sfernald 2013-04-29 18:30
Really enjoyed this interactive fiction. Set a nice mood. Was surprising how much you were able to do with twine. More than just a choose your own adventure.
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD26 → Trapped
By hopps
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Coolness | 3 | 50 | ||
| Humor | 496 | 2.31 | ||
| Mood | 758 | 2.68 | ||
| Fun | 1060 | 2.39 | ||
| Theme | 1105 | 2.88 | ||
| Overall | 1143 | 2.55 | ||
| Innovation | 1238 | 2.04 |
Really enjoyed this interactive fiction. Set a nice mood. Was surprising how much you were able to do with twine. More than just a choose your own adventure.
Pretty nicely built.
I like seeing Twine do interesting things - some neat ideas here.
Nice to see different types of games like this! The riddle made me laugh :D
I liked it. People are learning to do some great things with Twine and it is good to see that.
Oh cool, I liked the narrative :) Fun and interesting!
The riddle was cute, and the interaction with the other character was also amusing. I could have done without the maze part, personally - didn't think it added much to the experience.
Solid text adventure. Not my type of game but the presentation fits the theme ;).
Made it out! ^_^ Reminds me of the text adventures of yore...
Cool game, nice to see a Twine game making good use out of vars!
Oh I managed to feel the sun again.
Halfway I even stumbled upon a man with a bag of potatoes. Hah!
That was nice.
A text adventure! Glad to finally see one of these. If I could critique it a bit I felt that it lacked real choice - most options led to dead ends, leading the player ultimately down a linear path.
Whee, escaped! I never trusted that old man.
I like how you managed to create actual puzzles in Twine, something I'm not very good at. (I like the additional puzzle content in the post-compo version, too.) On the downside, the plot is rather run-of-the-mill, and the writing is very sparse and has some typoes. Still, nice use of puzzles in an interactive story.