mathstr0 2015-08-24 02:51
Great game!
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD33 → Dark Entries
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Coolness | 3 | 74 | ||
| Mood | 381 | 3.32 | ||
| Theme | 418 | 3.59 | ||
| Humor | 755 | 2.32 | ||
| Overall | 812 | 2.89 | ||
| Fun | 850 | 2.62 |
Great game!
Well written. I enjoyed it quite a bit.
I liked the "toy with him" part, fits very well with the theme!
Great Game. I enjoyed seeing what was going to come next.
I did get into a stint where I didn't have any choices, other than that, great game.
Why not, the logic good working.
You could put images with the text. :)
Didn't get it, sorry
Very good for the ratings, I've played through the whole thing even though it looks much more suited for the female public. The part where you mentioned the club was "bitchin'" got a kick out of me :)
Very disturbing! It was a well written story. Good job.
This excellently captured the theme, and the story was solid, but I wish that there was more GAME to it. Each of the decisions were essentially one of two extremes to choose from and I would have liked to feel like I had more options and more control.
Loved it, got my attention from the beginning to the end :)
I liked it! I don't play a lot of Twine games so I'm not sure what the field overall is like, but this had some nice moments. Good humor and the chase scene was exciting too :)
A nice game/interactive novel with great writing.
Well written.
This game gave off a really good mood :) Writing is good!
Really well written, good job!
Very well written! Extremely immersive & quite dark! Would be nice to see some branched endings or further story - this is really great for your first Twine game!
Very nice text. ^^
Very well writen and captures the theme well. For me it needed more options and branching to make it more fun. It was too linear.