You Villain

Category	Rank	Score
Coolness	3	50
Theme	69	3.92
Humor	222	2.96
Mood	374	2.76
Fun	461	2.64
Overall	652	2.42
Innovation	724	1.91

dan-jeffrey 2012-12-15 17:00

The DL link goes to the Dropbox homepage, bud. :P

cniangel 2012-12-15 17:18

I know xP I don't have a build up yet. Working out a couple things.

mamoniemm 2012-12-17 04:42

what a strange game !

cniangel 2012-12-17 04:56

Why thank you :)

loren 2012-12-17 07:12

great narrative, love the intro instalose choice hah

the-jack 2012-12-17 07:13

I could think of worse things than being stuck with a "chick".

cwilloughby 2012-12-17 07:20

I like it. Would love to see it fleshed out more.

aaronyip 2012-12-17 07:57

Woo! Everybody's happy. :D Charming game, agreed.

cniangel 2012-12-17 20:24

I'm glad that everyone is enjoying it so far :) I wish I had made it longer though.

bloodyaugust 2012-12-17 22:07

Short, filled with grammatical errors, not much detail to set it apart. Would've liked to see more quality out of a text-based 48 hour game.

cniangel 2012-12-17 22:37

Thanks for the criticism :) I should point out that I did this in an hour, not 48 of them. It would've been a lot better.

hackthepanda 2012-12-18 01:48

For the time he put into it I think it's pretty funny, wish he would have been able to finish his other game though. CNI you should do one of these weekly, with different themes each week and post them on twitter

hackthepanda 2012-12-18 01:49

You could follow interesting techy/social stories throughout the week and then make text-based comedy adventures based on them. Like you could have made a text adventure on the shooting.
On second thought maybe this isn't a good idea.

cakencode 2012-12-19 00:45

loren took the words right out of my mouth, I had to press that first choice. Epic end.

The writing was fun, but it was a bit short (or it feels that way because there are so many branches). Good work! Hope you expand upon it :D

tobiasw 2012-12-19 00:46

Okay, you obviously nailed the theme. (Probably with real nails. Driven into the remains of a princess.) Apart from that, it's a bit short and well - every second move ends the game. When nearly every move is an ending, choice seems to be a bit arbitrary. The humor was nice though.

I think I would've enjoyed the game more if it featured a longer coherent story line. But then again, I just read the comments and found out that you made it in only 1 hour, and for that it's pretty good I guess!

raubana 2012-12-19 00:54

The story starts. "You're the villain"........FIVE STARS, TRIPLE PLATINUM, 4 STARS, A+

cniangel 2012-12-19 02:52

Thanks everyone! :D I'm about to update the summary in a second, but I am currently on a longer and more detailed version of "You Villain" :) In a perfect world it should be done before the year ends.

h-attila 2012-12-22 00:42

I agree that it's a bit short. Also, I haven't tried every variations, but I almost always won. It should have more ways to fail.