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Dec 15 03:49:00 The Seed Interesting idea. Apart what Coomzy said (I also had a lot of trouble with the mouse), I think the sound of error is too loud in comparison with the rest. I also think that the "how to play" could be in-game. The music is cool, and I like the aesthetics. Good work.
Dec 17 00:35:00 44h 46m Santa's Little Grower WebGL doesn't make the game justice (too laggy). But I downloaded and I can tell it's fun. I got what you say by the trauma of snowman, haha. Pretty creepy, the sounds are well used for making the player scared. I had problems with the mouse too, I needed to ALT+TAB once, then it didn't catch my mouse again, but I played till the end. Nice touch with the log places. Although it's not very clear where to go. But I did enjoyed the game. The gifts in the end were nice too. Haha. Good job!
Dec 17 00:53:00 18m 00s Voidbound I missed a song in stage 2, but the story is lovely and the gameplay is nice.
Dec 17 00:57:00 4m 00s 2 Buttons 1 Cup The game is simple, nice mood, but what I really enjoyed was the way the theme was done. Two button controls, haha. Nice job! :D (oh, and I got the firewall alert too btw)
Dec 17 01:10:00 13m 00s GET IT OUT!!! I missed a little more of "game". It is more an interactive story. But I enjoyed the ideas here. Nice graphics too, well done. The music could have some work. I like the way the theme was implemented here. Very creative.
Dec 17 01:24:00 14m 00s Kaktus & Friend The menu is weird. Too small, the mouse over is not responsive, it was hard to select a level, and in the end of level the game goes directly to the menu. I find it weird. Too bad. I really liked idea of the cactus being friend with the balloon. And the sprites are nice.
Dec 17 01:30:00 6m 00s Grow Your Love Very creative game. The variety of games is nice!
Dec 17 01:33:00 3m 00s Super Snowball Roller Mayhem 3000 Very exciting! I rolled down the mountain too many times!
Dec 17 01:47:00 14m 00s Christmas Eve Late Delivery Service Very good idea. I loved! And nice solution for the sound effects. It added a nice touch of humor to the game. Hahaha, good job!
Dec 17 02:02:00 15m 00s The Dino Run Interesting game. It's not something I'd play for long, but I think if there were more types of buildings, more colors, maybe more obstacles, the game would nail it. Oh, and I like the music.
Dec 17 02:06:00 4m 00s 2 Roll Wow. Very compelling. Nice art, nice gameplay, and very hard (in a good way)! Nice job!
Dec 17 02:20:00 14m 00s Aloft Soundtrack and sfx spot on, art well done and nice controls. The only downside is the lack of difficulty. There is almost no challenge.
Dec 17 02:27:00 7m 00s Dangerous Harvest There is no music when the game is restarted. The animation could be a little better in my opinion. If you increase a little the speed of the running cycle I think it would be better. I like the art of the game. The illustration is great.
Dec 17 02:36:00 9m 00s Grunnist Awesome!! I loved it! Congratulations!
Dec 17 03:05:00 29m 00s No Birds In This Game Nicely done! At first I was a bit lost, didn't see that the ant was already on the screen. Haha. But in the 2nd stage it made it clear. Interesting design!
Dec 17 03:38:00 33m 00s Knight vs. Mage I like the concept and the mechanics. The art is also well done. Of course there were no time for much variation, but with more options of warriors, this game would be awesome.
Dec 17 03:51:00 13m 00s Box 'N Bash Good entry. Small game with interesting concept. I missed more sound effects, considering there's a lot of collisions, and the audio quality of the voice is not very good, although the speaking is funny. It has a solid gameplay and it's more fun on higher level.
Dec 17 04:08:00 17m 00s Momma's Little Monster Nice level design! Gameplay was solid for me. The only annoying thing was the music. A suggestion I'd give is to have least two for interleaving each stage. The art is great. I loved the sprites and the starting/ending screen. Very nice job!
Dec 17 04:21:00 13m 00s There's No Going Back Awesome! Excellent idea! Great graphics and mechanics! Congratulations!
Dec 18 02:35:00 22h 14m Gardening Rabbit Cute graphics. It remembers some old school pocket games. Pretty nostalgic to play this one.
Dec 18 02:36:00 1m 00s Skill Clicker Nice graphics, but maybe should have a story.
Dec 18 02:39:00 3m 00s Dragonic Very nice game! Good graphics and a unexpected way of playing. At first I thought the objective was to become the dragon, not that this would be a "disadvantage". Very good idea. Nice work!
Dec 18 02:46:00 7m 00s Alien Clicker Nice graphics, but clicking as fast as I can it's not for me. I don't like it. But I'd love to see the dinosaur growing until it could eat entire cities. Haha.
Dec 18 02:47:00 1m 00s My Best (Magical) Friend! Nice drawings!
Dec 18 02:50:00 3m 00s forcebro Why am I being directed to the Broforce site? I didn't understand that.
Dec 18 02:51:00 1m 00s Orbital Defender Fun and interesting gameplay!
Dec 18 03:00:00 9m 00s Floral Empire I think the music could have some work (the crashes during the song breaks the relaxing pace of it). It's not very intuitive to play, and the mouse is not very precise. Sometimes I end up watering the plant I wished to pick. Maybe more space between the options could help. But I like the theme and I like the choice of character too.
Dec 18 03:08:00 8m 00s Poultry Punt Fun! Hahaha, I reached 6299 in the 3rd try and didn't manage to get to it again. Very nice game! Art, physics, humor. Nice job!
Dec 18 03:13:00 5m 00s Tormented Dungeon The concept is interesting, but it became kinda boring very soon. To much sub actions to manage, even for a walk. It might became a good game with some thought on the game design.
Dec 18 03:21:00 8m 00s Jungle Climb Nice game. Although it's not created by you, the music was well chosen. There is some flickering on the top (it already happened to me, it's when you loop the background). You could solve it with bar showing the distance. (just a suggestion). And there's a restarting bug. When I hit R the game resets, but take me to the reset page again.
Dec 18 03:32:00 11m 00s War... Nice ideas here, but the gameplay wasn't clear to me. I think it could have some sound effects too. Not that loud, but for a better ambience, maybe. (I see a lot had issues and I can confirm it were fixed. At least I didn't have any trouble running the game).
Dec 18 03:36:00 4m 00s Elevation Good game! I like the puzzles. Challenging but beatable, after you figure it out. Nice work!
Dec 18 11:24:00 7h 48m Squ First of all: nice name! Loved the graphics and de SQUs haha. Interesting game design. I like the way the speed changes with the differents SQUs. Nice work!
Dec 18 11:37:00 13m 00s Avalanche Very beautiful graphics. I missed sound effects. It's kinda cruel to have to hit the people and animals to get points, but it's an avalanche after all. I enjoyed the smooth movement (and grow) of the snowball. Fun game. Nice job!
Dec 18 11:45:00 8m 00s The Climbers Confusing at first, but very fun when you figure out. Actually, it makes sense to have to hold the button, I didn't just expected it. Nice idea, nice audio, cool illustration e good gameplay. Congratulations!
Dec 18 11:58:00 13m 00s Bunny Block Wow!!! Awesome! Nice soundtrack, sound effects, graphics, animations! The only thing I didn't like that it messed up a bit my screen resolution (I use two monitors and it affected both). First game I played so far that did it, but I really enjoyed the game! Congratulations! Nice work!
Dec 18 12:04:00 6m 00s Rebel Dancer Nice game. I only think the music could be more "dancing". Something more rhythmic. Other than that, good job!
Dec 18 12:16:00 12m 00s S - Court Very good entry. Nice graphics, nice ambient sounds. The gameplay is interesting. Good job!
Dec 18 12:58:00 42m 00s Growing Xmas Tree Cool! Merry Christmas!!!
Dec 18 23:36:00 10h 38m Turnips-n-Pigs I think the theme is interesting and fun. You could have used the arrows for the controls, it wasn't clear how to play and my char got out of the screen and didn't came back in my first play.
Dec 18 23:40:00 4m 00s Elevator Pitch I loved the theme and the gameplay, but it was a bit hard to control. I think it would be better if the arrow to the elevator was a touch. I laughed a lot when I died, The drama was comic!
Dec 18 23:50:00 10m 00s Flower Power Fun and humor on spot. Nice graphics and gameplay!
Dec 19 00:10:00 20m 00s Sheldon I loved the carnivorous plant. I had lot of fun with the game. The first time I run the game, there was no music, but in the second time there was.
Dec 19 00:22:00 12m 00s Sort the Court! I enjoyed this game a lot. Loved the graphics, music and gameplay. I want to play a lot more!
Dec 19 00:40:00 18m 00s ORB LORDS The game is great in all aspects! It was very fun to play it to the end. Nice job!
Dec 19 00:54:00 14m 00s Olivia Beautiful design, but frustrating gameplay.
Dec 19 02:12:00 1h 18m Dangomari Nice audio and design, but the gameplay is confuse.
Dec 19 11:43:00 9h 31m Star Reach I like the music and the water reflections. I think if the totem were more artistic, the game would be awesome. And it could have a defeat condition, like some sort of energy spent on each grow, limiting it, that way the player would need to optimize its use. But this is just my opinion, the game is well done and the idea is nice.
Dec 19 11:56:00 13m 00s Garden Plant: Zombie Warfare The idea is awesome, but the lack of music annoyed me. I enjoyed the mechanics, the gameplay is very interesting. It seems in the last stage there is no ending condition. After you kill all zombies, it doesn't finish.
Dec 19 12:06:00 10m 00s Milky Way Expansion Nice sounds and graphics. It wasn't clear how to play at first, but I think I understood. It isn't fun to replay it a lot at this state, but with more time of development could become a very good game. I like the concept here.
Dec 19 12:16:00 10m 00s Waffle Hunters My only suggestion is to put some tolerance of movement to the character camera, that way he could jump small heights without the view being locked to it. I like the idea of "only forward". Good job!
Dec 19 12:32:00 16m 00s Grenade Dodger 1923 Congratulations on finishing it!
Dec 19 12:37:00 5m 00s Super Mower Very good! I scored 88. Nice menu and art. I think the turning could be a little faster. The game would be more fast paced. But I enjoyed it! Nice job!
Dec 19 12:43:00 6m 00s Paper Tank Arena I missed sound effects and the music doesn't fit. The graphics are cool and the gameplay is hard (and that fits perfectly). I enjoyed the aesthetics.
Dec 19 12:49:00 6m 00s Snake3D Loved the idea, but the controls are weird. I wasn't able to pass score 3. I think the lack of music might be intentional, but in my opinion, it should have some cave-style ambient sounds. The idea is awesome.
Dec 19 12:57:00 8m 00s Revenge of the Plants I think the art is not consistent, the flower style is very different from the rest, in my opinion. The sound effects and music are cool, retro-style. I enjoyed the controls, it's challenging to control and shoot. Interesting game. Good job.
Dec 19 13:07:00 10m 00s How to Build a Lighthouse Full score. Congratulations! The best entry I played until now. Plus, it's nice to see a Construct 2 game around here. Great job!
Dec 19 13:10:00 3m 00s Flame Turtle Can't rate this. The game is flickering a lot here. Sorry.
Dec 19 13:26:00 16m 00s Homewards Nice game. Good graphics, the music fits perfectly. I missed sound effects. And I didn't understood what is with those hearts. I think the game might not be checking collision because the bright obstacles (I imagine they are obstacles) did nothing to my character. There is some text alignment issues here too. In my opinion, I I think it could have the option to press a button to advance the text. But the game is well done. Great mood!
Dec 19 13:31:00 5m 00s Dizzy Skies Nice ideas here, but, personally, I don't like the controls. And in my opinion, there should be at least sound effects. You might not have completed it for ludum dare, but I think it can be a good game when finished.
Dec 19 13:36:00 5m 00s Catalyst Interesting puzzle game. Nice ambience too.
Dec 19 13:40:00 4m 00s Watch out for the green stuff! I enjoyed the aesthetics. Good work.
Dec 22 01:39:00 59h 59m Seed Boy Interesting level design, could have a music, our ambient effects. I like the footsteps sounds though. Cool puzzles, to bad the try again loop prevented me from playing sometimes, but the game is nice. Good job!
Dec 22 01:44:00 5m 00s Leaf Climber Interesting idea, I like the way the leaf grows. I had a bug when I tried for the 3rd time and the game stopped. It wasn't specified any error, unfortunately.
Dec 22 01:52:00 8m 00s Jack and DeVine Loved the graphics. I missed some character animations (walking), but when I saw what was done with the plant, oh my, what a great work!! Great game overall! Nice job!
Dec 22 01:58:00 6m 00s Growing Christmas Tree Try to use some sound effects. It makes a big difference. I think the racket is too fast (but might be my impression only). Congratulations on finishing it. I think the game is fun.
Dec 22 02:12:00 14m 00s Two Button Ninja I think the gameplay is weird. The ninja always moving was kinda annoying to me. I missed sound effects too. I liked the ninja sprite/animation though.
Dec 22 20:53:00 18h 41m The Everything Building Excellent game! 5/5
Dec 22 20:56:00 3m 00s Tanya Titor and the Time Twister Nice game. Beautiful graphics.
Dec 22 21:04:00 8m 00s EVERYTHING'S ON FIRE Nicely done! Good idea and good gameplay.
Dec 22 21:08:00 4m 00s Poetry Interesting mood, interesting idea, but it was hard to read and play. I'd put a sfx when the balls are caught too.
Dec 22 21:21:00 13m 00s Workshop Panic I'll be honest: the music is annoying, in my opinion. The melody's volume is too high relative to the other instruments. And it seems it's somewhat out of tune. About the gameplay, it's cool.
Dec 22 21:31:00 10m 00s Pixies Flowers Very good entry. Beautiful and simple (and hardto beat! haha). Good job!
Dec 22 21:43:00 12m 00s ReachTheTop Confusing game. In my second try it froze on "Floor 1" screen. But in my playthrough, I think it wasn't clear what I was supposed to do. And the combat was hard, you can't hit the enemy unless you're in a specific distance, not near and not far. I think you could work on the music too. It'd give a big plus to the game. There's potential, but it's hard to achieve it in 48h. Anyway, good job finishing it!
Dec 22 21:45:00 2m 00s Garbage Can you escape? Hard controls, in my opinion. But I enjoyed the idea, of the gameplay and the story.
Dec 22 23:44:00 1h 59m Fish Simulator 2k15 I can't tell which is bigger which is not. I like the idea, but in my opinion needs to be more clear which fish can be eaten.
Dec 23 01:04:00 1h 20m The Fastest Trigger In The West Dammit! Muriel is invincible! Awesome game! Music, sound effects, graphics, gameplay, everything excellent! Congratulations!
Dec 23 01:08:00 4m 00s Self-Growth I missed at least a music for giving some mood, but it was a very nice use of theme.
Dec 23 01:15:00 7m 00s Garden of Bees Interesting concept, nice use of theme, but no sound. It would be awesome to have some sfx or a music to create a mood. It could have some hints of how to play too. Other than that, good job. The pixel art is cool.
Dec 24 01:58:00 24h 43m Nuclear Arms 2: Garbage Day Good game. Well done!
Dec 24 02:00:00 2m 00s Time Block Interesting. Different controls. I enjoyed. Good job.
Dec 24 02:05:00 5m 00s Crystal Quest Well... it's a start. No sound, no animation, no menu, no explanation how to play... I enjoyed the drawings, though. I hope you can finish it. Good luck!
Dec 24 02:10:00 5m 00s Family Tree Personally I don't like the mood of this game, but it is well done. I like the animation and the use of the pictures. Good job.
Dec 24 02:25:00 15m 00s Winter Quest Very good game. I think it could be a little faster though, you spend too much time gathering snow, I think. But I had fun playing it to the end. Good job!
Dec 24 02:29:00 4m 00s GTBC-1: Global terraformer for barren climate Interesting concept. It's a bit slow, but I enjoyed the pinball-like idea.
Dec 24 02:34:00 5m 00s QwertyBee Excellent! That made me laugh! Nice mood and nice gameplay. Good work!
Jan 1 16:22:00 205h 48m Garden Grow Very good game! I saw some updates of it too, it's nice to see you keep improving its art. The game is fun and beautiful. Loved the ending, haha, pretty cool. Good job!
Jan 1 16:33:00 11m 00s Squirrel Forest I like the idea of planting to have population to protect the wood (well, at least it was what I understood of the game), but I think the music doesn't fits the graphics. Neither are bad, I just think that they doesn't fit together. A chiptune-ish would fit better, or more detailed graphics with the music it was chosen. Besides, the game becomes too repetitive fast. You could add some features like the sun in Plants vs Zombies, where you need to look for the resources. Or some powers to be used against the enemy, where demands some input of the player. You got a good idea here, but IMHO it needs some improvement.
Jan 1 16:40:00 7m 00s The Super Bros (that are not Brothers!) Interesting idea, but the controls are not very good. They stop when they jump. You need to release for keeping moving. If it was deliberately done this way, I disagree it's a good control. Other than that (and the lack of sounds, of course) I enjoyed pretty much the platforming and the need to keep both together. Good use of the theme.
Jan 1 16:49:00 9m 00s Meowtastic Present Panic Very good game. I manage to give 14 presents. It takes some time to get used to the mechanics but I think it works. Nice use of music, sound effects and animation. Good job!
Jan 2 12:18:00 19h 29m Snowman Builder Extreme Good graphics, good music and good idea attaching the assets as you get it. Fun to play. Nice work!
Jan 2 12:37:00 19m 00s Bad Doggie Very good! I missed more obstacles, but its fun to play. The theme is well applied and the art is fun. Simple, but with attention to the details (the girl is frequently looking back with the eyes. Nice touch!) Plus, nice sound design. Few of the games I played took time to care about the sounds. You hear when she steps in the water, in the trash can and the dog barking seems to be on the rhythm of the music. <br/> <br/>I see your comment about the art stealing the scene. I think that art needs to be reviewed accordingly to the game overall. Your drawings fitted very well for the kind of game you did. In my opinion, it's better to have some simple drawings and consistency of art than having a lot of awesome graphics without an aesthetic to the game. And the drawings are indeed funny. Well done! <br/> <br/>I don't know if it is a good one but here is my best stats, just for the record: Score 815 - Combo 38 :P
Jan 4 12:44:00 48h 07m Grow Christmas Great game! Very creative! Nice work! Loved the aesthetic!
Jan 5 00:25:00 11h 41m Snow Eater It's not working here. Sorry. :/ <br/>Good luck with the voting!