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Bonfire

By paprigames

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CategoryRankScoreCount
Overall6073.3526
Fun5833.2026
Innovation9532.6826
Theme4913.7026
Graphics3653.6626
Audio5582.9726
Mood1853.6626

Comments

shouji 2020-04-19 23:19

Great job! Pretty cool game. A few words of feedback, having the controls shown in game would be nice as well as having a different skybox/terrain that fits the atmosphere you created in the play area better. I ran into a small bug where if you try and jump after being given the "embrace" option, the camera goes crazy. Otherwise, good entry!

paprigames 2020-04-20 10:45

@shouji Thanks for the constructive feedback! There are quite a few bugs with the camera, as I was not too familiar with 3D-games :P

rakowu 2020-04-20 11:14

Looks great and whihed there would be a final boss or something. But not sure how when it says "do you feel it" the jump was strange, rotation pivot point displaced and i felt out of the game and it should down. Was it a bug? or was it part of the game? If it was part of the game, great. if it was a bug, than you know there is a bug :D But i like it. Also the controls are intuitive.

paprigames 2020-04-20 11:21

@rakowu Yes, there was supposed to be an earhquake effect at that point, but the camera was kind of tricky so I couldnt make it better in time :D Thanks for feedback!

rakowu 2020-04-20 11:24

first i really thought that it is a earthquake, but due to the rotation i thought maybe a bug :D Sorry that i had to ask. Great idea than

rendow 2020-04-20 13:02

Really great sound effects and good looking 3D models. Bit short but understandable due to the timeframe. I also got the same bug as the other commenters. The controls and the shooting + reload felt really good, great job!

ramo 2020-04-20 14:13

Really nice mood, and it plays well too! I'm a little confused by the color and aspect of the mist, but I guess it adds to the mystery of this place. Great sound!

kierancoppins 2020-04-20 15:01

Nice game, loved the pixel style particle effects when i shot an enemy. I thing i encounter a bug when the fire ran out where the camera sorta flipped and the game crashed. Also struggled to figure out what the objective was since I couldnt find anything to keep the fire going. Other than that, its a fun lil game :)

sen-kappa 2020-04-20 19:30

Sacrificing demonic creatures to a bonfire that allows you to ascend to a higher plane... excellent!

Although the current format of the game appeals to me greatly, I believe that there is one change that might make the logical flow make a little bit more sense.

Right now, the enemies are kinda just random. You could get a spider, a bat, or a demon at any point; this sorta detracts from gradual build up to the ending of the game. In my opinion, it would likely be best to tier-ify the enemies and have them appear only after the previous enemy was defeated.

But, in the end, great game!

paprigames 2020-04-20 21:29

Thanks for nice comments everyone! @rendow I actually went outside 06:30 to record some bird singin for sound effects :) @ramo Haha, I was aiming for that mysterious mist feel. Glad you liked the mood. @kierancoppins Ahh, I was thinking of adding some "Let's see how these will burn" comment when killing the first enemy, but I kind of forgot... hehe :D @sen-kappa You are absolutely right! Some kind of boss fight in the end would also have done wonders. Thanks for the feedback!

mehrdadsh 2020-04-21 12:07

it felt like wolfenstien(old game) to me nice

shess 2020-04-23 10:16

The atmosphere is on point with this one. I'm a huge fan of low-poly graphics and minimalistic aesthetics, there's no denying that, but the colors you used and subtle effects you added really put this entry on a whole new level. The controls felt smooth, too! Beautiful.

shadowvx000 2020-04-23 19:06

Hey @pabricka Great job on your submission! You really captured the essence in a bonfire being the heart of the murky forest. The colors are warm and the ambient sounds make the game all the more enjoyable.

It's probably mentioned already, but something I did find rather odd was dying yet still being able to fire the shotgun. I might be wrong, but it seemed like dying made you fall on your back with an eye blinking animation?

A suggestion would be to add a coroutine WaitForSeconds and bring you back to the title screen, or maybe a game over screen.

I had fun playing and look forward to your games in the future.

stefan0198 2020-04-23 19:32

Hi :D This is a really funny game! Great idea! Sadly I had a bug (I think it's a bug), where I got teleported aroung the map. Also my movement was more like teleportation. Finnaly I fell of the map and the game closed (crashed?). Let me know if this was a bug :D

gamer-fates 2020-04-23 19:46

Nice 3d approach. I enjoy the graphics but keep the fire alive is getting redundant. Nonetheless, please take this game and turn it into a first person dungeon crawler please. Would be super dope

adam-clayden 2020-04-23 19:57

Nice game, I like the scrolling text and overall feel. Controls were fairly easy to grasp despite the lack of tutorial (although adding one would help). Didn't completely get the vibrating noise but I assume it was an enemy spawning. Maybe make that a 3D sound and let it guide the player to where they spawned? Either way was fun

paprigames 2020-04-24 07:42

@mehrdadsh haha, thanks! @shess Thanks a lot! Great to see my "programmer art models" are not totally worthless :) @shadowvx000 The dying is something that seems to bug for almost everyone, and a main menu / game over screen would have helped a lot! Thanks for the feedback! @stefan0198 Ahh, sorry to hear about that teleportation bug. When you die, the game should give you an animation and close the game after, but it seems more like a bug right now... Next time I gotta do better :D Thanks for feedback! @gamer-fates You are right, the game would have probably worked just fine without the timer. Thanks for feedback and your kind words :) @adam-clayden Ohh, the 3D sound is a great idea, and tutorial would definitely have helped! Thanks a lot!

amazura 2020-04-25 05:25

Nice entryn, love the assets and really feels the mood on the game. good work! :thumbsup:

nizlow 2020-04-27 15:11

nice little 3d game. Felt quite solid for what it was.

gelgavish 2020-05-06 18:54

Hi, I really like that game, it feels like the Doom guy went camping :D

The concept is good and so as the graphics! I'm sure everyone let you know about the camera issue, it's ok... it's your first 3D game. I really like the fog visual effect (enemies popping out of nothing got me jumping sometimes) but I think you should make the fire always shown through the fog, which will make the goal of the game even clearer.

It's a really good game, great job! :)

BTW, amazing game description