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Apr 15 22:43:07 You Are Gnome-Caller ♥ 4 It was fun to try to get the right melodies and challenging but not too challenging. I think I got all seven melodies, but there was no indication I had gotten them (unless I somehow missed something). I like the fun animations of the goblins--had a mischievous feel.
Apr 15 22:57:32 14m 25s Angel's Inferno ♥ 4 It froze at 140s on the timer as I tried to put out a fire in the dining room. I'll give it another shot, but I thought you'd like to know. Edit: On my second try, it didn't freeze. I got to 54 seconds remaining. It's tricky and I'm not sure I understand how to do some things that need done, like turning off the car. But it is a fun and interesting little game! I like the physics and the sporadic nature of the events. Nice work!
Apr 17 05:06:42 30h 09m Summon Dungeon ♥ 0 A straightforward and fast paced game. I wasn't sure how the sword worked (was it animated?) but I enjoyed running around trying to survive. Good work!
Apr 18 16:03:48 34h 57m Chechik's Adventures ♥ 1 Took a little to get the hang of it, but once I did, it was tough to stop pushing for a new high score. Good work! Screenshot 2024-04-18 100221.png
Apr 18 16:19:38 15m 50s 💀 Soula Cola🥤 ♥ 1 Simple fun. I like typing games, and this was a good one. My favorite drink was the Unholy Cherry Nectar. 🤣 I saved 78 lost souls... Nicely made. The only critique I'd give is that there wasn't always a portal for the lost souls that were activated, which added a layer of challenge but also removed a little of the fun (felt a little shortchanged). But the challenge scaled nicely with the increasing number of lost souls to guide. Very nice work.
Apr 18 16:31:04 11m 26s Dr. Kappasigma's Summoning Training ♥ 3 This was pretty funny and simple and clear. I thought the spinning symbol mechanic was a good idea--pretty unique. The sacrifice math was... I mean, dark... but a comical choice. Sound effects and art were good, and the ending was a humorous surprise.
Apr 18 16:42:19 11m 15s Star Seed: Apocalypse ♥ 2 I really like the art and music and sound effects. Feels like a start to a great game. I appreciate your "Future Features" list of what you would have liked to have. I think the most important (for me) would be the heart HUD. In any case, great work!
Apr 19 17:41:19 24h 59m Orcs vs Skeletons ♥ 1 It took me a bit to get through Wave 1 and get the hang of things, but it is fun. A good concept and overall good execution. It might be nice to start with easier enemies that gradually get harder. But a great entry.
Apr 19 18:25:40 44m 21s Mansion Madness ♥ 1 I like how you turned the concept around and made the player the one being summoned. I also like that you made a number of minigames. The variety was good with nice replayability. Solid work!
Apr 19 18:43:02 17m 22s Daemonis Algebra ♥ 2 This was a little tricky at first, but once I figured out how much time was lost each time I bumped into something, I improved drastically 🤣 I managed to get a couple of decent matches but never got a perfect one. A couple of suggestions would be making it clearer how to defeat enemies (which I think was possible, at least for some) and gaining a little time back. In any event, a really fun entry with humor and a unique way to approach the summoning component. Good work!
Apr 19 19:17:04 34m 02s Save Baby Cthulhu ♥ 0 A solid entry for the jam. I liked the overall gameplay of it. I wish there was an option to fully reset everything. The poor little cries of the baby cthulhu 😱 🤣 Nicely done.
Apr 19 19:34:31 17m 27s Path Of The Nature ♥ 1 I loved the artwork. Very nicely done. It was more of a brief interactive story than a game... and the interaction was fairly predetermined... I'm not sure there was a way to fail. Would have been nice to implement a different mechanic or puzzle for each totem. That said, beautiful work, sad story, and solid entry!
Apr 19 20:15:24 40m 53s Call of Aether ♥ 2 Very nice work. A little tricky, but very beautiful. A solid entry. I really like the simplicity of the concept and the puzzle aspect to finding the right combinations. I did have to use your spoiler/cheat sheet. But again, a great game! Good job!
Apr 20 04:57:08 8h 41m Infernal Contract ♥ 1 Really great little game. If I had any suggestion, it would be to make the gameplay just a little longer. Maybe a few other words to put into the mix and have multiple levels with some shorter words and some longer words... something like that. In any event, a great entry to the jam. Great art and style, music was good, game had no issues. Great work!
Apr 20 05:05:54 8m 46s Sick of Summoning ♥ 1 A really fun game. I like the art style, sound effects... and the game is just fun. Good job!
Apr 20 05:34:09 28m 15s Spirit Stone's Summon ♥ 2 Overall, really fun. At first, the UI seemed to not be showing up... but once it did, the game started to make a lot more sense. I enjoyed the farming aspect of it as well as the creature summoning component. Really fun way to do the summoning rather than something dark. This had a nice, positive vibe. I think I'm going to play through it again. Good work!
Apr 20 16:09:17 10h 35m Summon Get It! ♥ 1 This is a simple but fun action entry. I like the visuals overall, especially how diverse the levels feel. Aiming for fighting could be tough. But I like the differences between abilities, like the speed with the wraith and the area attack of the djinn. And the music choices and sound effects were good, too. Overall, great work!
Apr 20 16:24:19 15m 02s Summon Squad ♥ 2 This is a wonderful entry. I love the art, the style, the puzzle rooms, and the mechanics. How you incorporated summoning was unique and fun. It would be nice to move/remove the summons as well as pivot them or make it possible to restart without jumping into the abyss... but the only thing really wrong with the game is there weren't enough levels 🤣 I wanted to keep playing! Great work!
Apr 20 16:36:18 11m 59s The Summoning ♥ 1 A good math game! Really like the dynamic of fast and slow enemies, variety of problem difficulties... simple but fun. Got 458 and failed at Wave 9. I wonder does it end or is it infinite with increasing difficulty? In any event, a solid entry. Very good.
Apr 20 17:32:28 56m 10s Summon to Kill the Skeletons ♥ 2 I like the idea a lot. And the execution was clean. But the use of the exact same words was a bit of a downer. That said, it was fun and challenging. I liked the overall art aesthetic and the sound effects. A great entry for the jam!