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Evolution: A Parallel Narrative

By banseljaj

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CategoryRankScoreCount
Mood323.74
Innovation1073.54
Theme1623.46
Overall2263.24
Humor2492.44
Fun2553.00
Graphics4392.71
Coolness66744

Comments

zapaman 2012-08-27 09:42

The game get's stuck when I have to choose between:
-Time Lords
- Biological Evolution
Can't progress any further!

karel 2012-08-27 10:14

You can progress if you refresh. Original approach to the game, props for doing something completely different AND interesting. Also, bonus points for Doctor Who references.

theomnis 2012-08-27 10:18

Really neat...I'm in love with this engine. I got stuck at Time Lords and Biological Evolution, too, but saving and refreshing worked for me.

banseljaj 2012-08-27 13:30

I have now fixed the problem with Time Lords/Biological Evolution choice. Enjoy.

agersant 2012-08-27 19:09

Nothing happened when I clicked "Come in!". I was enjoying the story =)

mach60kas 2012-08-27 19:31

The design of the website is certainly striking; the textured background makes it feel as though you're reading a real book. I found the story as a whole very interesting, and the ending certainly gave me a chuckle! :) I'm really glad to see that text adventures have grown in popularity this year - and yours is particularly excellent! :)

lemontree 2012-08-28 17:20

Very unusual game!

90sml 2012-08-29 17:34

I really liked the firs level... because I couldn't go any further eve if I press space :s
And the jump sound is kind of anoying about a few minutes :p

revelorenfield 2012-08-30 15:30

Cool, I'm a vengeful god, now.
Amazing game and nice use of jQuery :)

cappagames 2012-08-30 16:35

This is a cool idea and well executed, good job.

puzzlem00n 2012-08-30 18:50

Such a strange and wonderful multiverse you have created. Amazing.

matheod 2012-08-30 19:56

I'm going to note this game really well because of the idea and the really good interface, but then I see you use a library. So there not really innovation :-(

matheod 2012-08-30 20:03

I'm very upset : I love it at first sight, found it perfect, if I always wanted to create something like that, I never get the idea to create it like that. It really well thinking, it's incredible. And I saw its a library. So it's just text entry. For me there no innovation, the idea was here before. :-(

sience 2012-08-31 14:18

Great. Would be more cool if you had updated the graphics or css. But anyway ... great to see a textadventure here.

samoojamies 2012-09-02 18:51

Whaaat!! The future of book reading. Cool stuff!

evilseanbot 2012-09-04 05:04

Interesting and with a good pace

I also got stuck at "Come In!" though. Sad face.

banseljaj 2012-09-04 15:32

Save and reload the page plz. :)
I haven't been able to figure out what the hell is causing that. :(