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orange thing

By elvis75k

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CategoryRankScoreCount
Humor6901.70
Graphics7602.21
Mood7842.00
Fun8271.89
Overall8402.16
Coolness85133
Theme8541.94
Innovation8961.50

Comments

angrygeometry 2012-04-23 19:14

i really liked the background. with some dreamy music it'd be super. overall, nice little job.

TaoPhoenix 2012-04-26 22:26

Cute little entry. I'll go easy on you, since I can't program at all. My easiest improvement would be to have spent just a wee bit more time on the graphics, even half an hour, to make the main character be a smiling critter with a hat or something. Maybe 7 lines of text would establish a meta-joke that you're stuck in an Atari, just to turn the retro look into humor.

elvis75k 2012-04-27 10:23

hehe thank you! I can't wait to start another compo; i've learned so much lately :)

azurenimbus 2012-04-29 23:12

Cool backgrounds!

The graphics don't bother me in the least. I'd suggest making the character move a bit faster, but I guess that's more of a subjective thing.

matt 2012-05-03 21:20

I liked how much depth the background added. Nice job for your first time.

datw 2012-05-03 21:30

Hehe, this was my first LD too. As simple as it is, it's still a game, part of the 1K plus made in just a weekend. Remember that you already won just by making a game. Think about those who will never make one. Nice job dude :)

robert-swan 2012-05-03 21:47

For a first attempt - you've got jumping, moving platforms and parallax backgrounds (always a must!). Congrats!

demonpants 2012-05-03 21:51

Cool be cool, but isn't quite there, unfortunately.

aardvark 2012-05-03 22:35

Background is really cool :)

terrified-virus 2012-05-03 23:09

Is there any way to play it without unity web player?

elvis75k 2012-05-03 23:12

@Terrified Virus: download the zip (windows) and run the .exe

kevinworkman 2012-05-03 23:51

Like others have said, you've got the basics here which is great, but they need something else to make this a playable game.

brighterorange 2012-05-05 20:31

I love the character graphics, actually. :) But when I do it one more time, nothing happens!