug that unicorn.
Wow, a lot of work was put on this! Great art style, long story with a many branching and endings~ I was able to live together with everybody :smile_cat: Also made the stress 100 just to see what happens :laughing:
Cheers!
Nice game, I hope to see more updates and improvments sooner. If you don't bother take a look at our game when we focused on Graphics and visuals and see the results that we got: https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/42/spacelab-42
Great job !
Enjoyed it ! was funny and nicely done, a solid effort
I liked it, it was funny, well writen and had a nice theme. But I had some gripes with it, personnaly I don't really like the art style and the music got annoying very fast. Overalll nice work, I'm pretty impressed you made this in a jam.