FoonLudum Dare ExplorerLD42 → OFF ICE

OFF ICE

By bmopapa

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CategoryRankScoreCount
Overall7933.2027
Fun11692.5128
Innovation10452.6827
Theme8713.1328
Graphics3473.8028
Audio6002.8624
Humor1.7919
Mood4063.3225

Comments

arcadonauts 2018-08-15 04:40

This looked great! The controls felt sloppy, but maybe you were going for a slippery ice thing? Either way, it was a little too slow for my taste.

mistersdevelopment 2018-08-15 04:41

I liked the feel and the animations! Nice work!

dingodize 2018-08-15 04:43

I really like the art and mood of the game, it could have more gameplay first and then focus on art. It kinda fits the theme but really good submission overall. Keep it up!

candlebird 2018-08-15 04:46

Just finished playing the game and I'm a bit conflicted. The animations had all of the right keyframes, but they seemed to play too fast. The movement felt sluggish, but playable. The tone of your game really was the thing that saved it for me. With some bug fixes and changes to the gameplay, I'm sure this could be a really impactful experience. Overall, very good for your first Ludum Dare!

silvae 2018-08-15 04:51

I particularly liked the snow platforms crumbling. Pace of the game was slow but it looked/sounded nice. Cool entry!

tungunity96 2018-08-15 04:55

[I apologize for my bad English] The mood of the game is very good, it brought me the feeling of loneliness. Besides, you could improve the movement by making it more slippery (maybe adjust the friction?) or make the bear move faster. Overall, this is a great game. Congrats!

bmopapa 2018-08-15 05:36

@arcadonauts Thank you for playing and nicely being the first commenter! Hmmmm....we intended to make the bear a little bit slower to move compared to the melting glaciers in background environment… But it seems we do not have enough time to deal with the environment… and just as you say, it truly needs a better consideration for the speed choice. We may update it later in another version.

bmopapa 2018-08-15 05:36

@mistersdevelopment Thank you for your love!

bmopapa 2018-08-15 05:53

@dingodize Firstly, thank you for your playing. Yes, you are right! As a rookie for Game Jam and game dev. We are usually a little bit struggling for what goes first…mechanism or aesthetic. This time we choose the aesthetic but also wants some puzzle-game playing. But In the end, some sketched arts and puzzles are not quite finished. We will try to learn from this jam and build a better pipeline next time.

bmopapa 2018-08-15 05:58

@candlebird Thank you for your playing and like! We will try to improve the pacing experience, adding more gameplay, level design and puzzles for the bear in a later version!

bmopapa 2018-08-15 06:00

@silvae Thank you! We like that too! We will fix the pacing tempo later!

bmopapa 2018-08-15 06:04

@tungunity96 Thank you for your playing. We are so thrilled that you feel the loneliness! That is what we wanna express! And thanks for your advice., we will improve the physics parts especially the moving!

bmopapa 2018-08-15 06:04

@tungunity96 Thank you for your playing. We are so thrilled that you feel the loneliness! That is what we wanna express! And thanks for your advice., we will improve the physics parts especially the moving!

kirb 2018-08-15 06:53

very nice graphics. really sad for our polar bear friend!

Would love to see some more animations and art =)

bmopapa 2018-08-15 11:37

@kirb Thank you! We will create more for her~

raccoon-js 2018-08-15 19:57

I am saddened by this game, but I liked it.

carlos-giraldo 2018-08-16 02:43

Really liked the experience. Felt somber. Liked the mechanics introduced throughout. loved the animation at the end.

ghostgoatsgames 2018-08-16 06:04

This art is amazing! Nice sfx. Gameplay is a bit basic, but still a great entry

demn 2018-08-16 14:48

Hey ! Really liked the vibes from your game. Gameplay is simple and there are probably some issues (sometimes the ice platform broke before I got on, and one time I respawned in the water..?), but the animation and arts are really good, the sound (eventhough you didn't produce it) feels great and gives feedback. It's a really nice game, and it tells a basic yet beautiful story. Good job ! :)

gaming-night 2018-08-16 14:48

What a cute bear, I was so sad when I killed him ... :/ Really nice interpretation of the theme !!

darkguardsman 2018-08-16 16:01

Nice game, timing on a few of the platforms can be improved. As well movement is slugish in some areas. Mainly when moving from platforms onto solid land again. Over all good game :)

bmopapa 2018-08-19 02:34

@ghostgoatsgames Thanks!We will try to improve the gameplay and levels design later!

zicboy 2018-08-19 06:24

Awesome game. I was pleasantly suprised with the overall mood of the game. Hope you develop a post jam version for this!

pnghasemi 2018-08-19 06:29

The challenges were a little boring and uninteresting! but from the visuals and the music, I can say that you can actually make a whole game out of this idea.

shimage2 2018-08-19 06:48

I love that vibes so much! Animation is charming. Background is minimum but impressive. The last scene left me with a heart warming. Great work overall!

furiouswitch 2018-08-20 00:16

Nice game! I liked the story a lot, the atmosphere too. The gameplay was kinda minimal but the final part was really beautiful and so cute, I love this stuff :) I wish there was more hinting about the end during game-play like memories or something. Good work :)

bmopapa 2018-08-23 12:26

@zicboy Thanks! We are trying out best build the mood for the game!

bmopapa 2018-08-23 12:28

@pnghasemi Thank you for your comments, we will try to improve the gameplay later !!!

bmopapa 2018-08-23 12:29

@shimage2 Thank you for your like and encouragement !!!

bmopapa 2018-08-23 12:30

@furiouswitch Thanks a lot! Nice idea indeed! We could try to implement some hints for maybe some previous levels in the future!

bmopapa 2018-08-23 12:32

@demn Yes, it's a little bit buggy now..we will try to fix that in the future! Thanks for your detailed feedback for our bear!

bmopapa 2018-08-23 12:32

@gaming-night Thank you for your like and feel sorry for the bear ...