relick 2016-12-12 16:48
The painting is pretty but I don't really feel like the story was long enough to be engaging.
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD37 → One Room for No One Anymore
By pokepetter
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Graphics | 98 | 3.88 | ||
| Mood | 329 | 3.06 | ||
| Theme | 440 | 3.25 | ||
| Overall | 610 | 2.44 | ||
| Coolness | 1705 | 10 |
The painting is pretty but I don't really feel like the story was long enough to be engaging.
Nice art, and the last lines got to me.
I see what you were going for here and you have a good base, but the story needs to be a little longer than it was. The art is absolutely gorgeous and the beeping of the machine really set the mood it also solidifies the theme as well. Over all you did a good job and even though the story was short it was enjoyable. Well Done!
The art was good. It feels like the opening scene. would love to see more.
Interesting. I really want to know last dot say.
Super nice painting, I actually quite enjoyed the dialogues and was wondering if I was actually going to make it or not... Would have loved a bit of music to go with it, but actually the beeping of the machine just makes the whole atmosphere on its own so it's probably better that way. Good job
Very short... by a very good art style! I hoped to see a little bit more about what happend... The Sound was very loud... it crashed my ears :)
Pretty graphics need game play to match, it was a nice game.
I died. I must be playing it wrong ;)
The way you dismiss the diaglog boxes is not quite clear; you have to click next to them.
... but it's really nice to see an experience like this between all the more 'gamey' games as well :-)
Y'know, this works as a standalone piece, but it could also be the intro to a sort of 'afterlife adventure' (that would be at the very least least slightly less serious, and I don't think that's what you where going for, but still...).
Interesting, there is only one image but that is very good one ! Like others said, the story was way too short to be really engaging. Sadly there is no real game mechanics too. Nice mood too although the beeping was a little bit too annoying.