Our Stories

tomasara413 2017-08-01 14:03

I like choose you own adventure games and so It's a pitty that this one was short. And because I don't have too much to brag about. I will start with minuses.

The game's as I have already stated short, almost too short. You really have no way to feel her personality and therefor you cannot really drive your decisions. On the other hand these decisions are only about stories in your head. Which leads me to the second minus and that is that your decisions have no real ending consequnces. The last one is that there are some missing images which probably were not finished cause of the not enough time but still.

The graphics are really good and I really like it. Rating: O: 3

F: 2

I: 1

T: 3

G: 4

H: 2

Mo: 2

shinmera 2017-08-01 17:44

Well, all the grammatical errors aside, I felt like you were trying to push the theme of the jam too much. The dialogue felt rather forced at times because of that. The art style is alright, though there isn't much to see of that either. It felt weird to have a such a stark disconnect between what she was saying and her expression.

ciderwrath 2017-08-02 08:51

@tomasara413 Yeah, sadly, not having a drawing for every situation was a real disappointment for me, but I will get around to fully finishing the game, so thank you very much for the feedback!

@shinmera Heh yeah, I kinda jumped straight into the dialogue and just quickly went onto the next topic without doing any proofreading, thanks for not going into detail about that! :D And also thanks for your feedback!

ursagames 2017-08-03 09:44

The teddy bear branch is my favorite for sure. I'm really impressed with how much branching dialogue you wrote! It's very humorous too. I do wish the final dialogue chunk varied a bit, but I loved all the different stories. I could see this being really great with some tragic back story hidden between the different paths that players have to piece together. It was still really enjoyable though, great job! And the art was adorable!

zeriver 2017-08-05 10:06

Sweet game with decent writing and interesting text-adventure mechanics. It's impressive how many branches to the story are there and how different can they be. I liked the graphics, pretty stylish and pleasing to eye. In overall pretty neat game.

badly-drawn-rod 2017-08-21 20:12

I never knew how ferocious teddy bears could be. This was a little bit like story time with a toddler, because you just never know what kind of outlandish situations will be thrown at you. Fun!