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The Crack

By r0x0r

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CategoryRankScoreCount
Coolness279
Graphics3283.53
Humor3822.71
Mood4203.14
Theme7333.06
Innovation8722.64
Overall9122.81
Audio9951.67
Fun10702.37

Comments

r0x0r 2014-04-28 01:27

i had to cut down the history.. but, well.. i hope you understand the history

mess110 2014-04-28 09:14

when the story got interesting: shocker! cool graphics

snooze82 2014-04-28 09:16

i like your drawings

lars-faust 2014-04-28 09:18

I immediately killed myself jumping off a cliff, only to respawn and then kill myself once again after finding out i also killed some other people.
What a plot!

gabbsson 2014-04-28 09:19

Really loved the twist ending! Interesting artstyle!
Cool game overall :)

jsmars 2014-04-28 09:19

Simplistic yet shockingly fun because of the humor. I like the simplistic graphics as well! Good job!

jase 2014-04-28 09:27

Twist ending! I liked this :)

christophe 2014-04-28 10:28

Love the Doctor Who reference in the end :D. Really Nice Graphics, Pen is cool.

lrnk 2014-04-28 14:27

Wow, that took a sinister turn! Very nice art style

SethR 2014-04-28 14:28

From the man who waited to the man who killed everybody?!

sknoslo 2014-04-28 14:29

I love the art and the story. Kinda wish there was some more game play though! Good work.

quill18 2014-04-28 14:29

The jumping was a little wonky, but I love the hand-drawn graphics. Would love to see this expanded to a full platform/puzzle game.

franklins-ghost 2014-04-29 11:38

Like the drawing style and think it would have been a nice touch if the writing was hand done also. Interesting game and the story is a good twist.

soupwithbits 2014-04-29 17:43

Full game! Full game! Full game!

ruerob 2014-04-30 10:42

I like the game. It's a pitty you hadn't enough time for the story. Thank you for that game.

gettothechapel 2014-05-01 09:50

awesome style, no gameplay value however :)
could be made really fun!

r0x0r 2014-05-03 02:31

Thanks everybody for the comments =)

I added a post-mortem post, http://www.ludumdare.com/compo/2014/05/02/the-crack-post-mortem/

thegamefather 2014-05-03 02:57

I like the art style, clean and simple, but expressive. For the gameplay, I think it lacks some variety. Maybe you could add more stuff in the level design so that the great story can be told in a more interesting way :)

quickfingers 2014-05-03 11:19

Nice mood here, ending was pretty brutal!

skipi 2014-05-03 18:31

I really liked the hand drawn style

pitoum 2014-05-05 15:40

Try to match the font with the drawing next time, it'll be more powerful :)

melondonut 2014-05-09 08:13

I want to play it more. if there are more scenes, it would be fantastic.