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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | nidup's comment | |
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| Aug 1 10:16:24 | Powerless Miner | ♥ 1 | Great entry! I was confused by the black screen when I lost, especially when you just start the game and don't understand the commands, i tried to go to the gold to mine it then i read the game description :) I would display the commands list on the menu page and add a redirect to the menu with a small message when you loose. This kind of very small improvements would make your game reach another level and give the feeling of "totally finished game". Keep up the good work 🚀 | |
| Aug 1 10:25:48 | 9m 24s | INVISIBRO | ♥ 0 | What a lovely pixel art! I don't have windows on my PC but i would really love to test your game 😢 As it seems you used Game Maker, you may create a web build and deploy it on itch.io? This way, you could have more testers and feedback, if you do so, don't hesitate to ping me, i will test and rate your game 😄 |
| Aug 1 10:46:02 | 20m 14s | Artifact Dive | ♥ 1 | Good and complete entry, congratz! The sound effect is imho too loud compared to the music. I would polish more the menu, it does not represent the quality of the game. Regarding graphics, you could assume something with basic shapes, like very clean lines and circles, here you're a bit in between, with some tiles for the walls not very consistent with the player and enemies style. I'm also a programmer and always have issue with graphics part 😉 As a bonus, you may add some particle effects (unity FTW!), it would make the game more dynamic and the overall feeling better! Keep up the good work 🚀 |
| Aug 1 11:04:41 | 18m 39s | Watervapor | ♥ 1 | Great entry! congratz! very original and pleasant gameplay, I like the physics, movements and "water" effect. Music is cool too, the sound effects are maybe a bit too "buzzy". I think it could be improved with a bit of screen shaking + changing screen opacity when bumping to other characters, it would make the game even more immersive. Anyway, very good job 👍 |
| Aug 1 11:16:51 | 12m 10s | Guardian Stone | ♥ 1 | Wow, what an ambiance during the introduction! Awesome graphics and music which creates a strong atmosphere. The story telling is great. Could be improved by changing the buttons and font style to make it even more immersive. Once in the game, the graphics are imho less impressive, i'd prefer something more consistent with the intro, more abstract and fuzzy. Anyway, good entry, keep up the good work 🚀 |
| Aug 1 11:18:36 | 1m 45s | Power Defense | ♥ 0 | Link broken 😢 Too bad because good idea, ping me if you fix the link. |
| Aug 1 11:21:33 | 2m 57s | ThunderFox | ♥ 0 | Just awesome graphics (i seen your posts on twitter, the idle animations looked very impressive). Looking forward to play the game, ping me once the game will be fixed, i will play and rate it. Good luck 👍 |
| Aug 1 11:25:54 | 4m 21s | Out of Power | ♥ 0 | I tried the link and can't play the game, the page is empty 😢 ping me if you fix it, i will play and rate your game (which looks super cool). |
| Aug 1 11:36:40 | 10m 46s | On The Gird | ♥ 0 | I ❤️ the concept! It reminds me old pipeline game 😄 Too bad there is no sounds, even a simple music for the ambiance could make the overall experience better.The game is too hard at the beginning, you loose without understanding why, you could include your text tutorial in the game itself. The must may be to add few very simple levels to understand the mechanisms. The pipes sometimes have weird behavior, if i add a new one close to an existing one, they're not connected (it's maybe on purpose, it's maybe a bug 😉 ). Anyway, good entry, keep up the good work 🚀 |
| Aug 1 11:45:58 | 9m 18s | A Developer's Nightmare | ♥ 2 | Congratz for your first entry 💪 ! Lovely pixel art, idle and animations! Good music & ambiance, could you please give details about commands to use or how to play the first puzzle, i tried lot of combination, "E" make appear some rope but i don't understand what i need to do 😢 Ping me if you give details, i will re-test and update rating 🚀 |
| Aug 1 11:57:07 | 11m 09s | Until the lights turn off | ♥ 3 | Cool entry! Nice graphics and ambiance, a small idle and walk animation for characters would improve a lot the feeling. The controls are not very accurate. The light area around the main character is imho too small, you can't anticipate at all the security guard, if we could see the guard's light area, or having some walk sound to indicates he's getting closer it would get another dimension to the game. The atmosphere is good when you're in the night, a bit stressful but ok. Keep up the good work 👍 PS: the Doom's character face on the computer screen make me laugh, i like this kind of small references, it makes the game more fun 😉 |
| Aug 1 12:06:26 | 9m 19s | Embers | ♥ 0 | Lovely pixel art & sounds track! I like the character idle, the fire effect and the small eyes in the dark. It gives a great atmosphere to the game. It could be imho improved by making more obvious the objects you can interact with, for instance with a small white line blinking around clickable objects. The game play is sadly too simple to make it fun for long, but it's overally a great experience 👍 Great entry, keep up the good work 🚀 |
| Aug 1 18:23:28 | 6h 17m | Recoil - Mike Said No Short Titles | ♥ 1 | Very solid entry! Good puzzle game, well polished, graphics and sounds are pleasant, the ambiance is good, the difficulty is growing in a good pace. Could be improved with small feedback like screen shaking or changing opacity when wining a level for instance. Keep up the good work 🚀 |
| Aug 1 18:39:18 | 15m 50s | Zero Volt X | ♥ 0 | What an entry! Good gameplay, solid mechanics, superbe pixel art, nice ambiance & sounds track, last but not least, a lot of content! I don't know how you manage to ship a such complete game alone in 48h, the experience maybe 😉 Keep up the good work 💪 |
| Aug 1 18:52:53 | 13m 35s | Breaker Breaker! | ♥ 2 | Good entry! Great graphics & animations, the ambiance is good, the game is well finished. I would try to improve a bit the controls, maybe add a timer to try to improve from a game to another, and finally, allow to restart from the game over screen. Keep up the good work! 🚀 |
| Aug 1 18:59:00 | 6m 07s | Full Metal Combat | ♥ 2 | Good entry, cool gameplay! You could make it more nervous / dynamic by accelerating hero & enemies movements and by adding small feebdacks like screen shaking. Keep up the good work 👍 |
| Aug 1 19:01:08 | 2m 08s | Space Fidget | ♥ 0 | link to the web build is broken 😢 |
| Aug 2 07:34:01 | 12h 32m | Torch Boy | ♥ 2 | Great entry, well executed! Lovely pixel art, solid gameplay & good ambiance 👍 It's imho a bit hard to play at the beginning, the difficulty could be more progressive, maybe with a super simple tutorial level allowing the player to understand the mechanisms. It could also be a bit more dynamic by adding a bit of screen shaking when the player dies shoot and some feedback (particles?) when jumping. Anyway, very good job 💡 |
| Aug 2 07:48:07 | 14m 06s | daemon | ♥ 1 | Great concept! Super pixel art, a good example of the use of a simple palette 🎨 The game proposed interesting mechanisms and atmosphere. It could be better by improving controls that are a bit stiff and not accurate. By the way, you could either display usable controls at the beginning of the game or even better introduce them at the beginning of the level. A menu screen or short intro could help to polish the game too. Finally, it could be more dynamic by adding small feedback like particles when jumping for instance. Anyway, very solid and complete entry, keep up the good work 🚀 |
| Aug 2 11:25:01 | 3h 36m | e Negative | ♥ 1 | What a pixel art, super example of how to use an almost "mono color" palette! Great experience, the animations, feedback and overall feeling are very pleasant, the delay really makes you feel you're piloting a bot, the mechanics are solid too. The sound track is a bit too repetitive but totally ok to re-inforce with the atmosphere. One of the best entry i tested so far, congratz & keep up the good work 👍 |
| Aug 2 11:57:07 | 32m 06s | Gem Diver | ♥ 2 | Cool entry, good concept & relaxing ambiance especially due to the music which is quite strange regarding the story telling (would expect a more "dark" soundtrack but it gives an interesting feeling). The difficulty grows properly, even if the levels rely on same mechanisms, they are nicely done. It could be imho more challenging, but the game is pleasant and as a player, I continue to play to see the upcoming levels and content. Keep up the good work 👍 |